I don't typically review but I have to say I'm not really a fish person the only fish I like is salmon but girl these descriptions of this seafood got me wanting to try some lobster. Anyways good chapter I'm so rooting for Storm and I'm extremely curious about Sally.
Reviewer: NiqueMo94 Signed [Report This]Date: May 05 2015 11:48 pm
I don't typically review but I have to say I'm not really a fish person the only fish I like is salmon but girl these descriptions of this seafood got me wanting to try some lobster. Anyways good chapter I'm so rooting for Storm and I'm extremely curious about Sally.
Reviewer: NiqueMo94 Signed [Report This]Date: May 05 2015 11:48 pm
Thank you for updating! ! Sally why are so close off? You haven't opened up about aspect of your life except for school. Storm isn't letting you go, just let go and allow him to love you. He his capable of protecting you.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: May 05 2015 12:09 pm
I like Storm, but back when he was pissed that Sally left him the morning after, that pissed me off. She was right he had done that before on numerous occassions. Okay fine. They had an argument and went their separate ways for a minute. They were not in a relationship, I know, but Storm slept with five women and possibly more, but still can't get Sally off his mind. WTF!! Yes, Sally kissed whoever she was with. Okay I get that too, but Sally was not off effin everything with legs and to make it okay say, 'I had to think of Sally to finish.' Would he care if Sally slept with six men and say she only did it because she was trying to chase that feeling with him away. I'll answer that, YES he would care. But the only reason this is not an issue is because Sally will never know. Yeah, he had better showed her those STD free papers. I know them not being together is the important part, but if they were together and they argued would he just go on a f*ckin spee? The story has progressed since then, but Storm made me sick in that chapter. This is a great story, but Storm gets on my nerves.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 27 2015 02:27 am
Sally is Sooooooooooo:::quick breath:::oooooooo frustrating. Storm has the patience of Job.
Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed [Report This]Date: April 03 2015 06:49 am
Sally is a mystery. I hope the readers get to learn more about her soon.
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]Date: April 02 2015 11:49 pm
Happy Resurrection day to youl. Why is Sally so stupid? Team Storm!!!!Love Mike too! Sally quit fighting storm!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 02 2015 08:51 pm
Loved it. I love this story so much! Do you have any characters in mind for Storm and Sally?
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 01 2015 11:20 pm
Really love this story...there's something about Storm and Sally that pulls me into their story...good job
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]Date: April 01 2015 06:45 pm
I really wish that Sally would tell Storm about her stalker. He is an ADA and is friends with a cop so he really can help her. Rhonda is such a dumb ho, and is not really your friend Sally. Cut her loose! Thank you for the update!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 01 2015 12:03 pm
Not sure who's copying who.. biut I literally just read this same story on literotica.com in the interracial love category with the same story title by an author who goes by the pen name honeyrider1517. I just wanted to bring this to your attention. It looks as though you started your story back in 2011 and the fraud started theirs in 2014. I just thought you should be aware that some lame is bootlegging your ideas.
Reviewer: Calikid44 Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 13 2015 02:26 am
Wonder y sally needs a car all of a sudden...she can be very secretive and frustrating sometimes how she keeps running away.. Will sally become pregnant that'll get them closer to each other..
Reviewer: Lennie Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 09 2015 04:34 am
About time!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 09 2015 01:58 am
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Sure no STD but a baby's not a problem?
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]Date: March 08 2015 11:22 pm
I can't wait for Rhonda to go down in flames. Why is Sally still treating Storm like a bald headed step child? Sally frustrates me!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: March 08 2015 10:55 pm
Good story. You've got mystery and romance with intrigue between two very different characters. You've drawn me into their story. Good job.
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]Date: March 01 2015 03:38 am
I hate Devora and I would appreciate a unhappy and brutal ending for that trallop! So good!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: February 28 2015 11:39 pm
I'm glad she's opening up to him. He's definitely an Aplha male!! lol. Which is good and probably what she needs in her life, but he needs to listen to her and respect her too. His mother is gonna be a handful, but I think he'll handle her easily. Good update!!
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed [Report This]Date: February 28 2015 09:29 pm
Well now thats was....interesting a very tame description but wowza
Reviewer: LetMeDream Signed [Report This]Date: February 26 2015 02:16 pm
Well now thats was....interesting a very tame description but wowza
Reviewer: LetMeDream Signed [Report This]Date: February 26 2015 02:16 pm
Go #Stally break down those walls
Reviewer: LetMeDream Signed [Report This]Date: February 26 2015 01:52 pm
Raaaaae #TeamJamaica you mek mi whah fi go get some fish and bammy right now. Im biased because i loved this chapter
Reviewer: LetMeDream Signed [Report This]Date: February 26 2015 01:22 pm
A snake that just....wrong mr.man
Reviewer: LetMeDream Signed [Report This]Date: February 26 2015 12:36 pm
This is an intriguing story. Loving it.
Reviewer: Karen Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 18 2015 01:36 am
Loved the update!!! I would have lmao if Sally had mustered up the strength to put her dress back on and ask that Storm unlock the the bedroom door so she could go home because she had work and/or school the next day and on the way out, she told him thanks for the good time. I would have loved to see his FACE, lol!! I do understand the chemistry is off the charts between these two, but Storm just gets on my nerves sometime. Everything they did was consentual, but Storm takes being cocky and controlling to a new level. Sally is messing with his emotions, GOOD, and he is still trying to get in control of them. I hope he doesn't; he cannot control everything. More please!!
Reviewer: J Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 17 2015 05:48 pm