I feel bad for Luke because I don't see Cassie "waking up" until Luke is gone and with another woman. She needs to understand her previous love isn't here anymore and it is okay to find love again. Has she been to grief counseling or anything because her grief isn't moving through the stages.Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08 2016 06:57 pm
Both Luke and Cassie are working on my nerves. Cassie more so. I truly hope that there will be some changes soon. Like Luke finally talking to Cassie about how he feels or something like that because I feel like its just dragging now. And Lindsey seems like she will turn out to be a obsessed psycho.Reviewer: me Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 08 2016 09:15 am
First let ne say happy birthday!!!
I don't like Lindsay, she's pushy and intrusive. When is Cassie goong to wake ip and smell the coffee? Luke will soon decide that the hot sex is not enough and mive on to a woman who openly wants him.Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01 2016 04:14 pm
Happy birthday. Thanks for the gifts. 🎂🎂🎂🎉🎉🎉😉Reviewer: iliketoread Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 01 2016 03:58 am
Good stuffReviewer: Russian Sunflower Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 18 2016 01:16 am
Cassie, please hop off the train to stupidville? Dylan is not the man for you, Luke is. Quit playing games with each other and either move towards each other or away from each other.Reviewer: Pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 17 2016 07:18 pm
Not really liking Cassie right now, all she seems to care about is getting her itch scratched not hurting Luke. I would love to see Luke end the arrangement between them And start dating a more attractive woman Right away. Why is she so heartless?Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: January 25 2015 02:33 pm
Well i liked it, Cassie works my last nerve a little less now but Luke is a keeper and deserves a woman not afraid od life and love. I want that Milo character to go down and go down hard. Mybe they can det on tax evasion like they got Al Capone? I am hoping Cassie gets some closer and can truly move on with Luke.Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04 2014 02:17 pm
Yws, you updated your story!! I am doing my happy dance!!! Cassie, I hope that Luke shuts you down because he wants more from you. Luke deserves better than and you know it Cassie! Can't wair to read about Luke' s reaction to her FWB proposition.Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: July 12 2014 06:19 pm
Your story has some very exciting characters and an interesting premise, but it is moving along soooo slowly, it's like watching grass grow.
I know you did this for NaNoWriMo, where it's about putting out a certain volume of words to produce a text that is novel-length. All the same, your story isn't following a traditional plot arch, or even an Anti-plot arch. It feels like a journal, recounting this happened, and then this... which is good, coz that's real life. Fiction is more focused, I feel. There is more constructed conflict.
It's either a lack of conflict, or how you're dividing up your text to post as chapters here. I get the feeling that each chapter should end on a note completely different from the start...
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 01 2014 07:59 pm