WOAH The action continues... onto the next before I write my longer comment
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading. On to the next one LOL!!! See ya then.
Yevette
Reviewer: thincakes Signed [Report This]Date: July 20 2014 05:05 am
OMG!!!!!!! I am sooo hooked. Give it to me(in my Rick James voice)! I'm tying off the tourniquet, SHOOT. ME. UP. moremoremoremoremore.
Author's Response:
LOL!!! Too damn funny!!!! Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks. More coming so that you can get your fix.
Yevette
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous
[Report This]Date: July 12 2014 11:12 pm
I counted 9 mistakes but overall I really enjoyed this chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: angelbaby Signed
[Report This]Date: July 10 2014 04:18 am
Wow....love it
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[Report This]Date: June 30 2014 08:36 pm
I love your story so far. I can tell it's going to be quite a ride!
Author's Response: Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed
[Report This]Date: June 30 2014 06:01 am
CHAPTER 4
OOOOOOOHHHHHH he in troubleeeeee lmaoooo I love Jace and his crazy possessive ass ahahhah he's seriously still crazily in love with her. So passionate. Who wouldn't feel for him? I'd be just as crazy in all honesty. But she deserves the best and I think he's it!
DAMMMMNNN HE HAS AN EX WIFE???!!!
yep. i'd feel the same if I was in Breezy's position. Imagine that- the man who you loved so passionately but had to escape, is standing here trying to once again get back into your life, and then BAM! his "wife" and her PREGNANT self comes walking through the door. I think she handled herself pretty good hahahah i'd be cold as fuck if i were her. She's not a push over in which i loveeee. I hate it when they create weak submissive females. And i love the sort of balance? like yeah he makes her weak but she has the same effect ;)
cant wait for more! so good !!!! go breezy!!! make him go crazyyy lmfao
Author's Response: Reviewer: Gordana Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30 2014 05:02 am
Five years later and our girl is still running? Oh, Breezy please tell me that you're much stronger than that! I mean, you knew or, at the very least, assumed that Jace was still married, yet you still allowed him to kiss you and feel you up. And then you want to act shocked and hurt when said wife shows up?
I freaking love Jace—seriously, I've totally claimed him as being mine—so as a result of that love, I'm convinced that there was a perfectly reasonable explanation as to why he married a pregnant Sara. . .right?. . .Right? On that note, I guess we're not suppose to like Sara? I hope she's not going to be stereotyped as the 'crazy wife/ex-wife', but I'm guessing that she will be. It does, after all, make for good drama, which I totally know you're going to gift us readers with in the most awesomely way possible because you, Yevette Linn, are extremely awesome!
In case you couldn't tell, I love your story! I feel so connected to these characters and to their story, so thank you so much for sharing it with us! :)
Author's Response:
LMAO!!!! We're gonna have to share Jace. I saw him first. LOL!!! Yeah, our Breezy is gonna have to learn to stop running from tough situations and face them head on. She's had it pretty rough emotionally but she's found a way to cope. In the next chapter we're going to get a little more in dept on her back story. Believe me she is no push over. She just has a weakness and mad, combustible chemistry with one hot sexy ass Alpha Male.
Now Sara isn't crazy, CRAZY. She's just a bitch that can't seem to accept a few realities. That when you've had the best its pretty hard to go back to bullshit and of course Jace is the best.
Jace, is no punk and he will not accept anything less than getting whatever he wants at all cost. And what he wants is Breezy.
So stick with me as we find out how he handles Sara and what its going to take to get a very pissed off Breezy to talk to him, not to mention the fact that his best friend, Paul, already threatened him. So it's gonna be pretty tough for poor Jace to figure this out.
Thanks for reading. Your reviews always make my day. And on a side note, I am sooooo loving ALPHA!!!
Reviewer: Twelve20One Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 29 2014 08:56 pm
Oh hot damn, I'm loving the complex plot of this story.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. Please stay tuned things are just about to heat up. Will post again this week.
Reviewer: Anomy Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 29 2014 03:22 am
What on earth happened here???
Author's Response:
LOL!!! Hang on. We're about to find out what the deal is with Jace and his crazy ex wife.
Thanks for reading and keep the reviews coming. I really appreciate them.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: June 29 2014 01:26 am
Run, Breezy, Run!! Loving your story...wonder how low Sara and Jace are going to feel knowing their actions help keep him from his kid. What did Sara mean by ...'we've been here before" nad Breezy comment on this not happening for a third time? Jace better not ba the daddy to Sara's baby.
Author's Response:
You almost got me. LOL!!!! But no spoilers. I love a reader that pays attention detail. Thanks for reading. Stay tuned. I will post again next week.
Yevette
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: June 29 2014 12:35 am
Yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeessssssssss!! Love it please continue! I have no clue what went down between this trio? Did she stumble upon the pair when they were younger? Was Breezy the other woman? So many question!
Author's Response:
More back story to come in the next chapter. But Jace has his work cut out for him.
Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]Date: June 29 2014 12:14 am
He married Sara because she was pregnant did he? I bet the baby was not Jace's. That dirty ho zdara!
Author's Response:
LMAO!!! You have just made my day but there will be no spoilers. LOL!! You'll just have to stick with me to find out what's up with this little trio.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: June 29 2014 12:13 am
Sara is cray cray and still won't leave Jace alone. Why is Sara still harassing Jace? Who's devil spawn is she carrying? It's only devil spawn because she's gestating the spawnage. She is going to listen to another word that Jace says and she won't let him lay one finger on her either. Jace needs to put TRO on Sara fast! Please update soon.
Author's Response:
Yes indeed Sara is a little touched and obsessed with Jace. But when you've had the best its hard to accept anything else. Even when you're crazy. LOL!!
Thanks so much for reading. Stay tuned. Will update again next week.
Yevette
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: June 28 2014 11:58 pm
Well dang, it just got real.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. It has indeed gotten real. But we're just getting started. So hang in there with me. I'm posting weekly.
Reviewer: SandyBrownEyes Signed [Report This]Date: June 28 2014 10:27 pm
OMG so glad I decided to read this story!! Excellent start up and great delivery can't wait to read more!!
Author's Response:
Thank you sooo much for reading. Will post again next week so stat tuned.
Reviewer: kiki729 Signed [Report This]Date: June 28 2014 10:14 pm
All I can say is OMG, and it's to short
Author's Response:
LOL!!! I'm working as fast as I can. Thank you for reading. Stick with me and the OMG moments will continue. Stay tuned. Will post again next week.
Reviewer: Tracy21 Anonymous
[Report This]Date: June 28 2014 10:05 pm
O Shit!! Jace better take care of his business. Girl you have me soo hooked on this story. As soon as I saw it was up I stopped everything to read it . Awesome job! Ready for the next!!
Author's Response:
Indeed!!! This was a screw up of epic proportions on his side. But if the truth be told, she should have asked if he was still married instead of letting him feel her up. LOL!!! But it is so hard to resist the sexiness that is Jace.
Thankyou soooo much for reading and stay tuned. Will update next week.
Reviewer: shadow Signed [Report This]Date: June 28 2014 10:01 pm