Penname: kiavicmcp [Contact]

Real name: kiarah

Member Since: May 04 2013

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[Reviews - 1032]
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A virtual wallflower for most of her life, what will Sasha do when she encounters the first man to ever make her want to be noticed? Dmitri is a man used to being surrounded by the most beautiful things, including women. Will he accept Sasha, a woman who is usually overshadowed by the beauty of her friends? Is he capable of noticing that while her beauty may not be as blatant, it should still be treaured? This is the story of a wallflower and the man she loves.

 

Sasha: the Wallflower has been removed from this site and is available for purchase on Amazon Kindle. Thank you all for your support!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2670
Read Count: 196756
Published: May 31 2013
Updated: November 25 2015


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

wow this was a really good chapter and i'm so glad teagan didn't turn into a bitch at least she has one friend and i'm so glad she told dmitri about himself go sasha i can't wait for the next chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! Glad you enjoyed it!

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Date: June 04 2013

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

slade you bad boy he better have a good reason for why he blew off dina

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Date: August 15 2013

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Ok Sasha did everything wrong this chapter yes she did I don't care they are not married and they have only been seeing each other a few months when he told her to back off she should have eased up no one likes it when someone is constantly pushing and pushing and your not ready to move but Dmitri just destroyed her I mean that was an overkill I mean wow I can't wait to see how these to get back together.

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Date: November 18 2013

Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Carter may be a nice guy but sasha's just not feeling him,there's nothing worse than someone trying to force a relationship you can't make your heart feel what it doesn't want to feel. Sasha and Dmitri are to old to play games with each other they should just sit and have a nice chat if Sasha's not ready to work things out with him than that's ok he can step back and give her time maybe try and build a friendship and then try to get back to where they were before everything went down hill. It seems he has forgiven Sasha maybe she will listen to what he has to say and forgive him to because yeah she did a lot of wrong too.

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Date: January 29 2014

Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

Dmitri's good in my book I never stopped liking him.

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Date: June 02 2014

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

oh you sly one who's at the door I don't think its his brother so who is it come on you can tell me



Author's Response:

haha. Sorry, can't give anything way. But I'm going to update soon!

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Date: June 26 2013

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

aw good for them



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review!

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Date: June 18 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Cast

so what does he want he's not looking for a relationship bit he not looking to just have sex so why is he wasting teegan time what game is he playing 



Author's Response:

We'll find out soon...Thank you for your review! :-)

Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed
Date: June 02 2013

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

i'm waiting for slade to show up he's a hottie and sasha is just like her friends lusting for this man the only difference is she shy about it truthfully she seems kinds desperate and thats not cute.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! The actor's name for Slade is Karl Yune in case you were wondering. He is so FINE! lol

Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed
Date: May 31 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Cast

well you've got my attention 



Author's Response:

lol Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed
Date: May 31 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 32]
Summary:

medication title pic

Troubled FBI Special Agent Michael Wolfe knows his fair share of loss and pain.  As a criminal profiler within the Behavioural Analyst Unit, he has seen many horrors. But none more haunting than witnessing the death of his wife. Consumed with grief and guilt Michael drowns himself in work.  His partner Special Agent Patrick Kepler suggests a very unconventional form of therapy.  Will he take it?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Psychological
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 3656
Read Count: 13000
Published: June 06 2013
Updated: October 14 2015


Title: Chapter 1: The Cast

nice start

Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed
Date: June 06 2013

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10 years went by in the blink of an eye. Now eveyone was gathered in a tiny town for there highschool reunion. Sparks will fly as old 'friends' meet again.

Then enters two guys who have come with the intention of wooing the one girl they shouldnt have let go of in the first place. The only problem is there after the same girl.

On this unlevel playing field where hurt, love and jealousy run wild everyone is playing for keeps



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 15228
Read Count: 10429
Published: June 22 2013
Updated: November 16 2013


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5-The other guy

Wow I just adore Cam I hope he gets the girl both of them have been through so much and they had each other to lean on. So I take it Mark is about to find out that the person cam is reconnecting with is Melody while on his drive. Thanks for the update can't wait for the next.

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Date: November 16 2013

Title: Chapter 5: Cast

um no ann is 16 yrs old that would be weird for her and cam to hook up

Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed
Date: July 12 2013

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4-The Other Side of the Coin

oh man iso can't wait for the next chapter

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Date: July 12 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 25]
Summary:

It all started when they met in college, and she discovered his secret.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 6344
Read Count: 5159
Published: July 04 2013
Updated: July 06 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wow don't know what to say about this girl

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Date: July 04 2013

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[Reviews - 189]
Summary:

An innocent night of fun ruins the lives of two people who realize they are screwed without each other but especially with each other.

 

"My body is your party"



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:Yes
Word count: 44180
Read Count: 56981
Published: July 07 2013
Updated: October 04 2013


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

cool story i like tobias

Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 07 2013

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

no and mob

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Date: July 10 2013

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

so far i like the pace between the two and yes ariana will find out about her pass but i'm waiting for her to find out about his or should i say future

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Date: July 18 2013

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Paris finds herself on a deserted highway out of gas.  Little did she know that her life would be forever changed after that.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Lonely Highways, Love In Hard Times
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 558
Read Count: 82573
Published: July 17 2013
Updated: August 27 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

what is this tease you just gave us. Its like the start of a nice love story



Author's Response:

LOL  See Jacci's rules on the home page.  I guess it was just supposed to be a challenge.

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Date: July 17 2013

Title: Chance Encounter

damn go billy go billy go billy lol

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Date: July 30 2013

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Summary:

Shanna's car craps out on her in the middle of now where.  In all honesty her poor planning is what has got her into this predicament but the rude yet goregeous guy that  is helping her out of has something about him that she just can't shake.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General, Supernatural
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 14100
Read Count: 14247
Published: July 22 2013
Updated: January 05 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

she walks out while she thinks he's about to have a seizure lol and her mom talking about that's his stomach growling.I like it

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Date: July 23 2013

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 88]
Summary:

Can a beauty ever truly love a beast?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Fantasy, Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 15551
Read Count: 72305
Published: August 04 2013
Updated: October 19 2013


Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Wow I can't believe he did that to her 

Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 19 2013

Title: Chapter 2: The Cast

Could you please please please tell me the name of the actor or model used for nikoli 



Author's Response:

I used the model Ricki Hall. 

I'm sorry that I took forever to reply. 

Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed
Date: December 15 2013

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Summary:

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Response to the Made to Order challenge!

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death
Challenges: Made to Order
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:Yes
Word count: 54406
Read Count: 50803
Published: September 11 2013
Updated: December 18 2013


Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 The Chase

So Thomas disn't report Anne because he didn't want to deal with it and now she's running around hurting the people he cares about 

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Date: October 18 2013

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Summary:

Denise is a young woman who is on the verge of giving up on love. Never having love in her life she is wondering what is wrong until she meets Issac. Issac has been avoiding relationships for the past few years to support himself but is ashamed of telling someone what he does for a living. Will he tell her his secret? But will she tell him hers?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:Yes
Word count: 35052
Read Count: 29405
Published: October 29 2013
Updated: December 08 2013


Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I like that show and Nick trips me out you can't tell that man he's not the best at what he does but you're right it's harder on women than it is on men being an escort especially with how judgemental people are but hey I don't judge and I have no problem with anyone who makes a living doing it and if the rest of the "whores and sluts" as most people like to call them joined an escort service they would make so much more money and it's legal so they don't have to worry about police and all their clients have to get tested and background checks done before they meet there date.

Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 10 2013

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.