Sequel to "Love, God & Ultimatums"
So happy to see you back. Loved the update because I was wondering what was gonna happen with these two. Marisol is causing so many problems, but if Diya doesn't tell her family and support her man she's gonna lose him. The cute little kids that want uncle Branny as their daddy definitely don't help. So she needs to sex the hell outta him, be honest with her family, tell Marisol to back off while getting the kids to like her. Whoo she has her work cut out for her LOL!! Oh but the scene with the old freaky hateful women...priceless!! I laughed so hard! Please update soon you're such an amazing writer. Happy New Year!!!
Thanks Michmom2 and Happy New Year to you too!!!
Diya will eventually tackle that To Do List you've made for her in one way or another, except for the last part. Not to say it won't happen, but that could easily blow up in her face considering how long Brandon and Marisol have been friends and how much Mariel and Mia don't like her. She's got enough problems heading her way without creating fricion wth the four Ms. More on that to come.
Update posted. Enjoy and thanks again.
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Wow I never would've thought Brandon used to be a Klan member. I understand why and I'm glad he realized it was wrong. Now him and Diya need to get past all their crap. For a 2 month relationship this seems like the longest, bumpiest, most turnpike time ever...seems like a year easy.lol. but I love them and I trust your vision. I'm sure some more downtime is store for them because they are so flawed and complicated. I love them so much. Great update
Well, Brandon was never official Klan, as Hollis and his crew never were, but was a racist nonetheless. Lol @ it seeming like a year. It has been a very tumultuous two months. Things will get better...at least for a little while. Thanks, Michmom2, for trusting my vision and being so generous in sharing you insight. It is very much appreciated.
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed Hot hot hot!! Brandon is the sexiest man around and Diya is perfect for him! Her father is so irritating though. He needs to back off plus Diya needs to tell her family about Brandon and move on. Glad you're back!!!
Thanks Michmom2!!! William backing off seems highly unlikely. But Diya telling her people about Brandon...that may happen sooner than you think.
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed Oh crap!!! Shit's hit the fan!! Diya and Brandon both have to be strong and show their love for each other. This was a great chapter. Manny was cute, Brandon even cuter. I'm glad her daddy found out and it will be interesting!!! Side note...I like the chapter updates even if we wait awhile sometimes. I know you'll finish they stories, no doubt and we have to understand that you have a life outside of writing. I'm just happy to get to read your stories because you're so talented, as many people are on VC. So do what's best for you...I'll always read your stories.
Thanks for the input and support, Michmom2!!! I really appreciate both. And you're right. Brandon and Diya will need to be strong, because Daddy De la Roy DOES NOT approve and will react as only he can...
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed So glad you're continuing this story. Love it.
Thanks Michmom2!
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed Omg, I want Diya to trust Brandon, but there's something he's hiding. I think him and Marisol had one drunken night or something. Hopefully he'll be good because I love them together. The kids are feeding off Marisol 'a attitude - they can't help it. She in th other hand is a little sneak!! Great chapter.
Thanks Michmom2!!! You just might be on to something. It would explain his behavior. But ain't NO explaining something like that to Diya. Let us hope there's a less inflammatory reason for him constantly letting her make it : /
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed Omg,omg,omg!! I love how Brandon is so strong, cool an d protective of Diya even against her parents .I knew this would be a shitshow, but I'm hoping for acceptance sometime in their relationship. Gramps is hilarious! Anyway I need part 2, I think they are strong enough to withstand anything. Hopefully it won't be so bad for long!!
Gramps is a hot mess and, ironically enough, Brandon and Diya's strongest ally. I love your optimism, but have to warn you that the next chapter will not be pretty. AT ALL...
Thanks Michmom2!
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed That went worse than I thought it would. So sad.
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed Oh hell! I knew Marisol and Brandon did something. Not this though , never this!!! Ugh I see more trouble on the horizon. I wanna cry!
Don't cry. You'll have plenty of time for that in the next couple chapters.
Thanks Michmom2!
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed Poor Brandon. He hard a hard time of it and Marisol is a selfish user. I want Diya to forgive him, but I understand why she's worried he'll never truly be hers. I want them together though and happy. I want him to tell Marisol he only cares about the kids, that they are done!
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed I knew that was home was gonna do something. I feel so bad for Diya. I hate Tyler and I hope Hollis broke his raggedy hip.
That can be arranged.
Thanks Michmom2!
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed I knew that was home was gonna do something. I feel so bad for Diya. I hate Tyler and I hope Hollis broke his raggedy hip.
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed While returning home to Chicago from a business trip Anika Wallace and Hunter Sterling IV find themselves the only surviors of a plane crash on a South Pacific island. There's no telling when they'll make it back home or if they ever will make it back home for that matter. One thing is for sure they're going to have to learn how to get along their survival is depending on it.
Such a sad chapter. Glad you wrote it though.
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed Finally caught up on this story. It's so good. This island will be the best thing to happen to both of them!!
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed They are really developing a relationship and an attraction to each other. Good job.
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed Like the pictures you chose. Hunter is a lazy ass...he'll appreciate Anika soon. Well I guess they need to appreciate each other and work together.
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed Love this chapter. Wallace is finally admitting to herself that she's attracted to Sterling. And he is just doing everything to flirt and tease her. I'm loving the builduo and I'm happy they will be friends and allies before they move to the next level.
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed That Giselle was always a mean birch. I'm glad Hunter is different now.
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed I like seeing the interaction before the accident. That Giselle was one selfish birch and Hunter wasn't't much better.
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed The prison had been confined within their hearts but when... when would they truly be set free?
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So good.
Thank you Michmom2 <3
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed Finally she's figuring these things out. Poor Rae went through so much. Historic did too, But Rae...that other chapter was heartbreaking. He helped her in so many ways. He's patient and loving...it's just wonderful to see her remembering that again.
Yes I think once you see past the hurt at what really was and what wasn't it helps healing too! :) Hiroto was always the one who supported, loved and cherished her! :)
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed Wow I didn't expect that! So hars, but I'm glad Hiroto heard it all. She'll need him and starting as friends again is perfect. They both had crazy parents, huh? Anyway great update. Can't wait to see her heal and their friendship/love blossom again.
Girl yes! They both had some crazy families! Yes me too! I can't wait to write them back together!
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