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The trials we survive, the endurance, the scars that we bare both mentally and physically is what makes us survivors. Enduring one tragedy after the other, moving past the pain to reach a higher existence. To go beyond our statutory limitation, to go beyond our self and reveal the being beyond the flesh. This is what survival is all about. 

However this is easier said than done. Nonetheless she will endure, she will feel agony, pain, loss, devastation. She will be wronged, abused, and hated. She will be loved, cherished, and abandoned. She will fight. She will maim. She will kill. Then and only then can she call herself a Survivor.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Horror, Psychological, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:No
Word count: 74621
Read Count: 9865
Published: September 23 2014
Updated: May 23 2016


Title: Chapter 13: Opened Eyes

Ya'll goin' have to take Tyler out, while Conner is in his office doing whatever he does.  I don't think anyone will complain or come to his defense.  Jack has that sharp knife--make it quit and keep it moving.

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Date: May 27 2015

Title: Chapter 16: The end of the Beginning

I can't bring myself to watch the Walking Dead tv show, but I find myself reading your updates at 2 in the morning.  

Your writing is so vivid that I find myself cheering our girl own when she is carrying Dillion or fighting zombies.  She is not perfect or skilled but she is getting there.  You have true talent in being able to make us feel your characters pain and hunger.  So glad she has Dillion because she would have given up when Lauren met her end.  She is a fighter and a survivor---it has always been in her.  

I see Casey was still mad at her as she was being ripped apart.  For some reason, I think Conner survived, evil usually does.

 I am eagerly awaiting the next update.  Thank you!

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Date: April 14 2016

Title: Chapter 14: Tainted Moonlight

@Kellyme,  no, it is not wrong to want to smack the piss out of that kid.  I would suggest tripping her so the walking dead can get her.  

I don't think Conner had time to rape Nava, but he did some serious physical damage.  Tyler and Conner are killers and can restore their kind of order, but in the meantime, Jack and the others need to get to stepping.  

It takes a while to update, but thsi story is so good and scary...I never have to go back to refresh my memory.



Author's Response:

Yes I'm Sorry for the beyond late update i kinda lost my inspiration to write and became a borderline workaholic lol but I'm back I plan on completing this story. Thank you for sticking with me and reviewing. Till next time....

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Date: January 29 2016

Title: Chapter 15: Survival

This is so damn good!



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Thank you so much I appreciate your feed back. Hope you continue to enjoy it.

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Date: March 07 2016

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One night of passion. That all started with a grapefruit.

 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2527
Read Count: 1258
Published: September 25 2014
Updated: September 25 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Play

I really enjoyed this story--erotic, with good romance. 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading and reviewing Penelope.

CG

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Date: September 26 2014

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Summary:


   Caleb Garrison has been in love with Grey ever since they were children. He even told his parents while a child that someday he would marry her. However, there was one problem...although adopted, she was legally his sister.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:Yes
Word count: 29115
Read Count: 36929
Published: October 07 2014
Updated: November 05 2017


Title: Chapter 4: Erratic

Gray is going to cancel on the hiking trip--she got her period.  How old was she when she was adopted?  Please say she was a preteen anything else is just a bit creepy. Caleb need to end things with Jenna and high tail it to Austrailia--give Grey time to accept they were meant to be.  I would worry more about explaining things to the lil sister.  

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Date: October 10 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Sister

Perhaps Caleb can tell Jenna that he has met someone in Aust. and later on can say it didn't work out and date Gray?  Although this will only bring out more lies, it may be the best way to go bc right now Gray is showing herself a sneak messing with her annoying best mate's man and bc Caleb didn't set boundaries he is coming across as a player. 

Who did Caleb use to tell he was going to marry Gray?  If it was the parents, then they may not be so surprise.

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Date: October 17 2014

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Summary:

 Camille Jackson was rejected since birth over her dark skin complexion. She has grown a tough skin and doesn’t get attached to anyone because of how some people have viewed her without even getting to know her. However Camille opens her heart to a baby in need and for the first six months Camille has grown to love the baby as if she were her own. That is until the baby's biological father comes into the picture.

Hiram Whitfield Jr was brought up in one of the most well known Ku Klux Klan families in the south and as the only son he feels the pressure to carry on his family's tradition. After finishing his prison sentence all Hiram wants to do is change his life for the better and be a good father to his child. If that means being disowned by his bigoted family then so be it. Ironically enough Hiram would have never thought that Camille would be the one to be his rock and strength to do so.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 51
Completed:Yes
Word count: 107887
Read Count: 215435
Published: October 09 2014
Updated: October 25 2015


Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 30

Please get this kid from those nuts.  Can't wait until the Klan finds out Hiram's mama laid up with a black man and had kids by him.

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Date: January 13 2015

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Savannah is going to help this man out: clean him up, feed him and give him a place to stay.  I hope he does not go near his so-called mother ever again.  I live in MS and it's not so bad, but I was trying to think of other places to have this couple escape and well, MO is currently a hot bed, NY was stop and frisk, CA problems come out when there is a video around, so...but to survive he will need to get away from his racist family.

He seems a sweet guy, but he is a grown man that just got out of prison, so he needs a rougher edge aded to his character.  

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Date: October 11 2014

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

I just don't see Hiriam having hte backbone to stand up for his daughter, much less Camille. 

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Date: October 11 2014

Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 16

I hope there is black in the family---on the mom's side; Debbie would leave H alone.  I think the little family should move ASAP!  They can skpe their interviews.

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Date: November 09 2014

Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 31

These two need to get a plan B together.  They will be coming for Stevie and talk means nothing to these ya-hoos.

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Date: January 19 2015

Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 44

She should get her peace of mind knowing that she was going to do the right thing, perhaps if Mildred had been decent to her, the transplant could have happen sooner.  I hope she doesn't go to that funeral, bc that would make her a glutton for punishment.   Hoping Ethan shows up for Savvy.

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Date: October 12 2015

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Talia Simmons is an intelligent, bright American law student who travels to Cambridge University in order to attain her international law degree. Used to reading cases of others, she soon becomes her own attorney in a case that no one, not even her closest friends saw coming.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 7349
Read Count: 4279
Published: October 21 2014
Updated: December 02 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Firenze

At least she wasn't too easy.  I doubt Wills did anyhting with Diana, but I guess he won't be 'getting it out his system' with Talia.  Hopefully, she will get to know him before giving up her treasure. lol

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Date: November 06 2014

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SEQUEL to Sasha: the Wallflower. Adaline Lang is an up and coming photographer with more than her own set of problems. During her cousin's wedding she comes face-to-face with the man that she had fallen in love with as a child. Only to find out he was in love with someone else. What will she do to finally be heard and convince him that the perfect women he has been looking for is standing right in front of him?

Dominic Vikhrov is caught between a rock and a hard place. The woman he has fawned after for so many years has finally returned to the United States. But he isn't the only one who is fighting for her heart. Never one to lose, Dominic has his eye on the prize no matter the cost. But will his tunnel vision blind him to something even greater?



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 37246
Read Count: 40813
Published: October 24 2014
Updated: November 20 2015


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

At least Dina told him and it is normal to be stunned, hurt, angry.  In time Dom will forgive her, but it will take awhile.

 I am afraid Addy is putting herself out there and will unknowingly be the rebound chick.  Addy will feel even more insecure when she realizes her competition is the woman in Teagan picture and  Dom will run back to Dina if she wants to try again.  

Love this story!  

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Date: January 22 2015

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Love the way you wrote this chapter.  The situations with Dina, Dom, and her child, Sasha and Dimitri, Teagan andher guy were short, but written so well that I can't wait to see what else is in store for all of them.

I like the little bit you give us of Sasha and her man--nothing coming between those two, again.  Teagan knows she has to respect her guy or lose him.  Dina will be talking to Slade, but what did he do to her? 

Now Adaline is doing well and coming to realize she can enjoy the life she is making for herself and her new friends; willing to look forward and not backwards.  If Dom wants to be in her life, he has to make the first move and keep making them.  Now that he has closure with Dina, he will go for Ada but she may not want to be the rebound chick.  

Why should Ada dread Carla coming from her honeymoon--aren't they living in different states?

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Date: April 06 2015

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

I will read anything you write.  Dom must have rejected her...can't wait. 

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Date: October 25 2014

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Carla will always be unhappy--karma.  Can't wait til Adaline tell Victoria she is outta there!

Dom doesn't want Carla, but he is still hung up on Dina and that is what is going to cause Ada more pain.  Men can be so slow sometimes.

I think Ada feelings for Dom was brought to light by Carla to embarass her and Dom was not feeling Ada like that.  Unless something changes Dom is still not feeling Ada in a romantic light--he has her in the friend zone.  Something is going to have to happen for him to see her as a woman, a woman he would be interested in. 

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Date: January 01 2015

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Ok, this is my 2nd comment on this chapter: last night Dom had my foot twitching, but after a night's sleep, I came to realize something:  Dom has never told Addy that he cared for her as more than a friend.  He has now toppled off that pedestal Addy placed him on; he didn't put himself there, she did.  

Now we all know he has shown himself to be a piss-poor friend and Addy was in denial, but she knew this when she read the jock-jerk lips, but refuse to read Dom's reply.  She was not a stalker, just desperate to have a friend in her high school crush--she was so lonely that she thought Dom's friendship would carry over to their time in school, instead of just the backyard gazebo.

Dom knew she was new to the area and he never even checked on her, didn't notice she was getting healthier, he didn't even search her out at the party.  I know he is hurting, but he didn't even look to Addy as the rebound chick.   This is the same guy that gave his brother hell for being careless with Sasha.  Dom is not into Addy and she can't keep loving someone that don't love her back.  This may have been a deep infatuation on Addy's part.

Hopefully, Murphy is a good guy and Addy can start out slow and be open with him.  She does not want to take advantage of his feelings for her, but he may be the right one for her at this time in her life.    

 I am glad her list of friends is growing AND glad for the update, bc this is one of my favorite stories.

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Date: July 03 2015

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

So our boy has feet of clay...I am so disappointed in him.  I hope you make Dom beg a long time to get back into her good graces.  All this time wasted--now Ada sees he is not her friend and he didn't even care enough to check up on her. 

Before she gives Murphy false hopes, I think she should tell him how she felt about Dom.  It was not healthy the way Ada worshiped him and it is not healthy the way Murphy is starting to worship her.  

I hope she and Murph can be good friends, but for now Ada needs to live her life the way she wants and no longer harbour hopes where Dom is concerned--he is unworthy of her.  

You can't make someone love you when they don't even really see you.

Love Sasha and Dimitry still, but Dom's got my right foot twitching. 

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Date: July 03 2015

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

I loved this chapter!  Both of the main characters are showing growth.

The new and closer relationship with Dom and Dimi was really touching and Sasha ia no longer a wallflower and blossoming.  Dimi explaning how he felt when he thought he could lose her was very realistic.  

So now Dom knows who the daddy is, but the daddy is still in the dark and Dina kept it a secret bc she was ashame of her behavior, not her child (book3?).

I was a little stunned that Adaline was considering losing weight to get Dom attention--little does she realize she would be the rebound chick and should get healthy for herself.  You have brough a new male interest into her life and Murphy is likable, so it's going to hurt when he gets heartbroken.  

Love the way Ada put Carla on silent, priceless!

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Date: June 12 2015

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Also, since Addy is a virgin--she should not regret it at all if she finds a wonderful, caring lover.

 Right now I don't feel as if Dom is worthy of her first time.  Perhaps after time has past and he greatly regrets pushing her away, he can bring the fire and passion...

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Date: July 21 2015

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

At last, I feel that chemistry between these two and there wasn't even any tongue.

I hope Addy make it as hard for Dom as Sasha did for Dimi.  I understand where Dom is coming from:  he is still in too much pain to give his all to Addy and deserve more.

Glad Addy is starting to realize her worth.  I say move on and if it is meant to be then it will be; don't put your life on hold waiting for someone who don't know your worth.

Will she get rid of that photo of their bench?  My first thought was 'sell it', but that would be impulsive, and it is part of her past--so I say blow it up and sell it (maybe Dom will buy it).  

Addy will always have a certain wistfulness about her, but she can be happy without Dom in her life.  

I liked the boldness you gave Addy and even Dom is getting his backbone back--well done--thank you for the update!

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Date: July 21 2015

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Dom story reminds me of my baby sister crushing on this popular football player in college.  She reallyw as interested in him, but he said no, she was a good girla dn he was not the one for her.  My sister later told me that she appreciated what he had did--basically looked out for her in a way.  

Dom is not ready to face that he has feelings for Addy, feelings that run deeper than just friendship.  In his mind, his pulling away from her is what is best for both--mentally he is not ready to move on--he just wants rebounds.  He could have used Addy and with his unresolved feelings for Dina, would have permanently broken Addy. 

I want Addy to become interested in someone else, but not settle for someone else--if that makes sense.  Murphy seems interested, but I have always been leery of guys just staring at me like he does Addy---they tend to become clingy and way too controlling.  

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Date: July 21 2015

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

I think I lost my comment and so here goes again:  Dom should not tell Slade; he wanted her to abort, so unless Dina is asking for child support, Slade should have no say over what she chose to do.  I wouldn't even trust him around y child.

For Teagan, well fingers are cross, because hopefully he is strong enough to follow his heart, but I think he is going to hurt her terribly; then realize he messed up...perhaps he and Dom can cry on one another shoulders.

Carla is not happy and misery loves company. Notice Adeline did not tell her Dom rejected her.  Carla should look and feel like a fool when she goes to him to cut Adeline down.  Maybe, just maybe, Dom will now see what Adeline had to go through with that so-called fine family.  I don't see Teagan, Sasha or even Dina caring for Carla.  Does this chick really think she and Adeline can hang just so she can cut her down--Adeline don't owe her or her mama anything.  

Adeline is just not feeling Murphy.  No chemistry + dating = settling.  There needs to perhaps be someone else or no one else...just Adeline doing Adeline and becoming strong.  Hopefully strong enough to get a burner phone for her real friends to call her on--this way he can ignore catty carla.  Sooner or later she is going to have to put ole girl in check, along with her mother.    I find it strange that she is going to become closer to Dina and her child and then learn that Dom had a serious relationship with Dina---something she will never know.  Sad to say, but this will knock her back on her heels, again.  

Thank you for the update!

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Date: November 15 2015

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