This is full of emotion. Your writing and the feelings it brings out is amazing. I can relate to her and feel her pain. Great chapter.
Reviewer: shadow Signed
[Report This]Date: December 23 2014 01:45 am
YOU AMAZINGGGGG AMAZINGGG PERSON!! IM SO IN LOVE WITH THIS AND I CANNOT WAIT FOR YOU TO PUBLISH!
OK! val's younger sister is so cute. their relationship is adorable, as you can see the love is two sided. Her mum really does irritate me. When she kept talking about george i was like ... please shut up... she is going to go insane lmao her dad... ugh hasnt changed and i honestly wanted him to change but he's so ... work crazed!
oh vals insecurities kill me. it is honestly so sad because in reality, there are SOOOO many people like this. Her insecurities are just... crippling. it's crazy and so sad to hear the story about george THE BLOODY ASSHOLE WHO I HOPE WE MEET!!! I REALLYYY WANT HENRY TO KICK HIS ASS!!!
OHHH HENRRYYYY!! never ceases to amaze me! once again! where is my damn henry in real life?! lmaooo all i want for christmas is henry hahahaha the lines he threw in here were amazing. i would've jumped him instantly and then recalled that i was jealous and upset, which would've led me to running away HAHAHAH i loveeeee how he said he would follow her to the ends of the earth... sooooo romantic!!
I CANNOT WAIT FOR YOUR NEXT UPDATE!! WILL WE MEET THE LOSER?!!!! WILL SHE TAKE HENRY BACK OR WILL SHE PROLONG IT?!! I think she has become MORE guarded than he is. I really dont think he likes her weight loss. I hope everything comes out, or at least the whole george situation comes out so he can finally understand everything that she is going through... and when he learns how deep her insecurities are ... ohhh shits about to go down!! HAHA
seriously though. im SO happy that you updated!! thank you so much!! pleaseeeee dont leave me like this till next year!! pleaseee all i want for christmas is another chapter BUTTTTT i know that authors have lives so please dont feel obliged to do so!! im just major fan girling lmao so really it wouldnt matter how long it takes for the next chapter because i will remain A MASSIVE FANNN!! AND i will just reread the chappiess!! I FCKEN LOVED ITTT!! SO EPIC LIKE YOU
Reviewer: Gordana Signed [Report This]Date: December 21 2014 01:17 pm
I had to reread this chapter, and my heart really goes out to Valerie! To think that her parents put George on such a high pedastle after the pain that she's endured from him. Not only that, but to have her mom suggest that they get back together. I can't imagine not being able to confide in my parents about something like that (I'm assuming she never told them anything about George's true intentions).
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: December 20 2014 08:53 pm
Poor Val. I'm glad she's telling Henry. I want them to be happy.
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed
[Report This]Date: December 20 2014 02:20 pm
This was an awesome and much needed chapter. Your writing is just terrific. Val confiding in Henry is what she really needed. I hope Henry finds George and ...
10!10!10!
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: December 20 2014 06:03 am
Very intense! It explains a lot about why Valerie is in the stated she's in right now. Great update. Keep 'em coming!
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: December 20 2014 05:46 am
Love this chapter, Val spoke her mind to human incubator and opened up to Henry. Val has put on her big girl thongs!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 20 2014 02:05 am
This was such a good chapter 👍😊
Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed [Report This]Date: December 20 2014 01:43 am
I thought the background on Valerie and George's relationship was necessary. In other chapters, you only hinted at it. So it's good to get the full scope. I'm more concerned in seeing where Val and Henry go from here. And I'm glad to see she's controlling her eating disorder urges (which is a HUGE step). Great update and I'll be waiting patiently for the next one.
Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed [Report This]Date: December 20 2014 12:35 am
Jeez, this is heart breaking! I can't believe she's internalized all that and hasn't had someone to share this with and work through it. That was very hard to read, I hope Valerie's able to work through her issues.
Reviewer: Meg Signed [Report This]Date: December 20 2014 12:30 am
Stringing out this George thing is getting kind of old. I understand you peeling away the layers to show how she was damaged so, but enough is enough of the the build up.
Author's Response:
I understand but the only reason I didnt post the next part is because the chapter isnt done and this part was already too long. I will have to complete it and post it when I get some stuff done.
Reviewer: SunnySideDown Signed [Report This]Date: December 19 2014 11:46 pm