Penname: RedMoon [Contact]

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Member Since: March 25 2013

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Reading and living in a world of my own making is my life




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Lovers' Dance by K Carr
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 572]
Summary:

Madison DuMont, English by birth but raised in New York, has returned to England to pursue her dream of being a top ballerina with her best friend and fellow dancer, Dante Palmer. After encountering the same racial issues with being a black ballerina in a predominantly white field she experienced in NY, Madison invests her inheritance in opening her own ballet company. A chance meeting with Matthew Bradley one night leads her down an unexpected path where she battles her personal perceptions of interracial relationships and whether they are worth it.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 26
Read Count: 118379
Published: May 11 2014
Updated: September 05 2014

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Title: Lovers' Dance

I love you sooo much for how you update! It's the best!

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Date: May 27 2014
Title: Lovers' Dance

Nooooo don't do this too me! More more! I hate that girl( Louisa) just move on 

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Date: June 03 2014
Title: Lovers' Dance

I knew it! I knew he would doubt their love.... She knew it too, that's why she didn't want him to see her...

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Date: July 22 2014
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love it instant fave!! I hated to come to the end of the post! Please update soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your kind and encouraging words. Will def update some more soon and fingers cross it's just as entertaining

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Date: May 12 2014
Full Circle: Here and Now by tens
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 17]
Summary:

Ivan "Vanya" Kirillovich Pravdin never expected to fall in love when he went to law school. He just wanted time away from his father and their oppressive family business. However, fate had other plans. 

He can't help but be attracted to Persephone Peterson, the beautiful young woman that sits next to him in his Contracts class. Her unusual name and strong constitution are intriguing. Unfortunately, his family business is getting in the way of the relationship he wants to pursue with her. Will Vanya be able to reconcile obligations to his family with his new love?



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 267
Read Count: 16165
Published: June 05 2014
Updated: July 04 2014

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yay! Wanna see how they turn out

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Date: June 07 2014
My Love... by Joelle Jax
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 17]
Summary:

A man's heart speaks, knowing his lover's heart will hear him.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Family, Historical, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death, Original Characters, Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 9
Read Count: 3596
Published: July 01 2014
Updated: July 01 2014

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was so soulful so heartfelt thT I read it twice and cried both times. Life is but temporary but real love is everlasting ....



Author's Response:

I agree.  Thanks RedMoon!

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Date: July 07 2014
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is my favorite thing to read, although I can never read it with a dry eye. I thank you for writing it 



Author's Response:

YW.  Thank you, RedMoon, for such a lovely compliment.

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Date: October 24 2014
Retired
Adaline:The Silent by sha2011
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 286]
Summary:

SEQUEL to Sasha: the Wallflower. Adaline Lang is an up and coming photographer with more than her own set of problems. During her cousin's wedding she comes face-to-face with the man that she had fallen in love with as a child. Only to find out he was in love with someone else. What will she do to finally be heard and convince him that the perfect women he has been looking for is standing right in front of him?

Dominic Vikhrov is caught between a rock and a hard place. The woman he has fawned after for so many years has finally returned to the United States. But he isn't the only one who is fighting for her heart. Never one to lose, Dominic has his eye on the prize no matter the cost. But will his tunnel vision blind him to something even greater?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 37246
Read Count: 40809
Published: October 24 2014
Updated: November 20 2015

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Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Yes!!! This is going to be so good!!! Are you going to do Slades story too?

 

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Date: October 24 2014
UNSCRUBBED: the tale of a sleeping beauty by Elizabeth Griffin
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 67]
Summary:

UNSCRUBBED: The tale of a sleeping beauty (The Scrub Series Book 1) by [Griffin, Elizabeth]             WWW.ELIZABETHGRIFFIN.NET 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 22462
Read Count: 4647
Published: November 27 2014
Updated: January 28 2015

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Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 7 - 8

Omg Elise! I hope someone finds her

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Date: January 28 2015
Retired
Heart of Lies by K Carr
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 239]
Summary:

Not everyone gets a happy ending...

Hey guys,

Heart of Lies Book 1&2 have now been published under one of my pennames Alma Muerte.

FB Author page: Alma Muerte.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 2951
Read Count: 32560
Published: January 27 2015
Updated: September 10 2015

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Title: Heart of Lies

Yeah not confused at all Eros is not the one . Even if her and Arric don't workout , even though their love is real and true , she isn't even safe with Eros . He can't even feel anything without his sire knowing so how can he defy her ? Like I said she needs to stop being timid and learn she she's her powers have grown now all we need is confidence and I think she'll get that when she sees she has to protect her babe . Eros is crazy manipulative and is being controlled by his sire . Yeah no team Eros for me 

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Date: August 08 2015
Title: Heart of Lies

No! Don't die! I love Arric! But I understand the sacrifice 



Author's Response:

I think you're one of the few to admit loving Arric :) maybe the only one?!

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Date: April 05 2015
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

<sigh> This made my eyes tear up , i felt her pain at his reply.  Love is not always kind, just or unselfiish , it just is. Sometimes you love someone without reason and it is the purest love you can ever know , but it hurts the worse. I think , I know that she will go back because no matter where she goes , even if she gets away this time, she can be on the run for years, but at somepoint she will go back. They are bonded.



Author's Response:

Hi Redmoon,

I really enjoyed reading your review on the complexities of love, and I agree completely. Thanks for reviewing.

K.

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Date: January 28 2015
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ok, so I've been thinking about some comments and things in the story .

1. I don't think Valan is doing or has ever done anything to hurt Lyssa. He gave them a subtle push to stand by each others side in face of adversity ,not fall in love and mate . This pack with the Vampires was her idea and doing , while I feel like he didn't want her to do it , in a way she needs to. She needs to be around her kind ,to learn them . She's is a living Vampire who is more powerful than them but she cowers in their presence and feels more comfort with Wolves . This can not be. She has to learn to awaken and control her power . What we saw at the battle I think was just a small vet small look at her power . I think her uncles blood was more keeping her in check , because she wasn't ready than loaning her power . 

2. She is the one that can truely rebuild her coven . Eros is needed for that . I think him and his sire are trying to get her to have feelings for him so the can breed her continuously . I don't trust him. He didn't see ant "potential" in her until she bore her flesh, which could have been a ploy to not seem so eager . But he belittles her value and allows others to do it in his presence . His intentions aren't true.

3. I think Annabell is out for her , I think she resents her for being able to do what she can't .

4. Arric and her bond is unbreakable and I think he handled the situation well. I know he wishes their babe had lived but they are of two seperate species . It's a wonder she caught at all . 

5. Lyssa needs to come into her own and quick . I think they are plotting against her . She needs to learn those around her their strengths and weaknesses . Who can be influenced and who can't and know her damn worth and power !!! Stop hiding and let them see what a true Vampire can do 

 

 

ok that's all I think 

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Date: July 23 2015
Title: Heart of Lies

A lesson well taught . Valan knows what he's doing , she must learn to trust and depend on herself . It's a lesson we all learn . She has to grow in her powers and her into trusting those abilities .  The quicker she comes to terms with the fact that she is a vampire and not a wolf and what that entails the better she will b . I'm not worried about the darkness because it's a part of her , you must have balance . She isn't a child and can't thrive on the rose colored outlook and comfort of the world she has grown to know . She has to see the harshness of the world . Trust no one but yourself , is it a lonely way to live ,maybe , but is it necessary in the vampire world absolutely . She has to protect herself and her babe . No one ever said learning life lessons was all peaches and cream 

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Date: August 13 2015
Ravenous by Jinrey9023
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 30]
Summary:

Years of craving can only end in satisfaction. Kory Lane and Kai Wu will soon learn that not all cravings can be appeased.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 16033
Read Count: 5579
Published: February 04 2015
Updated: July 10 2016

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Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning

Ohhh yes! Me like this ALOT

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Date: February 04 2015
Alpha by Twelve20One
Rated: Members ONLY: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 321]
Summary:

 


When Caleb, heir of the four and alpha of his pack, attends a party celebrating his twin deltas’ birthday, he doesn't anticipate finding Luna’s greatest gift: his mate, Ava-Rain. Immediately consumed with curiosity and undeniable interest, he manages to make his presence known to her, but their introduction is kept brief. To reject one’s mate is to reject Luna herself, and that is exactly what Caleb intends to do. Not because he wants to but because he has to. But will he be able to stay away in order to ensure both her and his pack’s safety, or will their unbreakable connection lure him back and add even more trouble into the mix?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship
Story Status: Taking a short break from this story
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death, Original Characters, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 26
Completed:No
Word count: 165660
Read Count: 34486
Published: March 27 2015
Updated: October 30 2016

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Title: Chapter 9: 6 (2) - '. . .that's me locked inside reality's maze.'

So it's the same just reposted ?



Author's Response:

Hi, RedMoon! Apart from some minor changes, Alpha is pretty much the same.

Thanks so much for reading it then & I hope you'll enjoy it the second time around! :)

 Reviewer: RedMoon Signed
Date: April 21 2015

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