I love this story so much please don't abandon it :( <3 !
Reviewer: Alexis208 Signed [Report This]Date: March 17 2021 08:16 pm
WOWWW OK YOU REALLY WANTED TO HURT ME THIS CHAPTER ππ
first things first- thank you so much for updating! I've been checking daily hahahaha
second thing - FUCK THAT EX OF HERS! IM SO SO SO GLAD SHE BEAT HIS ASS AND HANDED IT TO HIM ON A PLATE! How dare he think he can put his hands on her and have no repercussions?! I'm so glad our girl can defend herself.
Third thing- ... Look ... you know damn well I'm invested in this heartbreakingyetneedmoreinfo love story between our main gal and Gunnar. Why the hell does he have another woman?! Why did he think she wouldn't find out?
Yes - they're not together BUTTTT I honestly agreed with her and I'm so sad because I don't know how he's going to fix this.
“Well, Detective Brock. You’ve managed to not only be my first and only love, but you also managed to truly break my heart more than Montell did tonight"
- that part? Stabbed me. HE BROKE HER HEART ππππ PLEASE I NEED TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! I know damn well he loves her BUT I don't know how she'd ever listen to him from here. She's now going to ignore/ghost him at all avenues (and my petty ass agrees with her... make him cry) and he'll be unsure on the next steps.
From what I've read- they usually just get back into the swing again and pick up, remain in love- BUT Gunnar now has someone else and that's changed the route. Our main girl is exactly that - A MAIN woman, no side chick.
THE FACT THAT SHE CONNECTED THE DOTS? Yeah Gunnar should've told her ... that just broke me. Her ex is in deep shit and now she's thinking the man she actually loves was using her?
Yeah good luck Gunnar ... I'm rooting for you but right now petty is best π‘π hahaha
LOVED the update and I'm soooo excited for more!!
P.S I LOVEEEEEEE THIRDSTORY and that is my favourite song!! Ohhh the feels
Author's Response:
This review though... π I kid you not, but this chapter was already revised and completed when I had the last chapter uploaded. It took me so long because I was nervous about posting something so intense. I'm truly in a new territory. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Expect the next chapter really soon! Also, the very first time I heard Thirdstory I immediately downloaded their album, and I haven't regretted it yet! Every character in this story will have their day. Thank for reading. I truly appreciate your enthusiasm! π₯°
Reviewer: Gordana Signed [Report This]Date: March 16 2021 12:35 pm
I loved this chapter β€ She stood up for herself and kicked that thing *ssππ I bet he won't touch another woman again ππ I'm confused about Gunnarπ why is he so secretive about Alexandria? Was he playing Sophia for information on that turd? Nice update. I can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Yes! Montell had a wake up call for real! π Gunnar is definitely on one. But we'll find out everything in time. I'm so glad you enjoyed what you read. This chapter definitely challenged me. I hope that what I continue to add to this story continues to add to your interest. Thanks for reading. I appreciate it! π₯°
Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]Date: March 16 2021 10:31 am
Montell.....ughh!! Thats just sad!
Those little girls are so smart!
Well, she got Gunnar told. Maybe now he'll tell her something!
Nice!
Author's Response:
Agreed on three parts. This chapter was heavy, but it definitely revealed ablot more about Sophia's life. Thanks for reading and reviewing. It's always appreciated. π₯°
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: March 16 2021 04:41 am