Penname: Penelope [Contact]

Real name: Eddice

Member Since: February 20 2013

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Sasha: The Wallflower by sha2011
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 1032]
Summary:

   

 

A virtual wallflower for most of her life, what will Sasha do when she encounters the first man to ever make her want to be noticed? Dmitri is a man used to being surrounded by the most beautiful things, including women. Will he accept Sasha, a woman who is usually overshadowed by the beauty of her friends? Is he capable of noticing that while her beauty may not be as blatant, it should still be treaured? This is the story of a wallflower and the man she loves.

 

Sasha: the Wallflower has been removed from this site and is available for purchase on Amazon Kindle. Thank you all for your support!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2670
Read Count: 196744
Published: May 31 2013
Updated: November 25 2015

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Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

I think it's time for Sasha to meet someone and yes, you did deliver on the sparks.  Sasha needs to think long and hard if she really want a man that is test driving her so-called friends.  I am thinking Teagan is lying to Sasha on that make-out session.  Please tell us more on what makes Dmitri tick.



Author's Response:

Future chapters will definitely include Dmitri's POV. Thank you for your review!

 Reviewer: Penelope Signed
Date: June 02 2013
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

She shouldn't let him get away with saying they are only friends to someone else again, bc then they will only be friends w/benefits.  He loves Sasha and I think Nadia is going to do something to make him wish he had claimed Sasha to all.  D is making good steps toward deserving Sasha.  Thank you for the update.

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Date: July 24 2013
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

I am so glad you are making these two realize they cannot go up against big daddy unless they stand strong, together.

Still mad at Nadia about the spitting, but if Sasha wants to let that go...

Wonder how big daddy is going to get wind of Sasha being back inthe picture?  What can he do to them, since Nadia is stronger and these two have one another backs?

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Date: July 03 2014
Title: Sasha: The Wallflower

This has been a lovely journey and thank you for inviting us to come along.  I honestly hate to see this one end.

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Date: October 25 2014
Title: Chapter 1: Cast

Love the cover! Love the story!  Just brought a copy, because I had to own it and left a review.   Congrats!

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Date: November 25 2015
There's No Crying in Baseball by Thewayiam
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 46]
Summary:

No matter what happens, there's no crying in baseball. On the field that is. Skylar Rose Lansing tries her best not too anyway. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Crackfic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 10984
Read Count: 6911
Published: June 04 2013
Updated: June 14 2013

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great update...where's my grown up Brian?

 

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Date: June 09 2013
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In Circles We Go by Quila Cole
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 146]
Summary:

 

Quitting love is never easy; no matter the situation. That saying seems to follow Jake Ryder in the once vibrant form of Sierra Lewis. The cycle doesn't seem to stop, or maybe he just doesn't want it to.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content
Series: Impossible to Kill
Chapters: 13
Completed:Yes
Word count: 43800
Read Count: 20051
Published: June 08 2013
Updated: May 27 2014

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Title: Chapter 8: Fireworks. Part II

still sticking...

 Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 28 2013
Title: Chapter 1: Them.

not feeling Sierra with Jake--it's not so much her drug use as the way she takes him for granted.  Wish he would move on with Monica and Sierra should move on to the rehab center.  Jake can still love her, but just not be 'in' love with her. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! :)

 Reviewer: Penelope Signed
Date: June 16 2013
Title: Chapter 1: Them.

Very intense story.  Sierra has selective hearing, bc she heard Jake say he didn't blame her, but it's as though she didn't notice him not stating he still loved her.  I hope she gets well and gets Viktor. 

Jake can still care and love Sierra, but the trust is gone.  If he goes back to her, then he is not what Monica needs and she should remove herself from the drama.

How can Sierra allow the man to do to her what was done to her mom---I mean your  whole family was taken from you and you just give up?  Why did she even go to Victor in the first place if she loved Jake?  This story is very good and I look forward to the updates.



Author's Response:

Sierra really does have select hearing and that's something that she needs to deal with. If she feels rejected she'll latch on to something else that was said and misconstrue it's meaning.

Sierra has many issues; insurcurties amongst other things. She really doesn't know what it means to love someone and how to treat them. And she did just give up and went to Viktor even though she knew Jake loved her. She felt lost.

Thanks for reading and reviewing Penelope! :)

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Date: July 10 2013
Title: Chapter 1: Them.

I was just starting to like Monica, but then she had to show her trifling ways.  I feel for Jake bc all of what Sierra has done, he still loves her.  If he can forgive her and she can stay clean then they should be together. 

Monica showed her insecurity and just how low she will go to keep the man--wanting to fight Sierra in the bathroom...trifling.  She has a lot to learn bc a bj will not keep Jake and if he had seen her nasty way she treated Sierra, he would have walked.  Sierra needs to do Sierra for a while. 

Would love to read a story about the Butcher.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading Penelope. Oh, The Butcher is coming. 

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Date: September 04 2013
Title: Chapter 1: Them.

i don't think the readers hate Monica as much as they were and are disappointed in her.  Of course she was there as a friend (although Deena scoped her game early) and never made a move on Jake.  Monica just went for the one she loves whenthe opportunity presented itself--thanks to the ex. 

Monica will realize how much of a rebound chick she is to Jake when he accidentally calls her his ex's name. 

I want Monica with the Butcher and Jake with the one he really loves, but he needs to know it will be a daily battle with her impulsive and addictive personality; only he can decide if she is worth it.

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Date: September 10 2013
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One Part of a Whole by EveryBit12
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 62]
Summary:

When Sandra Taliaferro is left dead from a street rivalry, she leaves behind her teenage daughter Aubrey, and a box of secrets leading her to figure out a missing part to her life story.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 74337
Read Count: 109239
Published: June 14 2013
Updated: February 23 2014

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

can't wait for Aubrey to tell Nat to stop being a perv.  I wish Sandra wasn't really dead--just faking it to protect Maurice and Aubrey.  I can't picture Antonio with anyone--it's like he's half a character w/o Sandra. 

I think Nat would beat Aubrey in a fight, so that is where Sandra could come in and say she knew Nat was behind her near rape and commence to spanking that azz.  

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Date: July 10 2013
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Bree has a good heart and will probably be Mary's savior.  I am glad you made her tough bc she is going to need to be this way where this family is concerned. 

I think Tony will be heart broken at Sandra's death and welcome Bree.  Now we need love interests for Bree, Tony, & Mary.  So glad I didn't skip this story.  Thanks!

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Date: June 16 2013
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I like that this story is moving at a fast pace and I love that Nat met her match in a teen.  Thanks for the update.

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Date: June 17 2013
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I look forward to reading your updates.  I feel for Aubrey and I'm glad she's strong, but mentally she is starting to break and needs Antonio. 

Who is Lillian?  Please don't let Antonio be into such a calleous and cold-hearted person.

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Date: July 07 2013
Can't Catch A Break by SaraiDanielle
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 52]
Summary:

AJ is your your average teenager living in this day and age. Little bit of drugs, some drinking, and a whole lot of sex. But waking up one Saturday to someone making a ruckus outside your apartment door, you don't expect to open it and find the one you regret staring back at you. Along with a carseat containing a baby she claims is yours.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Rape, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 20867
Read Count: 12205
Published: June 20 2013
Updated: September 24 2013

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Title: Chapter 1: So We Meet Again

I love your story and will try to hang in there with you, but right now AJ is working a nerve.  I thought maybe he and Io. could get together, but now I think she should go for the brother coming out of prison.   AJ is just too risky--the girl would come home and there is no telling who would be in their bed.  At least he has the sense to use protection--sometimes.   

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Date: June 25 2013
Title: Chapter 7: Welcome Home

now that we know AJ is not interested in Io--and Adrian is, Io can bring this hard- hearted man into the light and her work will be an uphill batle. Story is getting better--thanks for the update!

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Date: July 01 2013
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Bloody Wrists and Broken Hearts by shyangel
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 64]
Summary:

 

10 years went by in the blink of an eye. Now eveyone was gathered in a tiny town for there highschool reunion. Sparks will fly as old 'friends' meet again.

Then enters two guys who have come with the intention of wooing the one girl they shouldnt have let go of in the first place. The only problem is there after the same girl.

On this unlevel playing field where hurt, love and jealousy run wild everyone is playing for keeps



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 15228
Read Count: 10427
Published: June 22 2013
Updated: November 16 2013

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Reunion

after thinking a bit more about this story, i think mark gave him to peer pressure and the ideas his parents social class placed on him.  he was not a good friend to her, but he was a friend at a time when he was not suppose to even acknowledge her. 



Author's Response:

This is the direction i was going to carry it in but because of the overwhelming public out cry I think I'm going to throw in another guy as competition. Pople change but is it enough, thats where im going.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

 Reviewer: Penelope Signed
Date: June 27 2013
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Reunion

does she have to get back with Mark?  Please introduce someone worthy, bc i don't think she can truly love a person that she doesn't respect.   



Author's Response:

A rival will appear but in the end she get back with Mark. Unlless my muse doesnt like the idea when i get there. 

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

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Date: June 26 2013
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Reunion

Mark...MArk who? hahaha.   I loved every line and comeback.  Are you sure Mark is the main man in this, bc from where I'm sitting, Mark can't even afford to be in the same room as M. 



Author's Response:

Mark is the main man but he has a lot of work to do. he is going to have to earn her love, then prove he has changed. and he only has two weeks.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

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Date: June 25 2013
Broken Glass by Diamond
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 25]
Summary:

It all started when they met in college, and she discovered his secret.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 6344
Read Count: 5156
Published: July 04 2013
Updated: July 06 2013

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Please don't let her stalk this Cassanova.  Her character is funny, though, and a size 14-16 ain't bad---something for him to hang onto and for her to fall back on when she gets sick.

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Date: July 04 2013
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Body Party by Bryleigh Lisette
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 189]
Summary:

An innocent night of fun ruins the lives of two people who realize they are screwed without each other but especially with each other.

 

"My body is your party"



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:Yes
Word count: 44180
Read Count: 56979
Published: July 07 2013
Updated: October 04 2013

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So will Tobi get rid of his crawling sex slaves?  Mom is not going to be too thrilled about her boy bringing home Ari.  I hope Ari completes her dream of finishing school--they both still need to grow up more.



Author's Response:

Lol  I have no clue if Tobias will...mwahaha

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Date: July 12 2013
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

maybe the pill was a placebo or it didn't work for her--fingers crossed.  if this happens then she should keep the baby, but get away from tobias for a while--let her get strong enough to take on his mama.

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Date: August 02 2013
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

uh uh it's on now--so glad she is going to keep the baby, and the doc was smooth in lettingher hwear the heartbeat before telling her about the baby.  Wanna know what T. is up to.  Update soon, please.

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Date: August 08 2013
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Kris has a death wish and Ari tells too many people her business.

 Reviewer: Penelope Signed
Date: August 09 2013

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.