I AMMM BAWLING GOOD LAWRDS.
This character dev is too good and the bittersweet-ness is crushing my lungs.
good lawrd. Although the cheesiness is there, it's not overbaring in the face of Hen & Vals problems...speaking of which, when is Val gonna confess anything???
I must keep reading.
Reviewer: monsgors Signed
[Report This]Date: January 04 2015 05:33 am
OHMYGOD, COME ON!! I need to know what happens!!!!! I'm frigging dying!
Reviewer: anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 21 2014 02:45 pm
Please, tell me this is nt the end!
[Report This]Date: October 07 2014 05:57 am
Please update soon. I need to know what happens to my babies!!!
Reviewer: skarsgardian Signed [Report This]Date: July 17 2014 10:55 pm
CHAPTER 20
OMFGGGGG THEM FEELLLLLSSSSSSS ARE REALLLLLLL!!!!! GOODNESS ME YOU KILLED ME OVER AND OVER AGAIN!
THIS CHAPTER WAS THE MOST EMOTIONAL ROLLERCOASTER RIDE EVER!
Ok! so Henry... my poor baby poor baby henry :( He literally has the worst father ... i cannot believe the amount of things he's done wrong. Who the fuck fakes cancer for bloody money?!!! a sick asshole that's who. I nearly cried so many times during his trip down memory lane...
When he started begging valerie... i just died. I was like tearing up thinking OMFG i asked for this! AND you delivered! I mean I never wanted her to straight away take him back, because even though he's been through all this shit, she's been through just as much. Her demons are just as bad. I'd dare say worse. That scene ripped me to shreds. Literally. When he was like "...PLEASE" i was like WAHHHHHHHHHH!! but then the other half of me was like YEAH BEG BEG!!!
AND THEN YOU DID A HUGE 360 and valerie started to panic and was the one begging. I didnt exactly want her to be begging for him because i still believe he was in the wrong, BUT that's me being stubborn. I do think it's SHOWED how vulnerable Val is... and it just broke my heart. She still has to come out and tell him about that loser of an ex WHO I HOPE RE-APPEARS INTO THE PICTURE !! PLEASE PLEASE I BEG OF YOU!!! ADDDD SO MUCH MOREE DRAMA LMAO >> anywho as i was saying, im glad she did... and when he said "next time I meet you" i was like mmmhmmm next time you meet her, let's see how much she's changed. PLEASE DONT MAKE THEM MEET YEARS LATER PLEASE PLEASE PLEASEEEEEE!!!
OH pleaseeee more scenes with them!!! and any hot arguments coming up? ;)
Their rawwwwwwww love killlssss meeeeeee.... mostly when you see how obsessed he over her... i hope it shows more in later chapters hahahah yep im into his deep possessive raw style lmfao too amazing. where's my henry at? -_-
I have to say this: I AM SUCH A HUGE FAN !! I HOPE ONE DAY YOU PUBLISH AND SELL 2932947274294729348 SO I CAN BUY LOADS OF YOUR BOOKS. im not even kidding... i cannot explain to you how much i love your work.
BESSSSTTTESTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT EVERRR!!!! I LOVEEE YOUUUUU
Reviewer: Gordana Signed [Report This]Date: July 09 2014 03:29 pm
NOOOOO!
Ok, ok I know they both need to get themselves together, but they better get back together when its all said and done!
More soon please!
Reviewer: Nicci Signed [Report This]Date: July 09 2014 02:14 am
Wow!!! I don't know what else to say.
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed [Report This]Date: July 08 2014 04:24 am
Wow! this was intense. I am rooting for the both of them and I hope that they will both be able to recover from all that pain and make a life together.
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: July 07 2014 02:08 pm
Thank you for updating!! This is a beautiful story
Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed [Report This]Date: July 07 2014 07:43 am
What can I say? Amazingly beautiful.
Reviewer: shadow Signed [Report This]Date: July 07 2014 06:50 am
Great story truly really hits home. I started reading it when you started it long time ago because it felt so close to me I kept not wanting to read it but I couldn't help it. I feel for her I truly do it only gets better with time you don't totally forget just don't think about it so much everyday.
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: July 07 2014 05:30 am
This is some intense shit! I love it!
Reviewer: 1booneyb Signed [Report This]Date: July 07 2014 05:12 am
All I can say is wow.
I hope that they both get the help and guidance that is needed.
[Report This]Date: July 07 2014 03:38 am
I so wanted them to hold hands and say lets' do this, but it wan not to be. These two souls are destined to be together, but their work is cut out for them. I think now that they recognized what they have to do is the first step toward healing.
Our girl broke down in the end, but she was strong and Henry has some serious issues. Why stick with him and not know when this cat will disappear on you?
I am glad she was there for him, but he has to win her trust back and she has to make a life for herself--she has to know she can take care of herself and basically do what she was telling Henry to do.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: July 07 2014 03:38 am
I was so scared for a second. I didn't want her to be swept up in Henry's mess, especially when she still need to find her own inner strength. I was very satisfied with the ending of the chapter. Great job. Can't wait for the next one.
Reviewer: Genevieve Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 07 2014 03:22 am
OMG!!!!I've been waiting for this update!!!! This was awesome. Definitely my fav story and I will sooooo buy it whej you piblish it. Val & Henry are breaking my heart. I hope they find their way back to eachother!!!!
Reviewer: PearlsofWisdom Signed [Report This]Date: July 07 2014 02:07 am
I havw missed this story. However, I am jonsing for a HEA, so please give me one?! Thosw two areboth messed up and I believe that rbe two would good for each other. More please!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 07 2014 01:53 am
Amazing!!!! I cannot wait to read the actual end of the story. This story has so much emotion and strife in it. It's awesomingly (not a word, lol!) good. Again I cannot wait to read more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: WOW!!! Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 07 2014 01:46 am
Wow! That was intense! Another mind blowing chapter. Words can't express it ... Needless to say, I will be purchasing once you're published! Please provide updates on when that happens.
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: July 07 2014 01:14 am