Penname: KittyOh48 [Contact]

Real name: Katheryn Prunty

Member Since: August 22 2011

Membership status: Member

Bio:

Married, mother of 2, 4 grandchildren, no pets (except husband), college student, avid reader.




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Regret by Brenda1257
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

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Jayden made the biggest mistake of his life when he let the love of his life slip through his fingers.  Could he make it right and start anew?  Tamaeya had been burned by Jayden once and had no intentions of being burnt a second time, but it seemed that the heart had it's own mind.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 4965
Read Count: 108485
Published: February 06 2013
Updated: April 19 2017

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Title: Regret

I truly love this story! I am so glad that the family rift will finally be mended. They all need it. Dana cracks me up! 

Thank you Brenda for this great story.

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Date: March 08 2014
Title: Regret

i love this story. Thank you for writing it! i can feel the love you put into each paragraph, thought and action.

Be Blessed!

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Date: January 09 2014
Title: Regret

There you go again! Another great chapter! A baby, grammy was right!

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Date: March 06 2013
Title: Regret

Yeah, Nancy is doing the right thing for once! I hope that boy get's through to her and helps her to forgive her biological mother for being weak. I am glad that Dana prayed for all this to happen and now even Nancy's biological father's side of the family will be a part of her life. Isn't God Amazing! Great update.

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Date: January 31 2014
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 In The Beginning

The whole germaphobia thing is interesting. I think i will enjoy this story! I am adding it to my tracked stories list!

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Date: February 11 2013
Title: Regret

Wow, that was very lowdown of Jayden's parents to want their only child to fail!

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Date: February 13 2013
Title: Regret

Wow, I love thos kds! It was too funny when Jay called his father scary kat! This story is going to be hilarious!

Author's Response:

Yes, the kids don't really understand his condition, and they don't want him changing their lives too much.  They like swimming and they like Golden Corral.  LOL  More is coming soon!

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Date: February 15 2013
Title: Regret

I love the way you give a name to that disorder that Jayden has. I never knew what it wws called or what causes people to be affected like that. I also love the fact that you believe in the power of prayer. I Thank you for that! This story is great already, please don't sell yourself short by rushing thru the chapters. Your character development and evolution is your strength as a writer! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response:

Thanks Kitty:  I've been reading up and some of the stories are really heartbreaking.  It may seem crazy to us to be afraid of germs, but it is real for a lot of people.  I believe in the power of prayer.  I don't mind including it in my stories.  I appreciate all of my reviews because they really do fuel my muse!

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Date: February 23 2013
Title: Regret

Jayden, doesn't realize it yet but he is slowly becoming less dependent on his hands being wiped every few minutes all because of the faith God has bestowed on his daughter. Which in turn is bringing them all together as a family.

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Date: February 28 2013
Title: Regret

Go Get Your Man!!!! That was the best advice Stacy could have given Tamaeya! GO GET YOUR MAN!!!

Author's Response:

LOL!!! She's going to get him alright.  MOre is coming soon!

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Date: February 28 2013
Title: Regret

BEAUTIFUL! When love is real, then there is nothing more to say!

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Date: March 04 2013
Title: Regret

BEAUTIFUL! When love is real, then there is nothing more to say!

Author's Response:

Thanks!  More coming by the weekend!

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Date: March 04 2013
Title: Regret

Those brothers are a hot ass mess! Please let their greed be the nd of them!

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Date: March 12 2013
Title: Regret

Wow, the power of faith, prayer and love, can tear down walls, move mountains and command the seas to be still. Too bad, it took so long for Tam to believe her daughter and her gift! Great update! I have yo give you  10!

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Date: July 12 2013
Title: Regret

That was deep! A child shall lead them!  

I think this story is great!

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Date: March 30 2013
Title: Regret

That was beautiful! I loved the way you used Dana's love and faith to bring Nancy and Tam back around. She shattered that block of ice Nancy had in place of a heart. This story has definitely kept me interested. You picked the correct name for it....there are plenty of regrets on all sides of this family! You definitely deserve a ten!

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Date: April 07 2013
Title: Regret

t takes a big person to apologize when they know they are wrong! i am glad Jessica did not uphold her daughters wrong doing! 



Author's Response:

Jessica is trying to be objective.  

 

Thanks for the review.

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Date: April 15 2013
Title: Regret

Seems to me like the rolls have changed. looks like Tam is the racist and not Nancy and Jason. Good transition!



Author's Response:

Oh, Kitty.  You are one of the few who saw that transition.  More is coming soon!

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Date: April 27 2013
Title: Regret

Tam, needs to tell Jayden what his momma said to her all those years ago and his momma needs to apologize again and ask for forgiveness. Also, Nancy needs to explain to Tam and Jayden why she acted the way she did and asked them to help her get bettrr. Next, Tam needs to explain to Dana that she is not going to hell and apologize to her, before she makes Dana a basket case like Nancy did Jayden. All in all this story is beautifulbeautiful, and full of hope and promise. Thank you Brenda!

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Date: May 06 2013
Title: Regret

Everything is coming to light. I am glad Nancy and Jayden are coming around. They will very soon accept Christ and everyone will be happy.

Nancy will finally get the closure she needs. Zachary will get his healing and the twins. This is a beautiful story.

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Date: August 30 2014
Title: Regret

Nancy needs to chill!  She needs to stop thinking everyone wants something from her, other than a chance to get to know the REAL NANCY!

Thank you for the update...I hope you publish this story. It's worth it!

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Date: April 21 2017
Never Let Me Go by DramaQueenAmby
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 192]
Summary:

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Chance. I don't believe in it. Everything that happens in our life happens for a reason. I've always believed that. But, it's funny. Who would have thought a night of clubbing could result in my marriage to the tattooed quarterback for the San Francisco 49ers?    



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 29
Completed:No
Word count: 88367
Read Count: 173004
Published: March 16 2013
Updated: March 14 2016

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Title: Chapter 1: Meetings

Good start! But your lead character Arrianna (wouldn't use Nikki Minaj picture). I see her as the groupy-stalker type chick. (you must be a fan) Anyway,I can see Keke Palmer as Arrianna. I can see her not being phased by all of the hype. (JUST A THOUGHT). But either way this story has caught my attention!! I love stories  with this theme. I can stand to read 15 -25 more chapters!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. Hmm. I appreciate your input. I'm still trying to get a hang for the characters. Trying to get a feel for where exactly I want their personalities to go. So thank you! Awwwwe, well I'm glad you like it and I'll try to update tonight.

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Date: March 23 2013
Title: Chapter 2: The Morning After

funny!

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Date: March 24 2013
Title: Chapter 3: Room Service

I like the way they interact with eachother. Don't leave Derrick out he is funny! Who is at the door?

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Date: March 25 2013
Title: Chapter 4: Cast

I like them  but I would have used Ke ke Palmer in the lead female roll!

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Date: March 25 2013

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