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Title: Chapter 19

I can't wait to read what's next for these two. 💖 this story!!!

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2014 12:44 am

Title: Chapter 19

I really hope you update soon! This story is so amazing and one of the most developed that I've ever seen! 

Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2014 07:06 pm

Title: Chapter 19

I was about to smack Henry up until the ending...Poor thing. Its starting to make sense.

 

I really hope he opens up and speak with Valerie because he can't keep running away from his problems, just like Peter said he will reach a dead end.

LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: AmarisStarr Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 24 2014 04:35 pm

Title: Chapter 19

Ella and Peter are being really understanding; I'd want to knock Henry around for a while if he ruined my engagement party!  

I'm so hungry for the next chapter; thanks for writing! 

Reviewer: tens Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20 2014 06:27 am

Title: Chapter 19

BEST DAMN STORY EVER!! I am so in love/hate with these two it is not even funny. I can't wait for another chapter.

Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]
Date: April 17 2014 11:00 pm

Title: Chapter 19

Brilliant!

Reviewer: ammalicious Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 17 2014 04:43 am

Title: Chapter 19

CHAPTER 19

THIS WAS THE MOST EMOTIONAL CHAPTER I'VE EVER READ! I LITERALLY CRIED FOR A GOOD 5 MINUTES LMAO 

You cannot imagine the amount of happiness that is coursing through my brain, when i just randomly checked to see if you updated, and you did! I was like OMFGG! you NEVER disappoint your audience and im so sure everyone must be cheering for joy. this chapter topped it off. I was crying for joy when val just ... left him standing there. why? because that's what he deserves. And when he saw her with chase? it made me even more happier. I remember that chapter when he told her he isnt really the jealous type ... BUT HE SURE AS HELL IS ! ahahah he is seriously the possessive jealous type and i LOVE IT . when he started getting angry and telling chase to take his hands off what's his... i died. if that was me, i probably would've fainted... and then jumped his bones hahaha She is so strong to actually remain standing there while he got all angry and was practically telling the world that she was his. It broke my heart reading about her issues when he left and never responded. So yes, he deserved to feel jealous and im so glad she didnt go back to him. 

When he started getting real emotional and screamed that he loved her... that was honestly the best part. he was so raw...so emotional. it was like nothing could stop him from revealing his true emotions for her. 

I hope she doesnt take him back straight away?? i honestly hope she tells him that he's hurt her way too much and then he finds out more about george and just loses it. That part where she wouldnt let him touch her... i was like GIRL POWER! she was so right. i probably would've punched his beautiful face. 

And then that last part. When elle took her away to comfort her. I cried. Just seeing her so broken. And then overhearing henry's convo... it was like WOW this dude ... 

but seriously now that she's walked after him i hope she just makes him settle down and then tells him she doesnt forgive him or anything. he'll go crazy for a while trying to get in contact with her! like i just think she deserves that.

I LOVEEDDDD THIS CHAPTER SO MUCH AND I LOVEEEEE THIS BOOK EVEN MORE. THIS IS HONESTLY MY FAVOURITE. I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I WISH YOU WOULD PUBLISH SO I CAN BECOME YOUR NUMBER ONE FAN AND BUY ALL YOUR BOOKS! LOVED IT SOOOOOO MUCH ! 

Reviewer: Gordana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 17 2014 03:16 am

Title: Chapter 19

Wow.. Henry is a true a*hole and I swear I am not trying to beat up on him, but you are who you are. Some people can change some refuse to. Val going after him set my blood boiling, but thats her character and she does love him, although she hasn't told him yet. I guess no one knows what they would do in her position. I would probably run after him too, once I heard the brokeness in his voice and his struggle. BUT, I would like to think I would not go after the man who ignored all my calls for four weeks or longer and then wanted to explain when he saw me at Peter and Ella's party.

He wrote Valerie off, plain and simple, but Henry, according to Peter does this with everyone, this is who Henry is, so he has a problem anyway. What did he say in the other chapter, "The worst people come in the prettiest packages." I think he said it along those lines. He never lied. So, don't take it personal Val, although that's easier said than done. Please update again soon, this story is awesome!!!

 

 

Reviewer: oHH Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 17 2014 12:02 am

Title: Chapter 19

I have a question, The prologue chapter, did that already happened? I don't remember reading anything close to it in their previous "love making" scene's.

Reviewer: grazylisa Signed [Report This]
Date: April 16 2014 04:32 pm

Title: Chapter 19

One thing I forgot to comment on was Chase.  He came off as a real asshole!  His remarks:

"I'm sorry to say but, dude! Why the fuck did you get all of those tattoos? No offense but it looks stupid."

C'mon now ... I'm just saying, no offense?

 

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 16 2014 03:47 pm

Title: Chapter 19

This is another WOW chapter.  I was so proud for her being strong and having a clear resolve about her future but that went away once Henry dropped the L word.

 

Poor Henry, living a facade and not opening up fully to anyone.

I don't know how Valerie can fix him while trying to right herself. 

 

Congratulations on finally being FEATURED!!

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 16 2014 10:26 am

Title: Chapter 19

Thanks for the update loved it Chase is clueless almost got his butt handed to him by Henry who just goes off then tells everybody that he loves her & she knows it so she's not the only one with trust issues. I'm glad she went after him they need to talk & she needs to hear him out

Reviewer: KVgurl Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 16 2014 09:19 am

Title: Chapter 19

Real good... Michael Jackson =]

 



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Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 16 2014 04:35 am

Title: Chapter 19

OMG SOOOOOO MANY EMOTIONS!!! I can't take it. Great Chapter!! I hope Henry is okay :(

Reviewer: lovelywhitt Signed [Report This]
Date: April 16 2014 02:00 am

Title: Chapter 19

I've really missed this story, but this massive update was well worth the wait. Can't wait to see what happens next.

symph.night

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 16 2014 01:40 am

Title: Chapter 19

This was a really good update but I'm this close to being over Henry. I get it that he has gone through some thing but so has everyone else it called living and he needs to go about getting over it before he loses his girl. Oh I'm so happy val is going to be on. Someone couch soon because she needs to release all that pent up hurt and pain to get on with her life regardless if Henry is in it. I can't believe he really had the gall to bring up what she said to him during sex at a party.  He should have gotten smacked for that. But I still am team Henry and Val. Rant over.

Reviewer: Acdromance Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 16 2014 01:11 am

Title: Chapter 19

Man...I guess I'm like those stereotypical girls in those romantic movies because I would of jumped in Henry's arms when he said he was in love with me lmao, sorry....not sorry. Val is truly traumatized by her last relationship because her being scared of Henry was kinda weird. I would understand if she feared for Chase, who btw is a dick, but being scared of Henry was actually sad. I don't want her to fear him ever because I really do like them together. If I was Valerie  though I would of gave him the business. How he gonna roll up months later talking about "she is his" and no one should touch her. I would of asked him if he was out of his ever loving mind and cussed his ass out. But of course when he professed his love I would of got down and dirty with him that same night. Hopefully he can convince val to be with him again so she will do the same thing lol. Now I'm really excited for the next chapter, please update soon.

Reviewer: RAPTUSMIND Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 16 2014 12:36 am

Title: Chapter 19

Yeah, Val, I would not have chased him. Screw him. It seems Val has a hunger for hurt men and for hurt men to hurt her. *sigh*

 

Great chapter

Reviewer: Genevieve Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2014 10:46 pm

Title: Chapter 19

This literally gives me life! I. Check everyday to see if there is an update! Anyways i really love val and henry but it seems like they are in headed towards being in anabusive relationship. Two messed up ppl can possibly be good for each other?

Pls update soon! Really looking forward to seeing how these two ppl heal and grow! 

Reviewer: Lucy_william Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15 2014 06:54 pm

Title: Chapter 19

I love how it ends now and the flow is much nicer! It was a good decision and I can't wait to see how this all turns out. 

 

Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2014 06:30 pm

Title: Chapter 19

Wow!  So much pain!  I suppose I get why Henry has been trying to protect his heart (though it doesn't me it right). Hopefully Valerie will hear him out, and maybe they can help each other get through what has hurt them so much. Great update!  I'm always happily surprised at the direction to story has moved in. I can tell that you've out a lot of thought into your writing. Very eager to read the next installment. 

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2014 05:56 pm

Title: Chapter 19

First, I want to say I almost screamed at my desk when I saw this update. lol Anyway, I love Henry but I love Val more. It would be great to see them together but Henry must get himself in order. Please keep writing this story. It is great. Every once in a while I will go back and reread previous chapters. Anyway enough fan girling. Great update.

Reviewer: Courtney Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 15 2014 04:52 pm

Title: Chapter 19

Glad you've back. Henry is so damaged, but he needs to get his shot together.  Val deserves better and he needs to prove himself real quick. So happy you updated!! :)

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 15 2014 08:31 am

Title: Chapter 19

This update was definitely worth the wait. I will refrain from talking about the characters because I could go on and on....lol

Reviewer: readwonderfully Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2014 07:55 am

Title: Chapter 19

Girl! Sooo good! Loved it!!

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Date: April 15 2014 06:32 am



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