Penname: liltay550 [Contact]

Real name: tali

Member Since: September 17 2013

Membership status: Member

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 1032]
Summary:

   

 

A virtual wallflower for most of her life, what will Sasha do when she encounters the first man to ever make her want to be noticed? Dmitri is a man used to being surrounded by the most beautiful things, including women. Will he accept Sasha, a woman who is usually overshadowed by the beauty of her friends? Is he capable of noticing that while her beauty may not be as blatant, it should still be treaured? This is the story of a wallflower and the man she loves.

 

Sasha: the Wallflower has been removed from this site and is available for purchase on Amazon Kindle. Thank you all for your support!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2670
Read Count: 196744
Published: May 31 2013
Updated: November 25 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Cast

Yessssssss I love the update.  Can't wait to read the next chapter

Reviewer: liltay550 Signed
Date: June 02 2014

Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

Great update! I Absolutely love this story. Can't wait until the next chapter. 

Reviewer: liltay550 Signed
Date: June 25 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Cast

Yessssssss so happy we got our update and can't wait to read the sequel.  This is one of.my favorite stories. Fantastic job!

Reviewer: liltay550 Signed
Date: October 25 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 125]
Summary:

I am currently NOT working on this story and don't know when I will be again. Writing this takes a toll on me and I have kinda been posting other things here. Give them a looksie. :]

 

Kensington's battered body ached from abuse, each blow recieved slowly tearing her apart. She was drowning in the hell that once used to be her home until a mysterious stranger comes along. Will he be the one restrore Kensington's faith in the world?

Heads up: The beginning (meaning the first few chapters)  of this story is a bit DARK. If you are of a faint heart than I fear this story is not going to be appealing to you. 


 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 10114
Read Count: 12990
Published: July 25 2013
Updated: May 29 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You can't leave us hanging like tHat. I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the next update.

Reviewer: liltay550 Signed
Date: May 29 2015

Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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[Reviews - 59]
Summary:

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Stop fighting about the same old thing, Let's start over, We can't let our good love die, Maybe we can start over, Give love another life,

 

I know that this will hurt you, I know you'll cry, I know I called you selfish, but that's a lie, I feel I know that's the best for us,

 

Let's start over 

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 31466
Read Count: 10916
Published: September 02 2013
Updated: September 19 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Characters

I dislike her mother in law so much. Can someone just hit her or something. Great update and can't wait to see what Auroa does next. 

Reviewer: liltay550 Signed
Date: June 19 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 301]
Summary:

She got the guy, the fairytale. But when complications of his new life come to light will she be strong enough to keep him?

 

***Please do not post this story to other sites. I post all my stories here with the intention of publication. I thank you all for your attention :)***



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 129
Read Count: 34241
Published: January 18 2014
Updated: March 31 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Taken down for publication!

You made my day with this update. Praise him that Roxie & Griffin are back together. Patiently waiting for the next update! 

Reviewer: liltay550 Signed
Date: February 17 2015

Title: Chapter 1: Taken down for publication!

So upset that you left us on cliffhanger like this. Now I maybe the only one but I feel bad for Roxie. Looking from the outside of a situation sometimes, it's easy to say what should be done. There are things she needd to workout on her own that Grif cant help with. Can't wait to see what happens next, hopefully very soon! 



Author's Response:

I agree she's got some soul searching to do. A little time will help that for sure! Thanks for sticking with me! :D

Reviewer: liltay550 Signed
Date: February 10 2015

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[Reviews - 175]
Summary:

In a world built on blood and violence, where the merciless thrive, falling in love carries with it its own special set of risks.  Never was that truer than for Carter Gerring, an electronics expert with a unique skill-set.  Carter is hired by Larry Hooks, a ruthless underworld kingpin with a number of potential legal problems he wants to disappear.  While eliminating the various forms of incrimination Hooks and his men create, Carter finds himself falling for the boss’s daughter.

 Tamryn Hooks is the much-loved daughter Larry Hooks would gladly kill to protect.  For most of her life, she’s been shielded from many of the harsh realities of her father’s business.  Then, a seemingly innocent favor for her doting father places her in the middle of an impossible situation she sees no way out of.  As Tamryn searches for a solution and an escape, her dilemma is further complicated by an ongoing feud with her sister and her deepening feelings for Carter, the unassuming intellectual with a dark reputation.   

 When Carter and Tamryn find themselves entrenched in the mire of her father’s criminal enterprise, the secrets they and others keep, and their need for one another, will their forbidden love be their saving grace?  Or will it be the Achilles’ heel that ultimately leads to their demise? 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 70686
Read Count: 14883
Published: June 06 2014
Updated: February 01 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Door 2 and it would be interesting if it was a female

Reviewer: liltay550 Signed
Date: June 06 2014

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Absolutely love this story.  I feel bad for Tamryn having such an evil sister.  I vote for Carter to come to her aid. Can't wait for the next update. 



Author's Response:

Thanks Liltay!  An update is in the works.

Reviewer: liltay550 Signed
Date: August 15 2014

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 41]
Summary:

Sometimes Minerva 'Minnie' Washington questions her sanity when she interacts with her boyfriend. Behind the handsome face and sexy voice lies a goofball that always manages to say the wrong thing at the wrong time. After four months, she'd think she would've been left him--especially when he's always asking for favors.

This time he's asking her to babysit his nephews for a few hours while he's out. She thinks it'll be a walk through the park, but she's about to find out how wrong she is. Three boys; one's playing an intense game of truth or dare, the other is obssessed with aliens and the last keeps trying to kiss her. Laugh as Minnie has the experience of a lifetime!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Family, Friendship
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 12454
Read Count: 10636
Published: July 04 2014
Updated: July 22 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Poor poor girl Definitely hope she gets something AMAZING out of this. Blake would be dead after he paid me and emotional damages. Can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: liltay550 Signed
Date: July 07 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 115]
Summary:

tbk


Camille Jones accepted society's problem with her body long ago. Yet, she can't help the insecurity felt when approached by gym owner Ryan Kahuna, he was most women's wet dream. He could have any woman he wanted. 


Including her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Extreme Language, Fluff, Kink, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 11368
Read Count: 16318
Published: July 30 2014
Updated: August 28 2014


Title: Chapter 5: The -Itis

I just absolutely love this story.  I think you did a great job on the update. And your 5 things that annoy you had putting my hands up and saying YASSS, lol. Can't wait for the next update. 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm so happy you love it. It's always reassuring to hear especiially when I'm not confident about a chapter. 

 

Haha im so glad so many people love the 5 things! I feel like every author should do it just because it makes the reading more personal. 

Reviewer: liltay550 Signed
Date: August 28 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Cast

Great start to the story. I can't wait to see where you take us with this. Also, you had me rolling with the five things that annoy you. 



Author's Response:

Thank you liltay550! I'm glad you like it! I imagine the 5 things that annoy me as a segment in a talk show. I might have to switch up and make it an annoy and love just to add a lil positivity. 

Reviewer: liltay550 Signed
Date: July 30 2014

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 138]
Summary:

Dig

 

Avery "Hades" Jones is the number one producer in the metal and hardcore music game. She's more talented with any instrument she lays her hands on than most of the popular bands and every record she touches turns to gold.

Then why doesn't she have the respect she so rightfully deserves?

When her good friend Adam Nuro invites her to tour with his number one band to play with his band while featuring some of her songs, she hops at the chance.

But the opportunity presents more challenges than she was ready for, obstacles that threaten to break her.

Will Avery make her dreams come true? Will her adoptive band support her?

And what has been following them since day one?

 

Shout Out to Elizablu for the Banner



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe, General, Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Horror, Mystery, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Crackfic, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Kink, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 23829
Read Count: 18135
Published: November 30 2014
Updated: February 14 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Band Mates: The Cast

Loving this story so far and can't wait to see what happens next. 

Reviewer: liltay550 Signed
Date: December 03 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 104]
Summary:

 

Undercover agent and assassin, Nina Thompson knew this was going to be the hardest mission she’s ever had to accept for the international secret agency she was in.  It was going to test her in many ways she knew she wasn’t prepared for.  This was going to break her and change her and she didn’t know if she was ever going to be the same.  She falls into a downward spiral of drugs and resentment towards the mission leader, Maxim Sokoloff, an agent she’s always admired until now.  Can Maxim and another fellow agent pull her out of her hole?

 

*Dark Fic*



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Psychological, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Rape, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 26
Completed:No
Word count: 35257
Read Count: 20560
Published: May 09 2015
Updated: December 06 2019


Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

So glad you updated this story. I must say I am excited  that we saw anew dynamic with Nina and Maxim. Can't  wait  for  the  next update! Please let it not be for too long. 

Reviewer: liltay550 Signed
Date: September 07 2015

Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 65]
Summary:

Follow the story of Luciana Esther Carter who is just another girl conditioned by the "she is better than me" mentality that plagues so many young females in the 21st century.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Inspirational
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 34
Completed:Yes
Word count: 67208
Read Count: 143112
Published: August 17 2015
Updated: November 24 2015


Title: The Untitled Girl

Love  the story  so far....Can't wait until  the next update! 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading :-)

Reviewer: liltay550 Signed
Date: August 18 2015

Title: The Untitled Girl

I don't want  it be over! Great beautiful  story.....I love the journey  you took us on



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading. I hope you have a lovely day :-).

 

Reviewer: liltay550 Signed
Date: August 21 2015

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.