About time... I like how it's not too rushed, can't wait for more !
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and sticking with me. My goal is for you to really get to know the characters and hopefully you will love them all as much as I do.
Much Love
Yevette
Reviewer: Anomy Anonymous
[Report This]Date: September 14 2014 03:45 am
@Angelbaby - Yevette has kindly (and FREELY) shared her story with us as readers and all you can do is point of the errors in your comments. If you are so concerned why didn't you PM Yevette so you can proof read her chapters. Yevette, has already mentioned that she is a new writer. Just have some patience and be understanding with her work.
Thank you for this chapter. I love this update looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading. I'm working hard on perfecting my craft. Thanks for the encouragement. I really appreciate it.
I will be updating the next chapter in the next few days. Stay tuned.
Yevette
Reviewer: Amaya Signed [Report This]Date: July 16 2014 02:16 am
Wow! I'm digging this story. I wonder what's going to happen. Paul sounds really cute. I love the names of the sisters. Breezy and Phoenix are cool names. I like.
Author's Response: Reviewer: LuckyMe Anonymous
[Report This]Date: July 10 2014 07:44 am
Love this story ;-)
Jace is such an alpha male which is so sexy.
Yes they're possessive and will get jealous of a small child or elderly lady if they see them getting an second of their 'woman' time.
However when these men love they love hard especially if it's good woman like it sounds like Breezy is . Like most love stories it sounds like a mixture of misunderstanding and miscommunication on both sides.
Plus add to the mix the personal growth and self discovery for both Breezy and Jace = the perfect love story. Which it appears you have Yevette, thank you for sharing your talent.
Looking forward to reading more ;-)
Author's Response:
Thank you soooo much for reading. Aren't Alpha Males just the best? Yes, they are jealous, possessive, and even obsessive of the women that they love. But they love so hard and will do anything for them. But more than that, they will do anything to keep them.
Yeah, we've got a bit of a communication problem going on between these two. But Jace, had better learn to tie up his loose ends or he's gonna wind up losing a lot more. And Breezy is going to have to learn to stop running when things get tough. Although she's not the same girl that left five years ago. Time has changed her and him.
So stay tuned. I will post again this week. Keep the reviews coming. They are great motivation.
Yevette
Reviewer: Amaya Signed
[Report This]Date: June 29 2014 06:03 am
well damn... i'd probably be waiting butt naked on the desk for him... goodness me
LAWDDDYYYY what are you doing ?! do you understand how bad it is for me to sit here longing for a fictional character? dammit if i met jace in real life... i'd bring out my inner devil LMFAOOO be like "well hey there, less talk more action" he'd probably be like wtf... hahahaha
OKKOKKKKK I LOVE BREEEEZZYYY ! she seems so innocent, yet you can see her fierce no bull shit side. I LOVE IT . i honestly hate submissive female characters. AND JACEEEEE OHHH LORDDDD Jace! he seems so ... primal .. so alpha-male like. it makes me go crazy hahaha like he seems like the type to be so possessive and jealous ... yuummmmyyy
but whats better is that she seems like she can put him in his place when the time is right. like the end of the recent chapter, i think he won hahaah only because they both know of the history they have together... i think she has the power in the end !!! power of the vagina !
ahahahhaah
ok ok i'll stop.
loveddddddddddd it
Author's Response:
LOL!!!! You are most awesomely a breath of fresh air. Thank you sooo much for reading my story. Jace is very much a Alpha male and very possessive. He is so sexy and awesome. But fear not, Breezy can most difinitely give him a run for his damn money. Her innocence is equally matched by her strong will.
As the next few chapters progress, you will see who these two really are. Where they come from and what it is that drives them. Jace has made some mistakes and everything that he has done up until this point has been to correct those mistakes.
So stick with me and enjoy the ride. It's gonna be a hot and exciting one.
Your review has made my day!!!
Reviewer: Gordana Signed [Report This]Date: June 19 2014 03:48 pm
You know next week starts Sunday, Just saying :) I am loving the story. By the way is her secet a baby??!!!
Author's Response: Reviewer: Tracy21 Anonymous
[Report This]Date: June 18 2014 12:25 pm
Me Likey....I like the predatory behavior, alpha males are my fav keep it coming!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. Jace is very sexy Alpha, plus he can sing. Stay tuned. Will post again next week.
Reviewer: Kyky2019 Signed [Report This]Date: June 17 2014 04:28 am
This is great so far! I love it!! I'm so curious to know what actually happened between Breezy and her "heartbreak"!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. Please stay tuned. Things are about to get really interesting between Breezy and Jace. I'm going to try to post weekly.
Reviewer: universauhl Signed [Report This]Date: June 03 2014 05:13 am
Oh Man!!!!!! I'm ready! Bring it on! I was gripped immediately! One chapter? I'll have some more, please!
Author's Response: Reviewer: Eureka Vignette Signed
[Report This]Date: May 27 2014 03:28 am
Ohmygooooosh pleeeeeease upload sooon, feeling this all over. Can't wait till bee meets him!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you!! Stay tuned. I plan to upload one day next week.
Reviewer: Anomy Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 22 2014 11:04 pm
Very good!! I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you!! Stay tuned!!!
Reviewer: Alisa Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 22 2014 04:25 am
Sounds interesting!
Author's Response: Reviewer: flikchick Signed
[Report This]Date: May 21 2014 05:57 am
Im hooked. Cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Reviewer: amlaamar Anonymous
[Report This]Date: May 21 2014 05:43 am
Interesting start! Can't wait to see how this story develops.
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[Report This]Date: May 21 2014 05:04 am
This is really good! I look forward to reading more soon! :)
Author's Response: Reviewer: AJ Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 20 2014 09:56 pm
Very good start. I am definitely looking forward to more of this story. I like the names Breezy and Phoenix. I usually will track but not read stories with only one chapter because I'm get disappointed when an author never updates them. But I had to read since it was set in Louisiana, so please continue this story. Thank you for sharing :-)
Author's Response: Reviewer: shadow Signed
[Report This]Date: May 20 2014 09:43 pm
I like this story so please continue. So Breezy was dated a man who had a wife and ran away from everyone else her life when she left Baton Rouge. Why did she feel the need to run? It had to be more than her finding out that she was the side piece.
Author's Response: Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
[Report This]Date: May 20 2014 08:39 pm