Penname: Michmom2 [Contact]

Real name: Krista

Member Since: June 30 2013

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Bio: Love to read and watch Sci-Fi, Paramormal and Romance stories.  


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Summary:

At some point, you'll have to eventually let your guard down.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 192818
Read Count: 288871
Published: May 08 2013
Updated: October 03 2015


Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 19

Glad you've back. Henry is so damaged, but he needs to get his shot together.  Val deserves better and he needs to prove himself real quick. So happy you updated!! :)

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Date: April 15 2014

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 18

Yeah an update!  I loved the update.  Valerie is becoming more confident with herself and Henry.  I hope this Rhea lady doesn't think she stands a chance.  Love these two together.

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Date: January 12 2014

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16 PREVIEW

I love this story and definitely think you should publish it.  The Chamber has so many talented writers.  I envy everybody's talent.  This story is really good.  Trust me I've been watching for an update!!  I hope he treats her right.  She deserves love and so does he.  He's made poor choices in the past with models and married women.  Valerie is a real woman...someone who would love him regardless and have his back.  he needs to realize this and help her understand how special she is.  oh and her daddy is an ass!

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Date: December 11 2013

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Good story.  Henry better not be an assassin to her.  I think he likes her though...she's different in a good way.  I didn't really think he was gonna be such a ho, but maybe he's ready for a change.  We'll see...I don't want her to get hurt anymore.  Her self confidence is already so low, he needs to fall for her.

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Date: July 11 2013

Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 20

Wow!!! I don't know what else to say. 

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Date: July 08 2014

Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 21

Honestly, I found myself skipping some if Henry's talk on his past. It seemed to go on to long and I really felt I wanted him to worry mire about Val. I mean...I love Val and Henry fucked up.  While his background story with his father, drinking etc was important it just was too long for me. Sorry. I thought Val would get more from him. Anyway, I hope he comes to her correct. Begging, living apologizing and proposing. She feels so bad about her weight he better love it and tell her she's perfect. And please please don't let him have brought a date to this damn wedding. I think I'll pass out.  Glad you're updating again...I was wondering about this story. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for this response. I do need to truncate Henry's revelation about his past, as well as most of the story in general. I have a problem with length when it comes to writing and will hopefully be able to make things more readable/shorter in the editing process.

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Date: December 09 2014

Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 22

Poor Val.  I'm glad she's telling Henry.  I want them to be happy.

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Date: December 20 2014

Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 24 pt 1

That was great. He's showing emotion and telling her how he feels even though he's so sad right now. It's important that he called her.  We know she loves him, but she's been scared. I think they're making a breakthrough.  Things should get better and better for their relationship. I really want them to be happy, get married and have some kids. Fill up the big house!!!  Great update.

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Date: January 20 2015

Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 24 pt 2

So glad you've back!! I'm glad they're together.  The time as friends helped cement the true love t hey feel for each other.  She's scared, but I think he's reassured her that he really loves her.

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Date: September 18 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

I never said I was the  good guy. I'm nobody's hero.

 

 

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Psychological, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Through His Eyes
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 15545
Read Count: 8753
Published: May 11 2013
Updated: June 08 2014


Title: Chapter 1: The first time I met her

I'm into it!! You are such a great writer I swear every story you write pulls me in. I'm addicted quickly and waiting for the next chapter.  Alicia is gonna have him going crazy quickly and he deserves it.  You can feel the attraction between them and I love it. He's met his match, but he's in denial right now. The buildup to her making him want to be better or even care about a woman finally is intriguing.  Very hot and sexy story too. Update quickly please!! :) 

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Date: December 23 2013

Title: Chapter 3: 2 weeks

I love all your stories so I was happy to see this update. I think they can be good together long term.  They will definitely have a few bumps because now he's possessive.  But they are happy.  They need time to grow more and I think Morgan will screw up but realize his mistake and work extra hard to get Alicia back. He's never n in a relationship before.

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Date: June 10 2014

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A virtual wallflower for most of her life, what will Sasha do when she encounters the first man to ever make her want to be noticed? Dmitri is a man used to being surrounded by the most beautiful things, including women. Will he accept Sasha, a woman who is usually overshadowed by the beauty of her friends? Is he capable of noticing that while her beauty may not be as blatant, it should still be treaured? This is the story of a wallflower and the man she loves.

 

Sasha: the Wallflower has been removed from this site and is available for purchase on Amazon Kindle. Thank you all for your support!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2670
Read Count: 196744
Published: May 31 2013
Updated: November 25 2015


Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27

Yay. So good. I'm glad Dmitri stood up to his father for Sasha.  Also Dominic and Nadia...it was perfect. It was a start to them healing. 

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Date: September 01 2014

Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

Great update.  I have  feeling this dinner will be a disaster, but I've been wrong before.  Glad Teagan is coming back.  Interesting that she wants Carter...lol.

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Date: August 02 2014

Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

So happy about this update!  Dmitri did a great thing finding her mother.  I also think the three years was a long time, but that's how long they both needed to grow and change.  I'm glad she's playing hard to get too!  Anyway, please update soon.

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Date: May 27 2014

Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

I knew that mother of hers would hurt her again.  I'm glad Dmitri went to meet her and I think she can start forgiving him finally. I want Sasha to feel loved so bad so please move on to the part where they are happy and in love.  We need some romance, a wedding and baby and please rub the conceited blonde' s (I forget her name) all in Sasha and Dmitri' s happiness!

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Date: June 02 2014

Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Yea!!! You're back. I love Sasha. I do think her and Dominic have an attraction. Will he try something or will they just be friends? Either way Dmitri is gonna lose it.  He deserves to hurt some though. Can't wait!!! :)

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Date: January 18 2014

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

Yeah!!!  So good.  One, I'm glad she told Faye off.  She is such a bitch and she deserved more, but Sasha held her own.  Jaelynn seems like she may have grown up alittle bit??!  Dmitri...omg I loved it.  He definitely deserved what he got and I hope he gets more.  He needs to grovel and beg and show how much he's changed.  I have a feeling his meeting with Carter will include a few questions about Sasha.  He's jealous and even though Sasha doesn'y really feel Carter if Dmitri believes it then all the better for her.  Don't make it easy for him.  Do I want them together? Yes, but he was so mean.. A real ass to her before.  Then he was a coward waiting three years to even seek her out.  Anyway, I must admit I was at work stalking the site for an update.  As soon as I saw it...I decided it was lunchtime so I could read it.  Now, just keep updating asap and we'll all be so grateful.  I love this story!!!  :)

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Date: January 31 2014

Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

Yeah!!!  Dmitir is trying, even though he has lots to prove, but I'm glad she's willing to listen.  I'm sure he'll have to grovel a whole lot more!!  Dominic and Dmitri are getting along too.  I love this story.  Ok, on to the next chapter.

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Date: February 17 2014

Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28

Perfect

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Date: September 29 2014

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Wow!! Good chapter. I'm feeling so bad for Sasha, but I knew her do something like this to her. She needs to let go and wait for Dmitri to beg her forgiveness.  He was an ass and nikolai and Nadia are just mean.  Sasha deserves better so Dmitri better grovel to get her back!!! I've been waiting on thus update and now I need more!!!  So good, live it!!

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Date: November 20 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Cast

Great chapter and great cliffhanger...Ahhh!!!  I can't wait for the next few chapters.  Yes, I want Dmitri to suffer a little bit.  He was an ass and hurt her like so many others have done in the past.  If Dominic and Carter know each other wouldn't Carter know Dmitri?  I need to re-read the last few chapters because I probably got it confused.  Anyway, Sasha also needs to let those friends Jaelynn and Faye (?) have it.  They were terrible and really don't deserve her time, but she'll show them, I know you'll let her! ;)  Ok, so will we get another chapter before the Superbowl?  Please...:)  Love this story and I'm favoriting everything about it including you!!  Thanx

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Date: January 30 2014

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Good story.  It's moving along at a good pace.  I figured Nadia was gonna be a troublemaker and maybe one of the other girls may try to hit on Dmitri (I forgot their names - Jaeylynn ???  Whatever, I love this story!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! I'm going to try to update as soon as I can!

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Date: July 15 2013

Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

Yeah!!! You're back!!  Wow I love this story and I've been stalking the site for month's for an update.  Dmitri is off to a good start, but he needs to work for Sasha some more.  Also a little competition wouldn't hurt because Dmitri thinks he's the shit...which he is   :) but, Sasha is great too and he needs to prove himself to her.  Maybe Carter will try to fight for her too???  Anyway, I'm glad he's being sweet, attentive and taking things slow.  Sasha is in a pretty good place as far as growing up and feeling more confident.  Dmitri has to understand she's changed and appeciate the woman she'd become and his part in her evolution.  He better come with the big guns and constantly prove he's changed and is in love with her!!!  Love it!!!

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Date: May 08 2014

Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

That was hot!!! It was perfect and I'm glad they are back together!!!

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Date: June 25 2014

Title: Sasha: The Wallflower

I loved this story. So glad they are happy!

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Date: October 24 2014

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