Penname: Khamalani [Contact]

Real name: Tiffanie

Member Since: May 09 2014

Membership status: Member

Bio:

I love to read!! I will read just about. Anything!! Like the back of a comet can!! Lol!!  Maybe one of these days I'll grow a pair write a story of my own. Until then I will continue to read and enjoy the stories on the Chamber. 




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 Camille Jackson was rejected since birth over her dark skin complexion. She has grown a tough skin and doesn’t get attached to anyone because of how some people have viewed her without even getting to know her. However Camille opens her heart to a baby in need and for the first six months Camille has grown to love the baby as if she were her own. That is until the baby's biological father comes into the picture.

Hiram Whitfield Jr was brought up in one of the most well known Ku Klux Klan families in the south and as the only son he feels the pressure to carry on his family's tradition. After finishing his prison sentence all Hiram wants to do is change his life for the better and be a good father to his child. If that means being disowned by his bigoted family then so be it. Ironically enough Hiram would have never thought that Camille would be the one to be his rock and strength to do so.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 51
Completed:Yes
Word count: 107887
Read Count: 215423
Published: October 09 2014
Updated: October 25 2015


Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 27

I pray that CPS takes Steven away!! Hopefully Camille and Hiram can adopt him?  

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Date: December 23 2014

Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 29

Hmmm... Its all coming together. 

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Date: January 07 2015

Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 31

Troubles a brewin'?

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Date: January 18 2015

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Summary: Modern Love Story
Zane was just hitting his stride in the modeling world. He had good friends and family and he enjoyed being able to support himself. However he didn't have one inkling of how hard it was to maintain happiness and good fortune in a world of sycophants and envious frenemies until that fateful night. Yet on that same night he discovered that there were still good people in the world, one person in particular in whom he may have found paradise. Although both of them have their struggles they will soon discover through passion and turmoil how to make love thrive in a modern world.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Erotica, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 9914
Read Count: 4155
Published: October 14 2014
Updated: October 29 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really like where you're going with this but it's kinda hard to read. It's like one long paragraph. Maybe break up the structure a bit next time. Good story otherwise.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the compliment. 

I fixed the formatting. 

 

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Date: October 14 2014

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Summary:

My submission for the grindhouse challenge. Jessa has been living for a year in the Masion inherited to her by her now dead parents whom she never met. Finding her new gated community disturbing at first, it has grown to become her home. Jessa is about to discover how and why, herself and the two handsome brothers that live across the street, Ren and Garrett are bonded to each other. With their help, she will learn her true calling.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe, Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Horror, Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female, Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Incest , Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Spritualism, Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Work in Progress
Challenges: Chamber Grindhouse Challenge 6
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 5380
Read Count: 8346
Published: October 15 2014
Updated: November 03 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Members of the Triquetra

Aww shucky shucky!! Come on wit it!!! Lol!! I can't wait!!!



Author's Response:

Hi Khamalani!! I'm trying girl but this damn thing called life responsibility keeps getting in my way. Lol!! I'm working on it right now. Thanks for reading and reviewing it.

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Date: October 19 2014

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- More Questions

Alright, alright, alright!!!!



Author's Response:

Hi Khamalani! Alright! The end is near. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Date: November 03 2014

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Talia Simmons is an intelligent, bright American law student who travels to Cambridge University in order to attain her international law degree. Used to reading cases of others, she soon becomes her own attorney in a case that no one, not even her closest friends saw coming.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 7349
Read Count: 4279
Published: October 21 2014
Updated: December 02 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So far, so good.... I'm intrigued. 

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Date: October 21 2014

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

The hell was that? He'd be due for a beat down!!

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Date: December 02 2014

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SEQUEL to Sasha: the Wallflower. Adaline Lang is an up and coming photographer with more than her own set of problems. During her cousin's wedding she comes face-to-face with the man that she had fallen in love with as a child. Only to find out he was in love with someone else. What will she do to finally be heard and convince him that the perfect women he has been looking for is standing right in front of him?

Dominic Vikhrov is caught between a rock and a hard place. The woman he has fawned after for so many years has finally returned to the United States. But he isn't the only one who is fighting for her heart. Never one to lose, Dominic has his eye on the prize no matter the cost. But will his tunnel vision blind him to something even greater?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 37246
Read Count: 40813
Published: October 24 2014
Updated: November 20 2015


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Who did Dina cheat with? She handled the situation horribly!! Dominic may forgive her, but it's going take some time. I hope he doesn't put the moves on Adeline.

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Date: January 22 2015

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Adaline should move on.  Audrey is the one who's challenged. Who doesn't know what sign language is?  Blue man group?

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Date: July 04 2015

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Duna on that bullshit. Smh. I hate that "I can't tell you now" stuff!!

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Date: April 06 2015

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

I really hope she gets her fire back.

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Date: October 24 2014

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Good for her!!!

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Date: July 21 2015

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Banner by: Siennna Gray

 

Croy Martin left her hometown in Texas for her dream job in a small town in Missouri. She falls into a seductive web that is weaved in front of her. Not afraid to fall in love, she dives in head first. Torn between three men, what's a girl to do?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:Yes
Word count: 18155
Read Count: 15701
Published: October 29 2014
Updated: November 16 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Two kids named C/Kroy?  Interesting... 



Author's Response:

I always liked that name. I was watching Real Housewives of Atlanta one night when Kim started dating Croy, the football player and loved the name since lol

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Date: October 30 2014

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Woah!! That was a drive by!!! Lol!! Excited to read more!!



Author's Response:

lol it was a quickie! lol

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Date: November 06 2014

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

There are a hot men giving her the googly eyes!! Lol!!😍😍😍



Author's Response:

lol

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Date: November 08 2014

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Woah!! Is Kevin going to join too?



Author's Response:

lol is he? I don't think he's the sharing type lol

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Date: November 10 2014

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

What a twist!! Did not see that coming!! Good job!!



Author's Response:

:D

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Date: November 12 2014

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Elle always played it safe. She was used to being in control. Every accomplishment in her life was meticulously planned. The only thing she didn't have reign over was her stale love life. When an old flame from a past complicated relationship comes back into her life, she soon finds out everything doesn't go as planned---and that secrets will always come to light.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 78339
Read Count: 69614
Published: November 03 2014
Updated: March 09 2015


Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

She should have told him about Randall. Its gonna come back and bite her in the ass!! Lol!! Good update!! She better stop playing with that grown ass man. He gonna tear her up when he gets back in town!!



Author's Response:

Some other reviewers are definitely on the same page about the Randall situation, so I get it. Thanks and y’all are killing me getting hype over Dean getting back lol.  Love the enthusiasm and thanks for reviewing Khamalani.

CG

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Date: January 13 2015

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

I can't wait till Elle sees that Dean is a grown ass man!! I hope he put it on her so good she speaks in tongues!! Lol!!



Author's Response:

I'm hoping she peeps his grown ass man-ness too. I cracked up at you talking about him making her "speak in tongues." Lol! Thanks again for reading and reviewing Khamalani!

CG

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Date: November 16 2014

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Elle needs to see someone else interested in Dean. Then maybe she'll act right.



Author's Response:

Yeah, she definitely needs a reality check---and she'll get one soon. Regardless, she's got to do better. Thanks for reading and reviewing Khamalani.

CG

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Date: November 05 2014

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

She better apologize to that man!!



Author's Response:

Say that!  I totally agree. Let’s hope she does it soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing Khamalani.

CG

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Date: December 01 2014

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Finally!! They kiss!! He put it on her!! Lol! Go Dean!!



Author's Response:

Yeah, the kiss was a must have for this chapter. I agree, he did kind of put it on her something serious lol. As always, thanks for reading and reviewing Khamalani.

CG

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Date: November 11 2014

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Elle needs to stay away from Justin. But she won't because now that she's digging him he gonna be on her like white on rice.



Author's Response:

Elle doesn't want to be around Justin. He's just always inconveniently there. Congregating in the same circles as the people you want to forget never makes them disappear. Thanks for reading and reviewing Khamalani.

Side Note: "Like white on rice" is one of my fave sayings---you're the real MVP for using it.

CG

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Date: November 19 2014

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

So I'm guessing niece or ssomething like that.



Author's Response:

*In my creepy Brittany Murphy voice* I’ll never tell…(lol). Thanks for reading and reviewing Khamalani.

CG

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Date: December 05 2014

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