Penname: kiavicmcp [Contact]

Real name: kiarah

Member Since: May 04 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 97]
Summary:

Denise is a young woman who is on the verge of giving up on love. Never having love in her life she is wondering what is wrong until she meets Issac. Issac has been avoiding relationships for the past few years to support himself but is ashamed of telling someone what he does for a living. Will he tell her his secret? But will she tell him hers?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:Yes
Word count: 35052
Read Count: 29405
Published: October 29 2013
Updated: December 08 2013


Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Wow you ladys are being really hard on male escorts their jobs are not shameful like your making it out to be watch an episode of gigolos those men take great pride in their work and they love to please women and I have nothing but respect for them. Issac should have told her upfront what he did fot a living. 



Author's Response:

Yes I was inspired by gigolos and yes those men are professionals it's more of a double standard for men especially for society standards as most people would think it would be a leisure for men.

Thank you for reading keep enjoying. 

Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 09 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 277]
Summary:

Lance was a man who had it all and lost it all. He was down and out and was ready to give up because he had nothing to live for. Nina was a woman who had enough of being used and was trying to start her life over in a new city. When these two meet will Lance have something to live for? Or will he continue to live in misery. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 27
Completed:Yes
Word count: 40637
Read Count: 72038
Published: December 09 2013
Updated: July 06 2015


Title: Chapter 13: Unexpected Meetings

Yay your back. I like how you did the time jump and summed up what she had been doing up till she meets Lance again. Although I am curious to know how he got back on his feet so fast. Jmo I like the chemistry between Lance and Nina.



Author's Response:

Thank you. All will be answered of course.

Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 20 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 76]
Summary:

 

British Mogul, Sir Benjamin Harvey Nichols VI has always gotten everything he wanted out of life. He worked hard and played hard. He lived in a world of celebrities, models, and money. However, a series of tragic events has him re-evaluating his priorities. When fate serves him a cup, which will he choose?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 14759
Read Count: 17243
Published: January 08 2014
Updated: January 25 2014


Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

And just like that Ed became my favorite character.

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Date: January 16 2014

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

yay! update

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Date: January 09 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 39]
Summary:

Rya, a dreamer at heart is as imaginative as her mind allows her to be. She can't wait to go off into world and live a life full of adventure. Haseem yearns for a normal safe life. After leaving a troubled past, he hopes to somehow atone for his sins and start with a clean slate. Without complications.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 8428
Read Count: 2654
Published: February 04 2014
Updated: February 17 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Save me.

She's annoying but he's cool.



Author's Response:

Lol yeah she can be a bit annoying I guess, we'll see if you warm up to her in the next chapters. :P

Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 04 2014

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 542]
Summary:

How far will you go when you're lonely?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 75
Completed:No
Word count: 151713
Read Count: 143289
Published: March 13 2014
Updated: July 17 2015


Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Jodi's what the kids call a THOT and I don't understand what Steve see's in her anybody in their right mind would have quit her especially sense she's so vocal about spreading her legs for any man who looks at her.On second thought maybe Steve knows and that's why he treats her like street boot. Craig what an idiot you screw up your chance with your ex for someone you know is fucked up. 



Author's Response:

What is a THOT? LOL! Just curious!

Thanks so mcuh for the review, Kiavicmp!.

Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed
Date: June 01 2014

Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

It doesn't have to be straight and to the point. your story is like watching a move where it starts off good but then drags in the middle longer than it needed to with the characters not developing.You say the story is going somewhere but for the last 30 chapters we've been at a stand still. At least it has been for me but I still read the story I haven't thrown the towel in yet.Steve is the only character I still like.



Author's Response:

Hello, there! Thanks for giving Jodi's saga a chance, Kiavicmcp!

I appreciate your comments and have read all of the reviews for my request.

I will take every one of them seriously and will continue the story.

I plan to  keep the comments in mind in order to help me grow as a writer. It's my first time allowing anyone to see my work.

I must admit that it has been kind of hard, but definitely a growing experience.

Thanks again!

Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed
Date: June 03 2014

Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

So now he's captain save-a-hoe you can't help someone who doesn't want it.He needs to focus on working things out with his ex if he was really serious about them getting back together.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed
Date: June 03 2014

Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

THOT- That hoe over there.

She's a hoe.



Author's Response:

Thanks! LOL!

Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed
Date: June 01 2014

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Ha Steve designed her home that's how he knows his way around her home he had me worried for a second.

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Date: March 26 2014

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Well...

Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed
Date: April 01 2014

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 120]
Summary:

Five years ago, Breezy Collins, left Baton Rouge, Louisiana and vanished without a trace leaving everything and everyone behind in order to save herself from further heartbreak from the only man she has ever loved. Breezy's sister Phoenix is the only person who knows her whereabouts but not her secrets. It's her sister's wedding that brings her back home for a week. She can only hope that she can avoid running into the man that still haunts her dreams and owns her heart.

Jace Bennett, has spent the last five years searching for something that he knows doesn't exist anymore. His Heart. He's colder and more distant. All the things that use to give him joy now only bring him misery because of her but a promise is a promise and he'll uphold his end of it no matter the cost. But when a chance encounter brings him face to face with the one woman who holds the key to his happiness, he'll do everything in his power to ensure that she never leaves him again. By any means necessary, he'll try to convince her to give him Just One More Try.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 19790
Read Count: 43945
Published: May 20 2014
Updated: September 13 2014


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh you suck I can't believe you ended it there.Nice update.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. Gotta keep you wanting more. LOL!! Stay tuned. 

Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 17 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 20]
Summary:

What happens when fame and forturne enters your life? What happens when your whole world is turned upside down? Grace and Poppy Arber are in for a whirlwind after a run in with the world famous Porter Taylor. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 12678
Read Count: 5569
Published: June 01 2014
Updated: June 23 2014


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I like grace she's scared from her past relationship with porter but she still managed to take care of her daughter. I'm happy she told Porter Poppy is his so now her child can know her father. The only thing I just wish she would move on she let what happen with Porter control her whole life It's been almost 15 years and she still stuck in the past was she waiting for Porter to come back in her life again. 

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Date: June 01 2014

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 573]
Summary:

Zoey Vance woke up in the hospital with no memory of her life before that moment. She doesn't even know her own name. Now she has to try and put the pieces of her life back together with the help of the man who hit her with his car that fateful night. As her memories start to return she wonders if she is better off not knowing who she really is. 

Brian Preston is consumed with guilt, the woman just ran out into the street with no warning. He coudln't avoid hitting her. He feels it is his personal responsibility to care for her until she can care for herself and moves her in with him and his fiance, Macy. As time wears on he starts to wonder if he wants her around to ease his guilt or if there aren't bigger emotions at play.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 33
Completed:Yes
Word count: 77720
Read Count: 103526
Published: July 19 2014
Updated: October 14 2018


Title: Memories Lost

Well Brian really has no right to be upset I mean he has Macy and all. I like that kelly's not sitting around pining for Brian just hoping and wishing for the day he leaves Macy for her. And I like Derrick he seems like a really cool guy and I hope Kelly gives him a real chance and not just because Brians taken. Oh and what a husband sold his own wife.



Author's Response:

That is a man for you.  They don't want you or want to do what it  takes to get you and don't want anyone else to have you.

Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 25 2015

Title: Memories Lost

Macy may be a gold digger but  it would be a problem for me too if my fiance moved a woman in our home without discussing it with me first.



Author's Response:

He was wrong for that!

Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed
Date: July 29 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 115]
Summary:

tbk


Camille Jones accepted society's problem with her body long ago. Yet, she can't help the insecurity felt when approached by gym owner Ryan Kahuna, he was most women's wet dream. He could have any woman he wanted. 


Including her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Extreme Language, Fluff, Kink, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 11368
Read Count: 16319
Published: July 30 2014
Updated: August 28 2014


Title: Chapter 5: The -Itis

Girl I am with you on the 5 things thats have annoyed you this week. I had a white man calmly explained to me that I needed to stop getting emotional and wait for an official investigation into the death of Mike Brown before coming to any conclusions. Because it's "complicated". And I will never understand the worlds fascination with Blue's hair.Anyways loved the update and I just adore Jason Momoa.

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Date: August 28 2014

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 63]
Summary:

Felicia Adams doesn't have a regular life. She's a single mother working two jobs trying to keep a roof over her and her son's heads. One of those jobs includes being a webcam girl. She does it all for guys who are too shy to meet girls in reality, from harmless flirting to sexual acts. She then meets Andrew Harper, the sexy mysterious billionaire. Andrew just can't keep a girlfriend. His dates are selfish gold diggers, and all they want is to shine in the spotlight. All he wants is a girl to one day marry, he can't possibly find a wife on Virtualdates.com, right?




Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 9176
Read Count: 25340
Published: December 21 2014
Updated: April 08 2015


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Really you just had to pick my Idris Elba to be the asshole friend. Love me some Idris.



Author's Response:

I love Idris too, but he popped up in my head when I wanted someone sexy. Hehe!

Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 10 2015

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 21]
Summary:

A month after the stripper convention, and Mike and Zoe have ended their short relationship. Now in Savannah, ga, he and the boys are working for Rome. While rehearsing, he meets a beautiful doll faced dancer named Charity. He likes Charity, but he also doesn't want a relationship. Even when he finds himself attracted to Charity, she feels the same, but pushes away from him. The thing is, Charity has a secret, she's a burlesque dancer. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Crackfic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 5165
Read Count: 11957
Published: July 08 2015
Updated: August 10 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well I like it.

Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 08 2015

Retired
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 470]
Summary:

While returning home to Chicago from a business trip Anika Wallace and Hunter Sterling IV find themselves the only surviors of a plane crash on a South Pacific island. There's no telling when they'll make it back home or if they ever will make it back home for that matter. One thing is for sure they're going to have to learn how to get along their survival is depending on it.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 36
Completed:No
Word count: 54201
Read Count: 121653
Published: August 12 2015
Updated: March 02 2017


Title: Chapter 4: DAY 5

Oh my goodness I just don't like him and he had the nerve to threaten to blackmail her. And the nerve to tell her he wishes she would have died and another woman would have lived. I would have found a blunt object and went upside his head with it.If I were her I wouldn't be able to stand the site of him or the sound of his voice. I would have been moved myself to another part of the Island.End of rant.

Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 17 2015

Retired
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[Reviews - 316]
Summary:

It's gonna be a bumpy road!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 31436
Read Count: 43009
Published: February 08 2016
Updated: March 05 2016


Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Ok so I think Dylan is going to try and take Amelle for himself. Hillary caught on to what is going to happen to her and she's trying to worm her way back into Reuben's heart before Dylan dumps her. 

Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 12 2016

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.