Penname: bookbutterfly [Contact]

Real name: Melanie

Member Since: April 07 2013

Membership status: Member

Bio:

I live and work in Germany, teaching English and taking care of my family.


Like most writers here, I love to read. Writing is awfully hard, but so worth doing. My goal is to get better, bit by bit.




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[Reviews - 44]
Summary:

Morphine Jones isn't your average girl. She's a new member of the avengers named the Blue Inferno. She's what she likes to call, a "Super Pyrokinetic". She has pyrokinesis and she controls fire. Loki has escaped his prison cell in Asgard, and he is heading to Midgard to cause more damage.What happens when Blue Inferno meets Loki, the god of mischief and lies? Will fire and ice collide, or will everything fizzle out. (This takes place after the Avengers movie. I DO NOT own the Avengers or Loki, I only own Morphine and other original characters.)



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Categories: Movies
Characters: None
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Action-Adventure , Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Fluff, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: Laufeyson and Surturdottir
Chapters: 20
Completed:Yes
Word count: 34425
Read Count: 12478
Published: June 09 2014
Updated: July 17 2014


Title: Chapter 7: You're not a human

Sure, she could pe part Fire Demon or part Dark Elf or a mix? Her blue hair and fierceness point to Other Realm...

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed
Date: June 12 2014

Title: Chapter 13: Club Chaos

Loki is hot as a chick. You had me in chuckles.

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed
Date: June 23 2014

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Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: Uhura's World Series
Chapters: 0
Completed:No
Word count: 0
Read Count: 0
Published: January 01 1970
Updated: January 01 1970


Title: None

A widower isa man who has lost his wife.

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed
Date: June 18 2014

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 165]
Summary:

Banner by: Sienna Gray

 

All Camryn Clifford wanted to do was live out her dream. She had made it out of her dead end town but her old life wanted to pull her back in.

Richard Hammonds wanted Camryn and he would have her. He has skeletons in his closet that he needs to keep from her to win her.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:Yes
Word count: 68991
Read Count: 57821
Published: June 20 2014
Updated: May 24 2015


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Curious. How is a beautiful BW struggling to gain control in her private life gonna take to being dominated like that? Curious to see if there's a difference between Trey's and Richard's type of dominance...

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed
Date: June 20 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 519]
Summary:

Elise is a struggling college student that can barely pay tuition. With a lousy job and is on the verge of getting kicked out of med school she has to find a way to pay. So with no only choice she looks in the personals and looks for a sugar daddy.

Jameson is a successful man that does not have time to date. With the pressure of his family to wed and women using him he just wants to experience a relationship without the drama. So he makes an ad to find a sugar baby.

What happens when both of these two get together?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 50520
Read Count: 111872
Published: June 24 2014
Updated: August 25 2017


Title: Chapter 2: School Woes

Interesting. Looking forward to more. But don't rush the telling. Helps get into your story...

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed
Date: July 10 2014

Title: Chapter 10: Trips and Promises

I cannot get a fix on Mason. Is he a manwhore working his way down a list? Or did he see her with Jameson and decide to try a thing? What's his motivation?

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed
Date: October 01 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Cast

I love this pairing. And it totally works that he's a young startup millionaire. 

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed
Date: July 11 2014

Title: Sugar Baby Love

I like the scenario. You should show us more stuff, rather that tell us. For example a quick conversation with his mom on the phone would show us that she wants grandkids and so on. Still, you are a great writer, and I am just gonna hold off telling you how to drive your story. 

 



Author's Response:

Yeah I had a lazy moment, but yeah I'm working on more dialogue with that. I understand where you are coming from. Thank you all critsim is good I appreciate it.

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed
Date: July 11 2014

Title: Chapter 4: Clause

The clause isn't a hardship, as if she does fall in love, she will want to marry. Interesting that he had that contract drawn up before he met her. Is he willing to marry anyone, provided they love him?

Interesting.

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed
Date: August 12 2014

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

So if he cannot have her love, he will accept the love of her child? Um huh? Sounds like someone needs therapy.

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed
Date: August 15 2014

Title: Chapter 6: Boundaries

She accepted his conditions, so she has to play along. As for her greeting him in red, where was he to greet her?

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed
Date: August 16 2014

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[Reviews - 8]
Summary:

 

Hello again my Chamber friends I appreciate the opinions that were posted here and the ones that were personally sent to me. I have decided that I will keep the names the same and the story of Kayla and Tyler as well, but I think I’m going to polish it up a little bit without changing the story line. As for the new characters I have decided to let this be an independent story and this will be the first chapter into the world of Kaila, Jordan and Canada with a few changes starting with where it takes place and a few other little things. I will be reposting this first chapter when i have it redone so please be looking out for it, and again thank you all so much for your input.

 

 

 

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 2083
Read Count: 1130
Published: June 28 2014
Updated: June 28 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Bolding the names is distracting

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed
Date: June 29 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 83]
Summary:

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Four adopted brothers who share a bond closer than any natural DNA  come home after being summoned by Evelyn Mercer, their mother.  This is the story of the Mercer Men and the women they love.



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies
Characters: None
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 36
Completed:No
Word count: 98148
Read Count: 24863
Published: July 08 2014
Updated: July 24 2014


Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 Culture and Roadblocks

Ooh! 

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed
Date: July 22 2014

Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Jeremiah's Decision

The real deal.

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed
Date: July 15 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 9]
Summary:

boys night out

 

No brother gets left behind



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles , General
Genre: Comedy , Family
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Un-betaed
Series: The Blue Brothers
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2761
Read Count: 1157
Published: July 15 2014
Updated: July 15 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Blue is the Warmest Color

Nice. More please.

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed
Date: July 15 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Two friends experiencing a slump in their sex lives decide to take their relationship to the next level to solve their problem.



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3764
Read Count: 4362
Published: July 18 2014
Updated: July 18 2014


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

:-D

 

hit all the right spots!

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed
Date: July 18 2014

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[Reviews - 573]
Summary:

Zoey Vance woke up in the hospital with no memory of her life before that moment. She doesn't even know her own name. Now she has to try and put the pieces of her life back together with the help of the man who hit her with his car that fateful night. As her memories start to return she wonders if she is better off not knowing who she really is. 

Brian Preston is consumed with guilt, the woman just ran out into the street with no warning. He coudln't avoid hitting her. He feels it is his personal responsibility to care for her until she can care for herself and moves her in with him and his fiance, Macy. As time wears on he starts to wonder if he wants her around to ease his guilt or if there aren't bigger emotions at play.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 33
Completed:Yes
Word count: 77720
Read Count: 103525
Published: July 19 2014
Updated: October 14 2018


Title: Chapter 2: The End

That was a great start! Glad to see you back!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed
Date: July 30 2016

Title: Chapter 1: Cast Pictures

Your story is coming along nicely! Well done!



Author's Response:

Thanks! 😊

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed
Date: January 24 2017

Title: Chapter 31: Not Dead

Yay! Well done! A good run. Zoey just needs to wrap up her divorce with Henry. 

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed
Date: January 21 2018

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Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:

Chase James is Chris' older brother from Making It Hard For Me. Chase recently filed for divorce freeing himself from a woman he never loved. Although he would like to pursue a meaningful relationship with someone, now is not the time. With Chris starting his internship program, Chase is down a mechanic and in serious need of help. Maya has lived a sheltered life helping her father run his Auto Repair Shop until he passed away 6 months ago. Without enough customers to support the shop, Maya was forced to close it. After several months without work, she is in desperate need of a job.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Incest , Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 19395
Read Count: 40431
Published: August 11 2014
Updated: December 22 2014


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4- December Part 3

Just one paragraph more.....ooooh!



Author's Response:

Ha! Ha! I hope the next chapter makes up for not having that one more paragraph. Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed
Date: September 15 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 8]
Summary:

A chance encounter turns into something more for a young black woman.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1255
Read Count: 2401
Published: September 17 2014
Updated: September 17 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Pretty crowded for a Thrusday

Oooh! That's you! I remember reading that story about the housesitter, years ago... And wishing there had been more! I'm glad you're bringing all that hot, sexy writing over to The Chamber! Welcome!

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed
Date: September 18 2014

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Summary:

Sally McDonald is not who anyone thinks. Her life is filled with secrets. Some she doesn't even know about. But when Storm Monsello sees the terrified girl one night, he never expects how much her secrets would reveal the dark actions of the people he trusted the most.  



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Character Death, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 43
Completed:No
Word count: 133222
Read Count: 426115
Published: September 21 2014
Updated: April 26 2020


Title: Chapter 1: Coincidence

I like it. Just the right touch of mystery to keep me going to the next chapter. One thing niggling at me. If she's strapped for cash and working in a seedy dive, why did she turn down the cash her friend was offering to cover for her? Maybe they could've split it, or did Rhonda need it more? That stuck out. Other than that, good stuff. Your writing has a very cinematic feel... Very descriptive. Good stuff.

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed
Date: September 30 2014

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Joshua just wanted to help out his band's singer get over the blues with a little drinking and a little loving- that's all.

Right?

 

****Sexy banner by the one and only Elizablu****



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: Of Steel and Silt
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2939
Read Count: 2717
Published: September 28 2014
Updated: September 28 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Her

Oh. Wow. That. Was. Everything. 



Author's Response:

Many thanks, bookbutterfly!

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed
Date: September 29 2014

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Summary:


   Caleb Garrison has been in love with Grey ever since they were children. He even told his parents while a child that someday he would marry her. However, there was one problem...although adopted, she was legally his sister.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:Yes
Word count: 29115
Read Count: 36926
Published: October 07 2014
Updated: November 05 2017


Title: Chapter 1: Sister

What I mean is, your story seems to be based in the UK, where the type of relationship he's hankering after, is in fact illegal. For the purposes of the law, they were raised as siblings regardless of the biological "truth" of them not being related... That's why I ask, where are you taking this story?



Author's Response:

Honestly , i dont know lol its a taboo story and it is illegal in the U.s and UK. Ill see as i get to this point. Its fiction, however stuff like this does go on in real life we just dont know about it. So as the story progresses Im basically using my imagination when stuff like this actually occur and how it usually ends or begins.

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed
Date: October 07 2014

Title: Chapter 2: Jealousy

Hmmm. Where are you going with this?

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed
Date: October 07 2014

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