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Title: Chapter 17

Contrary to what other reviewers are saying about Charlie, I do get where she's coming from, she's been absent and it seems like she used money as a way to cushion the blow of her leaving and it seems like she's still using money as a way to make up for her not being completely mentally there although she is physically (that's my take on it anyway, even though I think she's doing great but she doesn't seem to think so). But I think she's doing too much, she needs to take a step back and realise she's prefectly fine. This story has layers. I think Alec might be partly at fault too, I remember a couple of chapters ago, was it Charlie's foster parents thought Alec pushed the relationship when they were teenagers before Charlie was ready - sexually/emotionally. I think history slightly repaeated itself there like in the club and living arrangements, of course Alec wants his wife back and he loves her but maybe Charlie would have been better off living close by instead of living with them. Baby steps. I mean Charlie thought they were going to get divorced on the same day Alec came onto her in the club. I think they're great for each other and they're great parents but communication is key especially on Charlie's end, she's trying to be super mom and that's just not possible.

Can't wait to read the convo between Alec and Sean. Great chap and can't wait to read the next one.

Reviewer: carmen90 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03 2016 10:09 am

Title: Chapter 17

Instead of at least starting to like Charlie as the story progress, its like I like her even less. I feel sorry for Alec sometimes and wonders why he loves Charlie so much since it doesn't seem that she respects him at all. She still going to work for Sean knowing Alexs feelings about it but its like she doesn't care at all about that. Don't let me even start about the way she is raising their kids. She and Alec is supposed to be a team when it comes to the upbringing of their child. Instead when Alec says "no" she contradicts him amd say yes to Olli whitout even discussing it with Alec first. Parenting is not supposed to be like that. She seriously need to stop making decision about her sons welfare without talking to Alec about it. They are in a marriage. Were is the respect?? I'm also still waiting on her being honest with Alec about the affair she had with Pier. She may have been sick and left her family according to her because she wanted better for them. But she was still well enough to travel with a other man over the world. I'm not trying to judge her. But her logic sometimes just doesn't make sence to me. Its sad that I even like Vanessa more the her.

Reviewer: Msroos Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03 2016 06:17 am

Title: Chapter 17

I love this couple! slowly but surely Charlie will forgive herself. Our girl Charlie has to stop making decisions on her own about the welfare of their children, she's in a marriage. There's no you and there's no I, there should only be we or us. I'm hopeful she would get the picture. I like the fact that Alec wants to meet Sean, they should've met long ago. Maybe this meeting will put Alec's fears and questions to bed or maybe it will show Sean's true colors and true intentions. I see they learned their lesson about foreplay all willy-nilly around the house, without walls, doors , alarms or locks it was a x-rated peep show going on. Thanks for this wonderful update K

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03 2016 01:00 am

Title: Chapter 17

Kudos on the chapters

Reviewer: minxie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03 2016 12:45 am

Title: Chapter 17

Girl. This needs to be published tomorrow. I absolutely love the characters and how realistic they are. If you publish this, I'm  totally purchasing it. 

You're one of the shining stars on this site. And you don't bog your story down with unnecessary drama. 

Reviewer: Dances_With_Pen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03 2016 12:16 am

Title: Chapter 17

I love how they're moving along after everything.  Olly is getting better and I think Jamie is more accepting of Charlie.  Great chapter!

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 02 2016 11:58 pm

Title: Chapter 17

Charlie was wrong for bring the the independent school and telling the boy he could before talking to Alec.  I can't wait to read about Alec's discussion with that punts Sean.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 02 2016 11:08 pm

Title: Chapter 17

I really enjoy the way you are telling this story.  Thank you!

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 02 2016 07:44 pm

Title: Chapter 17

I know this story has to end but I hill be sad when it does. You have the ability to bring so much life to you our characters and the story you tell. Ms. Carr you are truly a good author and I look forward to reading your stories. I have been checking chambers for update on lovers dance 2 I also been checking Amazon to see if it has been release. I hope you are planning to release lovers dance 2 it is one of my favorite books need more of Matt and Poppet. I thank you for another good chapter on this story Charlie and Alec are great and I just love the kids Ollie and Jamie.

Reviewer: black girl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 02 2016 07:16 pm

Title: Chapter 17

Same page? Ha! I doubt it. She doesn't seem to have learned anything. She's still trying to be the FUN parent. I wanted to throttle her in this chapter. I'm amazed at how Alec was able to handle it without going the F off, 'cause I was screaming at my screen. I hope she stops with the pity. You screwed up. Suck it up. It's draining trying to reassure her at every turn. Plus, Ols is still recuperating. How can they take on yet another stress inducing project. THINK, Charlie and stop trying to give the boys EVERYTHING that you THINK they WANT.

Really good update, Chica. Normal stuff causing realistic drama. Fantastic.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 02 2016 05:21 pm

Title: Chapter 16

Thanks for the update! I'm wondering about the relationship between Sean and Charlie, she's working for him again but just how much will be revealed about their past? 



Author's Response:

Hi AnnieNathanson,

Thanks for the review and there will probably be a little more explanation of Charlie's relationship with Sean in the last chapter. 

 

K.

Reviewer: AnnieNathanson Signed [Report This]
Date: July 31 2016 10:12 pm

Title: Chapter 16

I really ejoyed readying your story, cant wait for the update



Author's Response:

Hi Minxie,

Glad to hear you're enjoying the story. Thanks for reading and I hope you like the upcoming chapter.

 

K.

Reviewer: minxie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 31 2016 06:00 pm

Title: Chapter 16

Girl... that was funny!! That why our bebroom is on the other side of the house. Charlie needs to listen to Alec's concerns and not treat him as if his reasons are not valid. I hope there is no trouble brewing. Plus that was to much money to give a kid, I bet he would've like a gift that came from the heart more. Thanks for this update!!



Author's Response:

Hi Jacqua43, you're not taking any chances with the location of your bedroom! Good stuff. Glad you're still enjoying the story and Charlie is trying to give the boys what she never had when growing up. It's not ideal, but it's a difficult thing to break away from in her situation. Thanks for reading and take care.

 

K. 

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 31 2016 03:17 pm

Title: Chapter 16

I love the part where Jamie said he saw his daddy tickling his mom and he saw his bum that he should wear pajamas so he wouldn't get cold lol so funny. Once again another great chapter, I really enjoy this family. Thank you for another good read!



Author's Response:

Hi Blackgirl, thanks for reading and reviewing. Jamie is such a lovely character to write! Take care.

 

K.

Reviewer: black girl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2016 05:34 pm

Title: Chapter 16

Charlie needs to cut ties with this Sean dude forever!!!



Author's Response:

Hi AmmaWem, thanks for reading and reviewing. What about the money though? Living down South is way expensive! ;)

 

K.

Reviewer: AmmaWem Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 29 2016 11:58 pm

Title: Chapter 16

I adore his story! Olly's so strong ! 



Author's Response:

Hi Jael3205, so happy to hear you're enjoying the story.

 

K.

Reviewer: jael3205 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 29 2016 08:51 pm

Title: Chapter 16

Yes! You're back! That "Oops!" Moment had me dying of laughter. I'm so glad Olly is recovering (I cannot deal with the thought of a child being sick, it's just too sad). Charlie, Charlie, Charlie, I don't like her blatant disregard of Alec's feeling about that Sean dude. They should communicate and compromise about that Sean (and Alec's ex) situation because I feel like there's going to be repercussions from the lack of clarity between them.

Thank you for updating.



Author's Response:

Hey Puccapurple, it was funny but cringe! A proper freak out moment as a parent :) Hopefully Charlie and Alec will smooth out their problems and get back to 'us' instead of 'you and me'. Thanks for reading.

 

K.

Reviewer: Puccapurple Signed [Report This]
Date: July 29 2016 08:39 pm

Title: Chapter 16

Yes! You're back! That "Oops!" Moment had me dying of laughter. I'm so glad Olly is recovering (I cannot deal with the thought of a child being sick, it's just too sad). Charlie, Charlie, Charlie, I don't like her blatant disregard of Alec's feeling about that Sean dude. They should communicate and compromise about that Sean (and Alec's ex) situation because I feel like there's going to be repercussions from the lack of clarity between them.

Thank you for updating.

Reviewer: Puccapurple Signed [Report This]
Date: July 29 2016 08:39 pm

Title: Chapter 16

Fantastic update



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

 

K.

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 29 2016 06:39 pm

Title: Chapter 16

She's still stupid, I see.  She needs to understand that staying away was her decision but Sean assistance allowed her flourish. Charlie irks me!



Author's Response:

Yes, she's still a bit silly. Not too long until the end though, so she'll get better :)

 

K. 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 29 2016 04:04 pm

Title: Chapter 16

I think Charlie is making a mistake and she is still feeling guilty for deserting her family during her depression.  Alec is not a man that wants his woman to financially take care of them and this is how he will see her actions---and Charlie should know this.  

Charlie should have let the call go to voicemail, especially during the party.  I am beginning to think she is not the smartest bulb in the box.  

It is not her responsiblity to set her family up for life, and her continued connection to Sean and disregard for Alec feelings toward Sean, may be just the welcome mat Vanessa needs.   



Author's Response:

Hi Penelope, 

Charlie is unfortunately still battling with her guilt, something I believe she will learn to live with and try to avoid it negatively impacting her behaviour. She could have let it go to voicemail, but the cash though! It's darned expensive living in the South! Thanks for reading and reviewing.

 

K.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 29 2016 03:49 pm

Title: Chapter 16

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Author's Response:

:) Hope you like the next chapter also.

 

K.

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 29 2016 03:40 pm

Title: Chapter 15

Welcome back!!! I has miss your story, this update is very good



Author's Response:

Hi Blackgirl, thanks for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed these two chapters.

 

K.

Reviewer: black girl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 29 2016 03:24 pm

Title: Chapter 14

Charlie is a better woman than I. Lord knows that both Alec and Vanessa both would be laid up in the ICU down the hall from Olly if I was her when he finally dragged his ass into that hospital. The nerve... 😶



Author's Response:

Oh CaliKid44, that made me cackle! Great stuff!

 

K.

Reviewer: CaliKid44 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2016 09:54 pm

Title: Chapter 14

wonderful update



Author's Response:

Thank you, Bredreaway.

 

K.

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2016 12:07 pm



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