Wow, Jeremy's  gonna be so happy about her pregnancy because he knows he hit that. but he's gonna pop a blood vessel when he finds out his brother hit it too.  So will they each have a child in her belly?   OMG,  Jade is gonna have a fit when she finds out her fiance was banging his best woman before their wedding.  Since she can't have any children she'll probably talk him into taking them. Jeremiah and Jeremy may start a war with each over the children. The dna test will be interesting. I have all these thoughts of how this situation could turn out, so I'm just going to wait until you post the next chapter

I got to admit that this story has me frustrated.  Ellie loves Nick and is  having his child. He would have never married Juliette if Ellie hadn't left him.  He told her he would leave the family business or whatever she wanted him to do to be together, which is something she wants. He settled for Juliette knowing that she was a gold digger, who just wanted to be a kept woman.   Now, he's trying to compromise with Ellie because she doesn't want him to divorce  Juliette,  but then she does. Jeezz, what does she want.  This is the classic example of getting in the way of your own  happiness.

It is always so sad when two people get in the way of love.   Tyler and his trust issue had him getting in his own way and destroying his happiness.  Alex should have known that she was killing their relationship by insisting on continuing her friendship with  Lucas when she knew it bothered Tyler.  She had to know that Lucas was in love with her before his drunken confession.  I don't like these threeway love affairs when all the people involved are decent. It makes it hard to be happy for the two people that end up together because you wonder if the one left behind is okay.  Looking forward to your next update

I read this chapter again,  this time I saw the beauty  of her experience. To be with someone  she alone felt was too good for her and have him take her to a level  she did not know existed, which began to erase every bad experience that haunted her. When it was over and he was asleep,  she started back down the path of darkness and doubt only to be calmed by the waves.  She then realized  she has  just experrienced something  so beautiful that nothing in her past would take it away.  A new and welcomed  memory she  would treasure. She had been made love to.  Bravo girl

They're a really messed up bunch of people.  Maybe Sasha won't be a wallflower after the way he just humilated her.  It's a shame he had to treat her that way.  He must have learned that in asshole 101

This is an interesting story because Eshan has strong religious beliefs and he's deeply rooted in his Muslim customs. I was surprise they like each other.  I don't know how they  will have a relationship.  Looking forward to the next update

Damn,,,She's dealing with two kinds of crazy.. Can you say  empty boxes and a uhaul.

Oh my God !!! Oh my God !!!! Oh my God!!!!! 

You restricted your story and it has taken me a minute to gain access. I didn't remember my password or the email address I used. I hope I didn't offend you because I wasn't criticiizing your writing.  I know there are plenty of people who can wait that long or longer.  I did with every guy I ever dated.  I know people who were virgins when they married.  I was reacting to the characters because that what good writers cause people to do.  Fuss at  and get frustrated over make believe people and situations.  You being one of my favorite writers have me reading your stories on my second laptop, because my  other one didn't fair well through some of your impossible romances.  This story is typical you. So many twist and turns until yes. I'll admit I have said. "  Arrrgh, damnit JJ what hell are you doing."  Yes, I scream at my screen when everything is going terribly wrong. Like when Brandon went to pee and Diya was left to fight off the pervert and Brandon didn't show up.  Then you instantly switch to that satisfying moment where Brandon addressed the issue he has with Diya, in his mind, always trying to pacify him by downplaying how she feels about certain situations.  I've been riding your rollercoasters for awhile.  So much so that I know better than to try to guess who sitting at his doorstep.  Instead I'm going to prepare myself for the drama that's about to unfold.  You know if they don't wait out these last two days before they consummate their relationship, Diya will blame every obstacle they encounter on the fact that they didn't wait.  One question-- does he have any tattoos of rainbows and ribbons? 

This is what I was waiting for. My questions were answered.  i wanted to know why Brandon was so violent, why he and his brother hated each other and why he made Diya leave.....Vidor

You reached in the pits of Hell with that one. There are travel rules for Vidor... Fill up at the town just before Vidor even if you have a half a tank.If you don't have enough gas and you're running out, and you are not Redneck White, pull over on the service lane of the freeway and push your car to the next town's exit....DO NOT EXIT IN VIDOR!!!

Now i'm anxious to hear about Diane.  Maybe the  story of how he met Marisol too.

Is her dad uber rich from old money or  something?  The way he judges a person from a glance and dismisses them makes wonder just how stuck up is this guy, and how in the world did Diya become the person she is under his wing. I hope Brandon's temper  mellows out because it is not going to help in this situation. It  will only add more fuel to the inevitable fire. 

I wondered what is it about your stories that pull me in and make these characters real.  I  get so caught up in your stories that I think about it during my day, wondering when will you post another chapter.  I love that you don't make me wait  for months. I am so glad Alec is straight forward about his feelings. Charlie needs to get it together because she feels the same.  There are usually casualties when you deal with matters of the heart.Vanessa unfortunately is that casualty.   Charlie should feel bad for her, but she  has to think about her family that wants her back in their lives and move forward.   I like this story.  There is so much to build on to keep it interesting.    Now, I want you to reach over your shoulder and pat yourself on the back for me... smile

Why would Vanessa want to attend the party? She didn't stand a chance. Have you ever been embarassed for somebody..that's what I felt for her.  These two have years of history and two children. That trumps the two years she keeps harping on. Sometimes people need to check their egos.  I did feel  a little sorry for her, although she admitted she had always lived in Charlie's shadow.

I hope Olly makes a full recovery and Jamie gets comfortable with Charlie.  If she moved in it would be easier for him to bond with her.  She needs to stop buying all those gifts because that could end up causing  problems  when Jamie starts expecting her to get everything he wants. She can't buy his love or make up for her absence with things.  She has to figure out how to get  to  his heart so he can see what a mother's love is.  He's only six, she has time.