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Title: Secret and Lies

Poor Sally...she needs Storm...glad to see an update...

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 07 2017 02:54 pm

Title: Secret and Lies

COMEEEEE OOONNNNN YOU HAVE TO GIE US MORE THIS KEEPS GETTING BETTER AND BETTER

Reviewer: fanfictionfantasy Signed [Report This]
Date: October 12 2017 06:38 pm

Title: Secret and Lies

I been following this story; I'm thinking I missed something due to the time between updates. Was Salina unaware she was not a virgin when she first had sex? She is in the medical field and never looked at her own medical records? The person she is; with her need to know everything about herself; I'm thinking she would have read them. Was the man with Churn one of her rapists? Her subconcious obviously remembers him. What is the time frame from rape to leaving the hospital after the coma, did she bare a child by her rapist? Also; what is to stop her from being killed now that the other players know they are not going to get any additional monies from her father's estate? There is no more incentive to keep her alive, unless there is a child to inherit.  in fact it makes more sense to kill her, use her land for nefarious purposes and by the time anyone figures out the port is being used they would have made more than enough money to just abandon the port. Sorry for the questions but I feel as if I am lost or maybe I'm confusing this story with another. 

Reviewer: Stories Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 11 2017 04:28 am

Title: Secret and Lies

You know it's true love... when they put your needs and your safety before their own. They deserve each other. Great update honey!

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 11 2017 04:00 am

Title: Secret and Lies

This is getting so complicated!

Reviewer: Janez91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2017 05:09 pm

Title: Secret and Lies

They are in love

Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2017 06:03 am

Title: Secret and Lies

Salina doesn't know that she probably can't have kids, I hope that there is still a small percentage of a chance.  She and Storm deserve to have a family.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2017 02:10 am



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