This story is amzing so far and the characters are fleshed out so beautifully and feel very real. it's truly a tough thing to navigate seeing the love of your life not recognize you...I am so excited to continue reading.Reviewer: shiny0612 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 03 2023 12:42 am
Ya know, Ayana's father really needs to mind his own business. Its ok to be a concerned parent, but this isn't exactly that. Not all of it at least. He has a deep hatred of Jason. And not sure where Janice stands, either; even though she's a bit more open to him. Also, Janice said they didn't really know about Ayana's life there because, if I remember, they were frozen out. You get tired of being in the middle of things all the time. Lots of things are going to come out here in due time.
Nice!Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: November 16 2021 02:08 am
Wish she would start having flashbacks or somethingReviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 15 2021 03:02 am
Ok, all caught up! When her memory comes back and she realizes where she and her husband were in their marrioage and why, this is going to be interesting. These two have some reasl issues concerning her deception and his anger and feeling betrayed about it because its clear that he really does love his wife.
Also, I really dont like her interfering parents when it comes to her marriage. Giving her ex her number that...ugh! However, the sex was hot! That had been building up over time.
Nicely done!Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: October 23 2021 03:33 pm
YAAASSSSSS!!! SHE GOTTTAAAAA TASTEEEE AND NOWWW SHE COMINGGG BACK FOR THE WHOLE KITCHENNNNN! Hahahahahah damn they both seem like they both have high libidos 🥴😂 I was like "PHEWW WHEEWWWWW" 😂
I'm so happy she's finallyyyy comfortable enough to get back into bed with him 😉 and he's obviously been going crazy missing her... I think they'll be catching up a wholeeee lot hahahaha
yasss I loved it!! Cant wait for more! Amazing work xReviewer: Gordana Signed [Report This]
Date: October 14 2021 05:54 am