Reviews For Charlene's Diary
Title: Chapter 15-Going to the Chapel

I enjoyed this story. I am a hopeless romantic that loves a happy ending. Nice

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2021 07:18 pm

Title: Chapter 15-Going to the Chapel

Hilarious!!! Pavel will keep his promise after this 

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Date: June 21 2021 10:58 am

Title: Chapter 14- The Marriage Counselors

Nice update

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Date: May 15 2021 10:35 am

Title: Chapter 14- The Marriage Counselors

Thank you for the update. It does explain her behaviour. It truly is unsettling to realise that you were holding on to a  past destructive relationship whilst in another, as well as realising one was being held to impossible standards because of a past destructive relationship. I hope that she and Sulu can forward in their relationship.

P.S. I don't think Pavel really meant any harm. I think he just hasn't accepted the reality that Sulu has matured and isn't the same man he was when they had their adventures.

 

Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 14 2021 02:28 pm

Title: Chapter 14- The Marriage Counselors

Progress!!!!  Communication leads to progress.  Char, NY had already told you about yourself and Karu has too so please keep it together. 

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Date: May 14 2021 10:23 am

Title: Chapter 13-Chekov's Mission part 5

Those hoes was a whole fruit basket wasn't they不不 Apple, Cherry and Orange got the juice beat out of them不不 and Charlene is not mad she's hurt...there's a difference. She should let Karu sweat it out a little longer 不不 Nice update

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Date: May 03 2021 08:40 pm

Title: Chapter 13-Chekov's Mission part 5

The beat down was awesome, Char talk to Karu please

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Date: May 03 2021 11:03 am

Title: Chapter 13-Chekov's Mission part 5

Thank you for the update. I personally don't see why there needed to be a fight in the first place. Couldn't Charlene just pull Sulu away from the party and ask for an explanation, did it need to turn into an all out brawl? Spock's disappointment in Nyota is understandable and justifiable. Their behaviour wasn't just tasteless and uncalled for, but it drew unnecessary attention to their superiors and cost them all.

Sulu needs new mates and Uhara needs to understand helping a friend does not mean you have to roll around in the trash with them.

Can't wait for the next update.  Have a wonderful week.



Author's Response:

LOL Thank you for your review, I have sort of a cavewoman mentality that a woman should fight over her man. It demonstrate seriousness of the relationship and set boundaries. "Baby don't go there." type mode. Plus it is made up with humor and part  reality. I wanted to show comradie with shipmates 'I got your back scenerio.' I listed episodes where that happened in the show. Take a look! Did you read Repercussions? I wanted Uhura as a strong type woman that is not a push over and she's not. She's smart and capable of handling herself "mirror, mirror" watch that episode. Well thanks again and wait until the next chapter it explains alot. 

Uhura the 9th  : 0 )

Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 02 2021 07:39 pm

Title: Chapter 12-Chekov's Mission part 4

Wipe the floor with them hooked Char!!

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Date: April 27 2021 01:37 am

Title: Chapter 12-Chekov's Mission part 4

The ending though 不不不 Was Charlene kicking Karu butt or Cherry and Apple Blossoms butt!!不不不 Nice update

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Date: April 26 2021 11:21 am

Title: Chapter 11-Chekov's Mission part 3

Charlene, Nyota, Eve and Tina should swap places with the trollops and give the guys a show their eyes won't believe Nice update

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Date: April 13 2021 01:10 pm

Title: Chapter 11-Chekov's Mission part 3

It's about to be on and popping.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 13 2021 12:20 am

Title: Chapter 11-Chekov's Mission part 3

Thank you for the update.

Somebody's going to get it, lol. I'm liking Sulu and Char, fingers crossed that everything goes as planned.

You're a great writer, keep it coming.

Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 12 2021 04:04 am

Title: Chapter 10-Chekov's Mission part 2

Shit is about to hit the fan.

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Date: April 08 2021 12:28 am

Title: Chapter 10-Chekov's Mission part 2

I hope Spock get knowledge of the freaky party too Nice update

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Date: April 07 2021 09:02 pm

Title: Chapter 9-Chekov's Mission part 1

Nice update

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Date: February 16 2021 06:52 pm

Title: Chapter 9-Chekov's Mission part 1

Janice woman'd up and apologize.

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Date: February 12 2021 03:35 am

Title: Chapter 8-The Return of JR part 4

Nice update

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Date: December 02 2020 01:29 pm

Title: Chapter 7-The Return of JR part 3

Nice read.  Thnx.

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Date: September 04 2020 02:08 am

Title: Chapter 6-The Return of JR part 2

This woman will not stop until Hikaru put her in check. This female don't care about another woman.Nice update

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Date: July 09 2020 12:43 am

Title: Chapter 6-The Return of JR part 2

Jsnice needs her ass kicked to really get the point.

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Date: July 08 2020 10:20 pm

Title: Chapter 5-The Return of JR-part 1

Janice needs her ass whooped!!

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Date: June 23 2020 03:12 pm

Title: Chapter 5-The Return of JR-part 1

Janice gonna get those hands(Charlene's) if she don't step off‘ but it's up to Hikaru to put her in check. Nice update

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Date: June 23 2020 01:28 pm

Title: Chapter 4-All in the Family

You are right... There's nothing like family

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Date: June 12 2020 03:21 pm

Title: Chapter 4-All in the Family

Great update!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 08 2020 04:48 pm



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