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[Reviews - 70]
Summary:

Masks

 

“We understand how dangerous a mask can be. We all become what we pretend to be.” 
 Patrick RothfussThe Name of the Wind

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Fluff, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Spritualism, Strong Sexual Content
Series: The Masquerade
Chapters: 4
Completed:Yes
Word count: 6636
Read Count: 8475
Published: May 14 2013
Updated: July 08 2013


Title: Chapter 3: Grief Is A Complicated Business

Good gosh, I'm devouring this like a Dororthy Koomson novel!! 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 26 2013

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Summary:

   

 

A virtual wallflower for most of her life, what will Sasha do when she encounters the first man to ever make her want to be noticed? Dmitri is a man used to being surrounded by the most beautiful things, including women. Will he accept Sasha, a woman who is usually overshadowed by the beauty of her friends? Is he capable of noticing that while her beauty may not be as blatant, it should still be treaured? This is the story of a wallflower and the man she loves.

 

Sasha: the Wallflower has been removed from this site and is available for purchase on Amazon Kindle. Thank you all for your support!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2670
Read Count: 196744
Published: May 31 2013
Updated: November 25 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Cast

Ohh..this could turn into a wonderful hate to love relationship. Can't wait to read more. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: May 31 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 33]
Summary:

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What happens when a werewolf refuses to follow his nature,does his wolf take full control or will the human side win the battle of wills...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General, Supernatural
Genre: Family, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 10355
Read Count: 3509
Published: July 13 2013
Updated: September 08 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm intrigued...keep it going. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: July 13 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 34]
Summary:

It takes a strong, confident woman to allow a man to take the lead. It takes an even stronger man to be able to take her where she needs to go.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 15313
Read Count: 7270
Published: August 15 2013
Updated: November 28 2013


Title: Chapter 2: Interlude 1 - The Cha Cha

Haha..this story is soo light, cute, and enjoyable. Keep going!!



Author's Response:

i needed something a bit lighter to give my brain a break from the darkness that's looming in Veiled..

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: August 16 2013

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[Reviews - 57]
Summary:

A race of aliens need females to survive.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Science Fiction
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dubcon, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 8688
Read Count: 11236
Published: August 15 2013
Updated: September 16 2015


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

What the what!!!!! Please continue! 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: September 20 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 345]
Summary:

College student Rory Daniels has a problem, and it isn’t how she’s going to pass her final exams.

You see, she can do this thing where she can manipulate objects… and other things, and as far as she knows she’s the only one who can. So when she’s forced to use her powers at a crowded bookstore and attracts the attention of a fellow student, she’s anything but happy about it. When it turns out the student has no interest in turning her over to the government and actually wants, of all things, a double date, she’s pleasantly surprised. That is, until her date ditches her for her friend and she ends up stuck with his.

His friend turns out to be Victor Ryken. He’s tall. Built like a Greek god and has a set of the most memorizing hazel eyes Rory’s ever seen. And, oh yeah, he does nothing but infuriate her. After the date from hell, Vic has for some reason taken an increased interest in her and what’s worse… her powers light up every time he touches her. When Vic’s around her abilities go haywire and his presence marks the beginning of a string of unusual events. Suddenly, she’s become a person of interest to nearly everyone she meets and strange people pop up in her life that have her question her own weirdness. When Vic himself displays a whole new level of weird while saving her from an attacker, Rory ends up concluding one thing. 

Maybe she’s not as alone as she thinks.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 40
Completed:Yes
Word count: 126441
Read Count: 55755
Published: August 22 2013
Updated: September 04 2013


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 4

Interesting story...I really don't get Rory thinking Vic is a jerk. He definitely didn't come off that way for me. I can't wait to see what happens in the next update. 



Author's Response:

Thanks! And I've amended the summary. I think it reads a little better now. I think he more infuriates her than anything, lol

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: August 23 2013

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Summary:

When Joss begins receiving anonymous letters, she has her suspicions as to who might be penning the ominous messages.  But as the list of suspects grows, will she uncover the author’s identity or stumble upon a greater truth?  *A response to the Random Letters prompt.*



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Random Letters
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:Yes
Word count: 46306
Read Count: 37786
Published: August 29 2013
Updated: October 17 2013


Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Hoooollly Cow!!! Is that the end!!!



Author's Response:

Not quite.  There's one more chapter.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Brown Mocha!

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 16 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 160]
Summary:

What's a girl to do when there are two after you? 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Threesome+
Challenges: Give Me a Mountain Man Anyday!
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 6583
Read Count: 43900
Published: September 02 2013
Updated: July 13 2015


Title: The McRyan Brothers

He'll always be what? Mooooore!!!!!

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: September 19 2013

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Summary:

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Response to the Made to Order challenge!

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death
Challenges: Made to Order
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:Yes
Word count: 54406
Read Count: 50801
Published: September 11 2013
Updated: December 18 2013


Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Night Out

Ohhh Lord Selena!! Trouble is coming your way!

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: September 30 2013

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 33]
Summary:

 

 

Short story about the strange love between two very different people.



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General, Supernatural
Genre: Friendship, Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Fluff, Original Characters, Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 6963
Read Count: 8499
Published: September 15 2013
Updated: May 15 2014


Title: Beneath Your Beautiful

Love this!!!! I hope it doesn't end with just three chapters!

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: September 29 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm hoping with the new tweaks we now can be assured of some updates! 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: February 22 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sooooo sad. :(

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: May 16 2014

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[Reviews - 27]
Summary:

It was an unusual arrangement. Like oil and water, they didn't mix. Throw in a confusing mixture of feelings, politics, and their tumultuous past and you get.... well I don't really know what you get. But you know what they say, all's fair in love and war. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Fantasy, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 6901
Read Count: 5053
Published: September 29 2013
Updated: May 23 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Ohhh..sookie sookie. I didn't see that ending coming. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: September 29 2013

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Ummm...I would have said f'em and kept it moving. No reaction is best I believe. Can't wait for the next update. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: June 05 2016

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Summary:

Formally Ashes, Ashes

Red flashing lights…

Heavy footsteps echoed through the deserted hallway.

Fire alarms blared...

Breaths lodged in throats as the search for survival worsened.

Pungent smell of death overwhelmed as the Z’s closed in...

Survival was futile now, running was the only escape; in this new apocalyptic post war world, living was no longer guaranteed.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Horror
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content
Challenges: Chamber Grindhouse Challenge 6
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:Yes
Word count: 65447
Read Count: 77572
Published: October 12 2013
Updated: June 05 2014


Title: Chapter 6: M9 Beretta

Was this a rollercoaster ride or was this a rollercoaster ride! I loved every second of it. Boohooed like a baby too! Can't wait for the next chapter. 

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Date: November 10 2013

Title: Chapter 17: R. C. C. D

Only one chapter left? What! Hahaha..either you are going to wrap up things nicely or there's going to be a sequel. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: April 19 2014

Title: Chapter 12: The Beginning

I have no clue what the heck is going on. I mean that in a good way. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: January 03 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 23]
Summary:

Snippets into the lives of different characters. A foray into emotions and interactions.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dubcon, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 9617
Read Count: 5513
Published: November 14 2013
Updated: May 08 2015


Title: Chapter 4: Seeker

Good Lord these stories!!! I loved this last one most of all. Maybe you would be willing to expand it? The first and second stories are awesome sauce as well. Keep them coming! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm aiming to expand it.

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 16 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 277]
Summary:

Lance was a man who had it all and lost it all. He was down and out and was ready to give up because he had nothing to live for. Nina was a woman who had enough of being used and was trying to start her life over in a new city. When these two meet will Lance have something to live for? Or will he continue to live in misery. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 27
Completed:Yes
Word count: 40637
Read Count: 72033
Published: December 09 2013
Updated: July 06 2015


Title: Chapter 4: Meeting in the Ladies Room

mooooore!!!!!!!!!!!! wuuuuuuuuuuut!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: December 13 2013

Title: Chapter 8: Just a Friend

Hahaha..that transition to the kiss was soo smooth..I thought he was imagining himself doing it! Can't wait to read about Nina's reaction! 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: December 30 2013

Title: Chapter 6: Keep Warm

Hmmmm....I love this story, but I'm gonna guess...she killed herself and the kid. Just throwing that out there. Not intentionally, like she needed to go out and get something was under the influence and not paying attention and maybe they had a car wreck...okay I'm goinna stop my imagination is running away with me. Can't wait until the next update! 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: December 23 2013

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Summary:

In the wake of an ugly divorce, Natalia executes a scheme meant to move her beyond the hurt inflicted by her ex-husband, Richard.  The plan is to ease her suffering by increasing his, and her weapon, a younger man unwittingly drawn into the illicit plot. 

In the quest for revenge, will Natalia realize her goal of bringing Richard to his knees?  Or will vengeance and her weapon of choice become her undoing?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: December's Wrap-up!
Series: None
Chapters: 40
Completed:Yes
Word count: 120
Read Count: 91991
Published: December 13 2013
Updated: May 02 2015


Title: Chapter 40: Epilogue

Tear Jerker!!! You hear me? Tear jerker!!! A great ending for a phenomenal story! I can't wait for Rich's story and a revisit of Natalia and Anthony! Loved it. Loved it. Loved it! 



Author's Response:

Thanks Brown Mocha!!!  So happy you enjoyed it!  More Rich, Nat, and Ant is in the works : )

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 04 2015

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[Reviews - 173]
Summary:

As Joss and Eshan prepare to wed, will the relationship survive long enough to see "for better" when their families become their "for worse"?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:Yes
Word count: 45613
Read Count: 29760
Published: December 20 2013
Updated: July 09 2014


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Ohhhhh sheeeeeiiiit!!!

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: June 19 2014

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Pitter Patter goes my heart! Looove it!

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Date: June 20 2014

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Man,I teared up!!! I love her family!

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: July 01 2014

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.