I LOVE this story absolutely love it I hate what Val had to go through in her past relationship. Henry seems so good for her but of course he has his demons as well I just hope he comes clean about his feelings true feelings for Val can't wait for the next update AMAZING WORK so far.

OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGG henry why?!!!! goodness me, my heart literally hurts for val... I DO NOT WANT HENRY TO HAVE A POV ! Because i think it would change the flow of the story, and i would LOVEEEE to continue to read valerie's pov, considering the new change of scenary. I honestly could not believe Henry could build her self esteem so high and make her feel like a queen so quickly, to only knock it down even further than her bloody ex ! i hope she doesnt give in so easily to his charming personality. i hope somehow her ex comes back into the picture so he can give henry a nice view of how low and damaging his monthly dissapearances are towards valerie, that she would stoop so low, into going right back into what damaged her. I love who she is when she is around henry, there is always hope when love is in the picture. I HOPEEEEEE SHE MAKES HIM CRAWLLLL LMAO im so obsessed with this story ... you are freaken awesome and i hate that you've made me go this crazy over an amazingly great story. i hope you publish because i promise you i will purchase all your books !!! totally team val ! lol soooooo good !! excited for the new chapter! HUGEEE FAN ! 

I changed my mind about a chapter with Henry's POV.  If it's going to change  the flow of the story then continue as it is.  You've given a lot of insight as the story has developed. The homeless issue, his ex fiance cheating on him, his father being a drifter, his fear of being broke,  his wariness of the people that latch onto to them because of his brother's fame, his detaching hismself  from everyone when he works, all of these things about him has been revealed throughout the story.  So we are not completely in the dark about him.  We even know he loves Val, so its up to you.

I'd love to hear from Henry's POV. Maybe that would explain why he does what he does. What Is he's thinking leaving all the time. Why can't he trust her the way be as rd her to trust him. Anywho Love,Love,LOVE this story !! Please would you please go she another update before you leave for Japan ? Pleeeeease :).

How poetic.  All the time  I thought Valrie had the issues, when Henry's issues once revealed showed that she  was the strongerr of the two.  It's something about exhaling, dropping your guard and stepping out on that limb. Unafraid of the possiblity of falling hard for the opportunity to experience what hoped for, you dreamed of , prayed for.  If she never sees him again, she should be happy that for the time she spent with him she was happy, she felt  beautiful and desirable and loved. 

Henry sometimes seems too perfect.  I feel like he has a huge secret, even more than sleeping with the married woman.  I feel like he has dated gorgeous, shallow girls that he knows won't care to a degree and Val is obviously someone who care a great deal.  She is really the antithesis of his recent relationships.  Every time they are out, I notice he always asks her if she is okay with his lifestyle and taking pics etc with fans.  Is ther a specific reason for this?  Things that make me go hmmm.  But overall if they don't get a HEA because I have never seen two people who complement each so well as them. And can I just say, LAWD can I have a Henry?  Do you have a website that we can place an order.  C'mon now, I'm serious. ;)

Oh, ALSO, I want to say:

I know you want to please your readers. But I also know that you need to write from your own heart and mind. You cannot please everyone. Write Valerie the way you see her as her creator. Her insecurities are apart of who she is. Don't feel like you have to change that simply because others find it "annoying" or off putting.

A part of creating art is to confront people with things in life that challenge their ways of thinking and/or hold a mirror up to their own experiences. Some people can't deal with that.

If Valerie is a mirror for you, or others who may be feeling the way she does, it is far more impactful for you to continue to explore her journey the way that you are rather than to change it to please others. Life doesn't work that way.

So, do you. Let Valerie be who she is and change according to your own plans, not someone elses.

Just my two cents.

I'm very glad you updated. I was just re-reading the story for maybe the fifth time, when I got to the bottom of the last chapter, I was so excited to see that there was a new one!

Cannot wait to read the rest.

one of my favorite stories on here!! when will we get an update!? :) 

When can we expect the next update? I literally cant wait lol xx

Intense!

You surprise me and I love that! This story isn't predictable and that makes it rare and wonderful for sure. I can feel her everything she describes is real and raw. I felt for her when Phillip ended up wanting her cousin. I've been there and it sucks. She handled it really well and I believe she's starting to have faith in herself which is amazing. The least he could of done was text her I mean I know he was confused but that doesn't mean scar her even more. He knowd how delicate she and he still chose that path. Well everyone's human and I know he's falling for her just as fast as she's falling for him. So that scene on the fence O_o amazing! Poor Valerie can't get away from Henry when he's determined. That was one hellava apology and one of the best frenzy type sex scenes I've ever read. I can't wait to see what happens!