Penname: KittyOh48 [Contact]

Real name: Katheryn Prunty

Member Since: August 22 2011

Membership status: Member

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Married, mother of 2, 4 grandchildren, no pets (except husband), college student, avid reader.




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Raising Alex by QueenConsort
Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:

For Jamie Watson, raising Alex was supposed to be a short time gig, a means to an end before starting her new life. But with it brings a type of love she never could have imagined with Alex's father Mitch. While caring for him brings them together, will doing what's best for him tear them apart? 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 20139
Read Count: 54987
Published: May 20 2013
Updated: October 25 2013

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Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

They need to quit dancing around each other, and just admit it to themselves as well as each other...they are attracted to each other. So that way they can take the next step and make a commitment and become what they both want......A FAMILY!

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Date: May 31 2013
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Sasha: The Wallflower by sha2011
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 1032]
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A virtual wallflower for most of her life, what will Sasha do when she encounters the first man to ever make her want to be noticed? Dmitri is a man used to being surrounded by the most beautiful things, including women. Will he accept Sasha, a woman who is usually overshadowed by the beauty of her friends? Is he capable of noticing that while her beauty may not be as blatant, it should still be treaured? This is the story of a wallflower and the man she loves.

 

Sasha: the Wallflower has been removed from this site and is available for purchase on Amazon Kindle. Thank you all for your support!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2670
Read Count: 196764
Published: May 31 2013
Updated: November 25 2015

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Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Damn! Did Dmitri just become a deaf mute? How could he not say anything? I understand his father just walked up, but DAMN! He couldn't even grunt an affirmative? At least then Sasha would know she hasn't made a complete fool out of herself for this Ass!   Dmitri could at least whisper something in her ear so she will know if he feels the same or something!  But at least he told that worrisome ass sister of his off! Sasha was too nice, I would have put my foot in her anorexic ass! While asking her who the Hell is she calling a BITCH?

Dmitri would know not to cross Sasha then! 

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Date: August 16 2013
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

First, please give Sasha some backbone so she can put her foot in Nadia' s ass! Second, please give Sasha some backbone so that whenever someone insults her she can curse them out, like they deserve! Third, please allow Dmitri to put his foot in his father and sister's ass for disrespecting his woman! 

Oh yeah, Slade,  just tell your family Hell to the NO! This 2013 not 1613 who has arranged marriages in this day and age? Someone must need a green card!

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Date: October 02 2013
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Wow! I am proud of her, she finally found her backbone. No more being a doormat to be trod upon by so-called friends or people that claim to have feelings for you!

Dmitri needs to accept Dominic as a friend as well as a brother and realize he was right about his feelings for Sasha and he treated her badly.

Next Dmitri needs to know that Natalia was using him and set the whole break up of (Sasha/Dmitri) up. He needs to put her in a facility to help her with her problem.

I think that Sasha needs to become a career woman and Dmitri needs to see what it feels like to look for love and not find it.

Five years should pass before the see each other again...on opposite sides of a conference table....Sasha should pretend not to remember Dmitri. Make him work for it. Make her put up a good fight!

That's my opinion!

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Date: December 21 2013
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

I love the new cast pictures. You are right, the new picture of Sasha embodies the newfound strength and determination  her character has obtained. Dmitri's new picture gives him the newly acquired vulnerability his character lacked for so long. Let's face it he was an (ass),unlikeable person. Great job, bringing their lives forward instead of keeping them living in the past!

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Date: May 28 2014
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

I would like for her to get better acquainted with her grandfather. They both deserve that! Forget Janelle, she is not worthy of the dust on their shoes! 

As for Dmitri, he needs to wait one more year for Sasha to give in and be with him! I am in love with them as a couple.

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Date: June 04 2014
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

I think the way this story has progressed is good...very good! In fact, the fact that you are not rushing the story is GREAT and I love how you have allowed each character to mature and change for the better! I hate to see the story end.

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Date: August 02 2014
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

I knew the a$$**** would surface sooner or later. Damn! Sasha needs one male friend to kick him in the a$$! He doesn't deserve a sweet person like Sasha anyway! But she needs to start standing up for herself also! 

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Date: November 23 2013
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

I love the fact that you took some of the comments from your readers to heart and used some of them to build your latest chapter. For that alone you deserve 10 stars and 2 thumbs up!

I think your story is amazing and I love that you finally allowed Sasha to grow up and stand up for herself whether is was against Dimtri or Faye and Raelyn.

Thank you again for such a wonderful story!

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Date: February 01 2014
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Dmitri+Sasha=Dmisha or Dmitra

Loving the new couple!



Author's Response:

I like the names! Will use them in the future! Thank you for your review! :-)

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Date: June 15 2013
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

I am glad he has called things off with Teagan, because it is about to getaways. Also, Faye did not have to be so low down to Sasha! But, in the end Faye will get her just desserts! She will be needing Sasha!  Slave, is a looker...it would be nice to have a story for him and his love pursuits.



Author's Response:

hmm...I've been hearing a of interest in Slade and its got me thinking...lol Thank you for your review!

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Date: June 08 2013
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

I knew Sasha, had been abandoned, that is why she is friends with the other 3 girls. She doesn't want to be alone. Well I think Dmitri will make a huge difference in her life. Also, but g on Slade and Dina!



Author's Response:

Everything makes sense now, huh? Thank you for you review! More to come...

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Date: June 08 2013
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

I never disliked Dmitri, it's just the fact that he was so stereotypical in his attitude toward what he considered beautiful people and what he felt as being worthy of his time and attention. His attraction to Sasha was only physical, he thought. That was until he talked to her and now he knows it is a whole lot more. 



Author's Response:

Yes, now he is starting to realize that Sasha is unlike any other female he has ever been attracted to because it goes way beyond just her looks. He doesn't find her to be ugly in any regard but he does acknowledge the fact that compared to the usual women he had a history of dating, she has a more natural and low-key beauty, which he appreciates. Thank you for your review!

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Date: June 08 2013
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

First...self publish, there is a website about doing it yourself. I heard about it from a friend....Second...Ooooohhhhh Mmmmyyyyy Gggooodddnneesssss! Please don't let Sasha faint just because she see's the man that caused her heartache...let her be poised, strong, confident in the face of abject horror! Let Carter see the beautiful, capable black woman she portrays. Eat your heart out Dimtri...you threw her away, now let's see how you like it! Third...yes Dina deserves her own story. Finally, I hate cliff hangers, but I love your story...that being said, "Do what you do!" But please don't make us suffer too long. 

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Date: January 30 2014
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Sounds to me like Dominic is jealous of Dmitri and the relationship he shared with Nadia, their baby sister. Maybe jealous Isn't the right word...maybe envious would describe it better.  Also, the family maybe somewhat affiliated with the Russian Mafia.  I believe the person at the door is brother dear Dom.....I wonder if Dmitri will introduce Sasha as his girlfriend? I wonder if he is going to as her to come with him? I wonder what the family will say?



Author's Response:

ooh, questions, questions! I hope to answer most of them within the next chapter. Thank you for your review!

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Date: June 26 2013
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

Stick to your guns Sasha...Don't be easy...make him work for your forgiveness! I love the woman she has become...hopefully she can show him she is a better woman than he deserves.

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Date: February 18 2014
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

I think in any healthy relationship between a man and a woman, sex is important! Especially when it new to new to one of them. But most importantly, they take the time to really get yo know each other. Just like how Dmitri knew about Sasha being allergic to shellfish. Or how Sasha can understand when Dmitri is upset just by the way he stands. That is great detail. You are great writer, and this a great story!!!! 

 

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Date: July 27 2013
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Ok, that was a nice beginning......but, I think you should stop that farce with Dmitri before it gets out of hand. Sasha's is too nice and her friends will hurt her. I hope Slade is a love interest for Sasha! Put a little more Uumph in the SPARKS! 



Author's Response:

Aw, I'm sad to hear your not a fan of Dmitri. I understand though. At the moment, he is very hard to like. Thank you for your review! 

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Date: June 03 2013
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

The story is good, but my only problem is the way it is typed. It would be easier to read if you double spaced the text or when each character speaks start it on a new line. Do you get what I am saying?

Ex. Teagan, just ignore her she is just a student.

Sasha asks, what type of work do you do Dimitri?

That would make it easier to follow.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! I've corrected the formatting to make it easier to read in chapter 2. So, please keep reading! :-)

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Date: June 01 2013
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Definitely, second chances are so much better for them. They actually get to hold an uninterrupted conversation. Maybe, they will get to know each other better.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review, Kitty!

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Date: June 01 2013
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

That Faye and Jaelynn both those heffa's need a good beat down! Jealous ass........OMG!!!  I got so mad while reading that scene.  But, I was glad Dina was there for her!  But, what made me happy was when she went to Dmitri and he didn't ask any questions, he just opened the door and let her in.  Of course he was aroused but he did not act on it and that is what a real man is. He is there, holding, caring for and loving his woman without expecting anything in return! 

AWESOME! Update....please keep them coming!



Author's Response:

haha. Emotional excitation from my readers means a lot to me as a writer! More coming soon!

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Date: June 15 2013
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Well, let me start by saying....spectacular update!!! I have a feeling that crazy ass sister of Dmitri is going to make her brother mad. Messing with his new love named Sasha. Now that they have had sex and they are both sprung on it! Also, I think the sex scene was just long enough! I believe you are doing a great job! I have to give you a 10 for the content and story line.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! It was my first actual love scene so I was a bit nervous but I'm really excited to see so many enjoyed it. I'll give you another update as soon as i can so be on the lookout!

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Date: July 08 2013
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

I know that sister of his is only there to make trouble! Sasha is going to have to stand up to that heffa, and soon! Love scene was just right! Kudos for you!

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Date: July 27 2013
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

I am loving Sasha's new look! I think you are doing the right thing with the relationship by not letting her fall back into that trap, without him working for it!

Sasha deserves better, and Dmitri deserves to get his Ass kicked! 

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Date: May 08 2014
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

Wow, worth the wait! 

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Date: June 26 2014

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