Penname: KayMay [Contact]

Real name: Kay

Member Since: March 07 2014

Membership status: Member

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Masks by idiotendenial
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 70]
Summary:

Masks

 

“We understand how dangerous a mask can be. We all become what we pretend to be.” 
 Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Fluff, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Spritualism, Strong Sexual Content
Series: The Masquerade
Chapters: 4
Completed:Yes
Word count: 6636
Read Count: 8475
Published: May 14 2013
Updated: July 08 2013

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Title: Chapter 3: Grief Is A Complicated Business

That whole last part had an uncomfortable incestuous feel to it. You should include that in the warnings

Author's Response:

I don't know what part you're talking about. There was no incestuous intent. Perhaps close siblings bother you, but there is nothing I can do about. I will pay closer attention to their "sibling love" however. Unfortunately, I cannot add that to the warnings because only you have this problem and it was also wasn't intentional. Thank you for a review. 



Author's Response:

I don't know what part you're talking about. There was no incestuous intent. Perhaps close siblings bother you, but there is nothing I can do about. I will pay closer attention to their "sibling love" however. Unfortunately, I cannot add that to the warnings because only you have this problem and it was also wasn't intentional. Thank you for a review. 

 Reviewer: KayMay Signed
Date: March 27 2014
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Sasha: The Wallflower by sha2011
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 1032]
Summary:

   

 

A virtual wallflower for most of her life, what will Sasha do when she encounters the first man to ever make her want to be noticed? Dmitri is a man used to being surrounded by the most beautiful things, including women. Will he accept Sasha, a woman who is usually overshadowed by the beauty of her friends? Is he capable of noticing that while her beauty may not be as blatant, it should still be treaured? This is the story of a wallflower and the man she loves.

 

Sasha: the Wallflower has been removed from this site and is available for purchase on Amazon Kindle. Thank you all for your support!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2670
Read Count: 196744
Published: May 31 2013
Updated: November 25 2015

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Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

In my experience, what makes a sex scene great is the dirty talk but that's not to say your scene isn't good but hint hint some words from the dominant type like Dmitri can be a panty dropper

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Date: June 26 2014
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Making It Hard For Me by shadow
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 98]
Summary:

A story how even though you think you have your life planned out, cupid's arrow will hit you when you least expect it. Chris and Kat both attend Tulane University. This is Chris last year and after graduation he's leaving town. But, what happens when a beautiful African American woman catches his eye?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Female/Female, Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 23
Completed:No
Word count: 55615
Read Count: 159142
Published: March 01 2014
Updated: August 20 2014

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Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

This story is kinda terrible and fetish-y in regards to race I mean I liked it but I don't know anymore



Author's Response:

Sorry you feel that way. Thanks for reading the what you have read. As always I appreciate your review.

 Reviewer: KayMay Signed half-star
Date: July 17 2014
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Lonely by daughter
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 542]
Summary:

How far will you go when you're lonely?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 75
Completed:No
Word count: 151713
Read Count: 143285
Published: March 13 2014
Updated: July 17 2015

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Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

I have loved following this series and I like Jodi personally just remember that you got it right when you said it's an accomplishment for the story to evoke any emotion at all and by thestory's end people will be singing your praises pleased that Jodi finally got it together

 

continue on the way you planned and do you

 



Author's Response:

Thanks, KayMay, for your comments and for following the story. I will continue :)

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Date: June 03 2014
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Another good one

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Date: April 12 2014
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Umm yeah that was too hot lol loved Steve's dominant mood

Author's Response:

oh, yes!

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Date: April 03 2014
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I didn't think it was creepy lol you just have to have a taste for reluctance/daddy doms/ bdsm and your all good

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Date: March 19 2014
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Using i am instead of I'm in some situations hinders the natural flow of conversation in a story but i like the story though i would describe it as preppy

 Reviewer: KayMay Signed
Date: March 15 2014
Coming Back by shadow
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 18]
Summary:

Forget about everything the Marvel X-Men movies have lead you to believe about Sabertooth, Victor Creed. He is not a lowly servant who is easily manipulated by whatever organization is using him for his mutant powers. True comic book Sabertooth: Besides having superhuman strength, sense, a healing factor, razor sharp claws and canines, is extremely smart and cunning. Victor Creed along with Mystique and Lord Deathstrike are the new "invisible" rulers of East Asia. He also has The Hand, an order of evil mystical ninjas involved in organized crime and mercenary activities at his disposal.

In this story, Victor Creed uses his position to acquire and develop partnerships with legitimate companies in order to enhance his influence and power in the organized crime world.

Jazz Madison is my original character. He mutant power is telekinesis: the power to move objects with your mind. She is also an expertly trained ninja assasin.

Jazz Madison has finally put her life back together after Victor Creed abandoned her 3 years ago. Now, he shows up at her front door saying he wants her. Will she forgive him or will she refuse to risk her stable life for him again?



Table of Contents
Categories: Books
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 4933
Read Count: 8037
Published: June 27 2014
Updated: July 04 2014

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

First off D'Angelo's my lady played while I read and I just find that appropriate you have no idea how much I love the dominant male "that's my pussy" types



Author's Response:

Me too, Sabertooth is my ultimate dominate, arrogant,"that's my shit and don't mess with it or I'll fuck you up" male. Thank you for reading and reviewing. 

 Reviewer: KayMay Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 28 2014
The Big Kahuna by SleepEasy
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 115]
Summary:

tbk


Camille Jones accepted society's problem with her body long ago. Yet, she can't help the insecurity felt when approached by gym owner Ryan Kahuna, he was most women's wet dream. He could have any woman he wanted. 


Including her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Extreme Language, Fluff, Kink, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 11368
Read Count: 16318
Published: July 30 2014
Updated: August 28 2014

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Title: Chapter 3: Fat Chance

Yes yep yeah I love you for putting all my thoughts down in this story also this story is a blessing in the midst of the rest (no shade) the only thing that could make me not like it even a little bit would be if you cast the one black man as the bad guy lol but I have a feeling you do that and I only pray that the sex scene is just as good(dirty talk is key ;))

 Reviewer: KayMay Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 06 2014

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