Yay! Glad to see a new chapter. Can't wait for the next!
Reviewer: Jordy Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 11 2018 06:52 pm
Updste?
Author's Response:
Yes
Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed [Report This]Date: January 31 2018 01:00 am
Just waiting around for this wonderful story to be updated. Don't mind me. LOL
Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]Date: January 14 2018 07:13 pm
This story is scrumptious!!! I am enjoying the discovery of Mel and Eli's relationship!
Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]Date: June 26 2017 01:28 am
Hmmm, I wonder who the text is from! ?🤔
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: June 21 2017 07:25 am
Though interesting, the story seems disjointed and doesn't flow well...is Emiliy hesistant because of her history with Elijah or does she want him...this chaptert she's kissing him and in the next she doesn't know if she wants him...definitely interesting but strive for better clarity...
Author's Response:
You are right. *sigh* I'm not doing justice to this story because I'm so distracted with other things.
It does feel bunched and put together.
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]Date: June 20 2017 06:28 pm
So Elijah has a child out there somewhere. That unknown number is Emily I bet. Thanks for the update honey.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: June 20 2017 05:39 pm
Hey you have to get in where you fit in... and Elijah want in and so do Emily. Great new story!
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: June 19 2017 04:40 pm
He must be the panty whisperer because it's seems pretty easy for him to break her down! lol
Reviewer: CrimsonBlaze Signed [Report This]Date: June 13 2017 11:52 pm
I'm starting to blame these stories for my unrealistic expectations of men.
Reviewer: intheroar Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 11 2017 09:39 pm
Given her mood and the feelings he generally evokes in her at this point, why the hell did she kiss him?!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: June 10 2017 09:58 pm
This is going to be a very interesting tale.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: June 10 2017 05:06 am
Oooh saucy!
Reviewer: chatty504 Signed [Report This]Date: June 09 2017 01:50 pm
WELL DAMN.
DAMN DAMN DAMN
YUMMYYYY.
im loving how fierce she is! She doesn't take no shit! And he obviously has been in love with her for years. The pairing is amazing. That last bit was so hot. I'm soooo excited for more! Make him work for you girl!
Loved it!
Reviewer: Gordana Signed [Report This]Date: June 09 2017 01:05 pm
Very good! I can't wait for more :)
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]Date: June 09 2017 03:47 am
I actually feel sorry for both of them.
Reviewer: 1nadali Signed [Report This]Date: June 09 2017 01:19 am
Elijah has feelings for Emily but will she forgive him?
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: June 09 2017 12:47 am
YOU SUCK! And by that I mean, I want more. This is so good! I like the back and forth between them and the way you've weaved in the backstory.
Reviewer: Presh Signed [Report This]Date: June 09 2017 12:27 am
She's fighting her feelings from him real hard ( not )😉 It's about to get hot up in that car💏🔥
Reviewer: Tre Signed [Report This]Date: June 09 2017 12:08 am
Ok that last line, what he did. GAT DAMN
Reviewer: Lisa Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 08 2017 01:25 pm
This story is going to be so good!!!!!
Reviewer: brookedoe Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08 2017 12:10 pm
Why get angry after the deed is done...she wasn't forced...when he told her he was in love with her, why not confront him then...girl's got issues...interesting start...
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]Date: June 07 2017 03:05 am
This sounds so interesting, I can't wait for more chapters.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 06 2017 06:14 am
Love it already
Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed [Report This]Date: June 06 2017 03:06 am