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[Reviews - 776]
Summary:

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Jayden made the biggest mistake of his life when he let the love of his life slip through his fingers.  Could he make it right and start anew?  Tamaeya had been burned by Jayden once and had no intentions of being burnt a second time, but it seemed that the heart had it's own mind.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 4965
Read Count: 108478
Published: February 06 2013
Updated: April 19 2017


Title: Regret

I want to shake Tameya. She is turning into Nancy 2.0 and she doesn't even realize it. I hope she catches on soon. 

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Date: May 09 2013

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 12]
Summary:

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Roxie is leaving for college tomorrow and Jason wants to make sure she doesn't forget him.


One shot



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Fluff, Original Characters, Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1811
Read Count: 4683
Published: February 13 2013
Updated: February 13 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Before you go..

This was so sweet. Well done

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Date: February 14 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 83]
Summary:

Kwon Jae Hwa had been prepared to succeed. He had worked hard for everything he had earned all of his life, and that resulted in getting him to great places in life.

One day, his life is interrupted by a vibrant, young, aspiring dancer. She's carefree, and the complete opposite of what he is used to, but something tells him that she is exactly what he wants.

He has no reason to doubt that she feels the same about him, until she is offered the opportunity of a lifetime that puts a halt on everything they have, and Jae Hwa is left with a great responsibility to handle on his own.

Jae Hwa must face the one hardship he never thought he would have to go through with his first love.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Graphic Violence, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 28452
Read Count: 69782
Published: February 14 2013
Updated: June 12 2013


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Good update

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Date: February 22 2013

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

She is an inconsiderate brat but she is really young so hopefully she'll change.

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Date: February 22 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good start.

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Date: February 14 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 29]
Summary:

Tai never understood why his family thought it was best to send him to the United States until he met Lana, a beautiful woman with a very troubled past and is broken. Can he fix her, or will she have to fix herself? And what's up with her obsessive ex boyfriend and her colleague who she sees as just a friend?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 15162
Read Count: 4698
Published: February 23 2013
Updated: July 16 2013


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Cute. I hope he helps her heal and doesn't have a negative reaction to her traumatic past.

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Date: July 17 2013

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 160]
Summary:

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Aaliyah Wyndham is a twenty-seven year old attorney working in the field of Entertainment Law. She has had a crush on her next-door neighbor, C.E.O. Gabriel Cortez, for over a year. Following a break-in, the two share a romantic interlude that seems quite promising, until Aaliyah realizes that Gabriel doesn‘t realize who she is! Aaliyah decides that for his oversight, she wants to make Gabriel pay, and make him pant.

There is only one problem with this plan: Lucas D'Alessandro, her best friend since childhood. He’s been Aaliyah‘s “Big Brother” for so long that she never notices when she begins to feel decidedly unlike his sister. Meanwhile, he is facing the same quandary, struggling to decide whether to pursue a more intimate connection with Aaliyah or to leave the field clear for someone else, namely Gabriel.

Shall Aaliyah rest her case with Gabriel, or shall she make a motion to Amend her Heart with Lucas?

This is a sweet romance story. It has been published, and so this is only an excerpt.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: The Ingenue
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:Yes
Word count: 15142
Read Count: 64052
Published: March 02 2013
Updated: April 19 2014


Title: Amended Hearts (Excerpt Only)

oh lucas you idiot. He is way too old to be jumping to conclusions like this. Derrick is going to tear him up for hurting Aaliyah. I hope she doesn't turn to Gabriel now. Great update

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Date: March 10 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 192]
Summary:

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Chance. I don't believe in it. Everything that happens in our life happens for a reason. I've always believed that. But, it's funny. Who would have thought a night of clubbing could result in my marriage to the tattooed quarterback for the San Francisco 49ers?    



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 29
Completed:No
Word count: 88367
Read Count: 172783
Published: March 16 2013
Updated: March 14 2016


Title: Chapter 13: Hope

I don't know who any of these players Re but Im assuming they are celebrities. I am enjoying this story. I like the youthful way the characters interact and talk. I didnt find this chapter boring. Good update.

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Date: June 28 2013

Title: Chapter 9: Mother? (Continued)

Keep going .im loving it . I want to find out why Ariana is so jaded already.

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Date: April 06 2013

Title: Chapter 16: Forgiveness

She's really young. People take back abusers when the old and should knw better. She musts needs to grow up a little.

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Date: July 25 2013

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[Reviews - 121]
Summary:

A sequel to Good Grief, Duplicity is full of mystery and intrigue. Will love conquer all things or are some things broken by nature?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 114
Read Count: 19934
Published: March 18 2013
Updated: May 14 2014


Title: Duplicity

P2P Whatttttt! That was not right. How could they disrupt Siennas big day like that.  I feel so bad for Layla, Sean has really put her through it. Hopefully her and her mother will reconcile so at least she can get some peace. I thought Sean had a plan that didn't include getting captured. I was not expecting that at all. I loved when the besties made up.i need an update ASAP because this chapter has me biting my tips.

 



Author's Response:

(Evil laugh) All I'm gonna say is it ain't over till it's over! And like Sienna told Layla things aren't always what they seem. (more evil laughter) Thanks for your awesome comment girlie!

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Date: December 13 2013

Title: Duplicity

OMG...what was that. I did not expect Jose to be their father. Now Sienna has every reason to be upset. I won't even pretend to understand the crazy telanovelaish love triangle of the parents. I felt like a stepped into a Maury episode. And can I  say I love abuelita. No she did not say Alejandro I'm pregnant.This was crazy but in a good way.



Author's Response:

Yes girl yes. Craziness indeed. Lol Abuelita is too much, I love her character. I'm glad you liked it!

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Date: October 24 2013

Title: Duplicity

Ohh my god this is soo good. You are on some scandal type stuff. I cant wait to read the next chapter. I am so thrilked Siennas big day wasnt ruined.  Sean needs to get to Layla because he really will go crazy if something happens to her.



Author's Response:

I'm so gald you approve! Lol I laughed with the Scandal comment. I'm kinda addicted to that show! And I think I agree, if something happens to Layla I think Sean will go cray cray for real. I hope to update soon!

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Date: January 19 2014

Title: Duplicity

This is a damn movie. I'm pleased Sean had the foresight to place a tracker on Leila. The fight scene is so intense and well crafted. I really felt for Sean in this chapter to be forced to relive such a horrific event and coming so close to Leila I feel he needs a break. He has ben through so much. Was I the only one totally suprised by Haseem. I thought he was going to turn them into Suchi. I know this isn't very benevolent but I wanted Rollins dead not rotting on jail so yay.



Author's Response:

Thanks girl! I'm so glad you liked it. Yes definitely if you feel Sean needs a break from horrfic events then so do I. I tell you what, I'm sooo glad those chapters are over it kinda drained me a bit. I'm glad you were surprised by Haseem, he was my last plot twist, inside-job, surprise duplicity character. And yes Mikhail needed to be taken out gansta style, he was just too much. Thanks for you continued support!!!r

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Date: January 25 2014

Title: Duplicity

OMG. What is really good with Sean? Why is he acting like he just forgot to pick up the milk  instead of revealing that he is a lying son of a bitch. This right here ---He looked deep into her eyes and whispered, "Now we can go round and round in circles, but you know and I know... that in the end you're going to end up with me." He let out a soft smile.--- now if Layla had hauled off and hit him or tried to cut him I would pretend I dud not see anything.  He knows she loves him but to be that cocky after the whoppers he has told her I felt some kind of way about it. 

Now why are those two men fighting carrying on over some drama that passed  twenty years ago. But isn't that always how it goes. I am just glad Sienna wasn't there to see that.

Why is Sean turning himself in now. I know the cars out of the bag but he hasn't cleared his name yet.unless he has something up his sleeve.  Great update!



Author's Response:

I busted out laughing when I read this. Lol you're too much. I would  prpbably pretend I didn't see anything either. But believe me Layla tends to hold stuff in and she's not through with her wrath on him.

And Sean Sean Sean can be quite cocky when he wants to be. I think he was saying all that stuff because he prefers her to be angry at him than completely devastated.

The two men fighting, those two are crazy, they just need to get over all that stuff. I don't know what Sienna would've done had she been there. And Sean always has something up his sleeve! Lol Thanks for all your awesome comments! I really appreciate them. :)   

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Date: November 26 2013

Title: Duplicity

Finally! But it was so worth it. I was happy to read a lighter chapter. Merle is soooo f-Ed when Lala finds out. I mean she is falling in love and he is already there. There is only one way this can go BAD. Great update.



Author's Response:

Lol yep it's going to get quite dicey. Merle is f-ed, for real. Lol It's funny you mentioned about this being a lighter chapter because you took the words right out of my mouth. Chapter 7-9 were sooo heavy so it was nice (and for my sanity) to get back to the lighter chapters with a little bit of humor. Thank you so much for leaving a comment!

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Date: July 10 2013

Title: Duplicity

That was amazing, heart wrenching, disturbing all at once. I am really not sure if Sean can overcome this. The damage is too deep and his guilt is somewhat deserved. Alquida probably would have done what they did anyway but it going to be nearly impossible to release that burden. Wow very poignant chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks Acdromance! It was definitely one of the hardest chapters I've had to write. Definitely not a fan of having innocent people suffer. Its I got attached to the character and didn't want to see them go. And poor Sean, I don't know how he'll end up. :/ hopefully with he'll be ok. Thanks for comment and support. 

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Date: May 18 2013

Title: Duplicity

As usual another great chapter. I love Sean and Leila their journey has been hella rough.but I am happy that he is trying getting stronger and his recuperation is going well. I'm particularly impressed with his willingness to seek help. With his attitude before And his solitary tendencies I figured he wouldn't go for it. Leila deserved to have her socks knocked off because in all this she was truly innocent. I don't blame her for keeping her cards close because even though she is in love there was a lot that she wasn't privy to and there was a lot that she went through to get to not only forgive him but support him through his recovery. The sex scene was whoa. That was all types of hot. I'm not even gonna cool down just jump my hubby.lol.nope not really. Great update.

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Date: March 01 2014

Title: Duplicity

Yay everyone is alive and well. Sean is strong he will recover but I think after using his body as weapon for so long it might be a difficult adjustment. I  completely got Leila initial reaction to seeing him with so much drama between them it would have been weird if she just strolled in like she owned the place. I hope now that the dust has cleared they get a moment to develop something real.How sweet is ASEAN and Siennas relationship. It's nice to see a brother sister relationship where they love each other but are equals. I can't wait for Sienna and Jason's wedding though come on give me a wedding. Back to Sean it looks like he might have an entire new career ahead if him with this new initiative which is great. As usual great job.



Author's Response:

Aww acdromance! You always give the best reviews. I'm glad Layla's reaction made sense and yeah I love Sean and Sienna's relationship. They mean soo much to each other. There will definitely be a wedding just not for a little bit, maybe not next chapter but the one after... gotta one last surprise in store for it all to come full circle. (Bwahaha evil laugh- Lol not really but yeah. Nothing bad I sear!) Yes and yes it looks like Sean will have a new career and really a new purpose as he starts his life over in NYC.

Also get out of my brain! That bit about Sean's recovery being hard because he used his body as a weapon for so long... I swear those words or something very similar have already been penned down. Ah! Thank you so much for commenting your awesome comments and the encouragement. 

Reviewer: Acdromance Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 02 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Note to readers

Oh Im sorry to hear that.  I have enjoyed your stories tremendously. You are quite a talent and look forward to your return.  Thank you for editing for me as well.

Reviewer: Acdromance Signed
Date: May 14 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 73]
Summary:

“A mighty pain to love it is,
And 'tis a pain that pain to miss;
But of all pains, the greatest pain
It is to love, but love in vain.”



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 28555
Read Count: 11890
Published: April 01 2013
Updated: August 15 2023


Title: Chapter 1: In the beginning...

I like it a lot so far.

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Date: April 02 2013

Title: Chapter 3: The Parting

I absolutely love this story. I feel for Chuck but Ryder hasn't really crossed any lines. I love the character development and the pace. Please update soon. 



Author's Response:

Thank you, thank you! Love your work as well.

And as for the lines...eh, they both haven't crossed any obvious lines but this grey area that they're lurking in is dangerous. Why doesn't Alison (the elephant in the room) ever exist between the two? I mean Chuck thinks about it, but only for a moment and then it's swept away by her lust. Rider doesn't really offer up any news on that front either.

But your comment makes me think and re-evaluate. Hopefully, the next chapter will bring more clarity. THANKS AGAIN.

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Date: June 26 2013

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[Reviews - 86]
Summary:

Everyone has that someone who made them feel perfect and brilliant. How do we lose sight of those great loves and what happens when they come back into your orbit? Amelia and David were college sweethearts who run into each other 2 decades later-after marriages, divorces, kids, and careers--can they still be crazy in love?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:Yes
Word count: 9837
Read Count: 16838
Published: April 17 2013
Updated: June 12 2013


Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 I Wonder If I Take You Home...

This was good. I really e enjoyed this story.

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Date: June 10 2013

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1--I Used to Love Her

I love this story, the nostalgia of first love.

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Date: April 18 2013

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 5--Feenin'

Ok obviously your just a tease. There is no way you could let out this wonderful story with all its cliffhangers and mysteries and not give me more. Please please extend it just a little more to clarify why they broke up and if how they plan on making this last when it seems she doesnt live in the same place as him. Come on be a sport.



Author's Response:

Me? a tease? never that--I'm working on more--I didn't expect  this much attention figured it would get a couple of hits but y'all are seriously stroking my ego--thank you so much for your review---Peace. 

Reviewer: Acdromance Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 18 2013

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