Penname: jahchannah [Contact]

Real name: Carlotta

Member Since: January 25 2015

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Summary:

 


When Caleb, heir of the four and alpha of his pack, attends a party celebrating his twin deltas’ birthday, he doesn't anticipate finding Luna’s greatest gift: his mate, Ava-Rain. Immediately consumed with curiosity and undeniable interest, he manages to make his presence known to her, but their introduction is kept brief. To reject one’s mate is to reject Luna herself, and that is exactly what Caleb intends to do. Not because he wants to but because he has to. But will he be able to stay away in order to ensure both her and his pack’s safety, or will their unbreakable connection lure him back and add even more trouble into the mix?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship
Story Status: Taking a short break from this story
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death, Original Characters, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 26
Completed:No
Word count: 165660
Read Count: 34486
Published: March 27 2015
Updated: October 30 2016


Title: Chapter 19: 13 (2) - 'If we're going to die, bury us alive. . .'

Now I've had more time to meditate on this chapter...Caleb so expected a different response from Ava-Rain...but then he doesn't know her history and he's really kept parts of himself locked away from her so there is much about her he doesn't know...much about each other they don't know...Chase and Kane both pointed out that Ava-Rain is stronger than Caleb thinks...her history with her grandmother, her friends (like Jennifer) has taught her a lot about forgiveness because she doesn't seem to be one who would hold a grudge or be angry about a relationship that happened before they met...when she knew nothing of werewolf existence...I do wonder if at some point Ava-Rain will doubt Caleb's feelings for her because Emma Grace was Caleb's choice, whereas she was Luna's true gift...yet Caleb still chose to accept Luna's gift...and he's learning how wonderful Luna's gift is...it's everything he really needs...this chapter revealed how much he needs her and how perfect they are together...Caleb would never let any other member of his pack and I even doubt his parents see him so vulnerable...in tears...yet he felt connected enough to his mate...loved by his mate...to let go and let her see him as less than strong...sharing his hurt with Ava-Rain to me only helped her to love him more...he became more real to her in his perceived imperfection as maybe she can see that they are not so different and really fit...I so love this book...you are awesome!

Now I get why the pack blocked Angelie from Ava-Rain...they wanted to avoid a repeat performance...Angelie was not punished for killing Emma Grace (except banished from Caleb's pack) because maybe her actions were seen as protecting their existence from the human world...but Ava-Rain is Caleb's true mate so any attempts against her would draw more severe consequences...as I read I realize there is so much more to our girl Ava-Rain...Caleb has no idea how blessed he is to receive Luna's gift Ava-Rain...I think his pack has a better idea than he currently does...excited to learn more



Author's Response:

Lol, you're absolutely spoiling me with your double reviews! But I so appreciate it!

Agreed! There are SO many things that they don't know about each other. Caleb really did not expect the reaction that Ava-Rain gave him. He's seen her angry with him before for keeping important information to himself, so he EXPECTED her to be a thousand times more angry for keeping his past with Emmy Grace from her. And he knows that she's capable of forgiveness, but he truly believed that this revelation was absolutely unforgivable. For him, it was the worst thing in the world that could ever happen to them & to their relationship, so much so that he couldn't even fathom that Ava-Rain wouldn't feel the same. I think that was why he tried so hard to keep this truth from her. Out of fear, his assumptions & his lack of truly knowing his mate. The flaws that he knows about her—her insecurities, her trusting nature, etc...—made him assume that she wouldn't be able to forgive him. And his own flaws—his insecurities, his naturally untrusting nature, etc...—prevented him from seeing that Ava-Rain's strengths also come from those flaws (weaknesses).

Next chapter is going to be in Ava-Rain's POV, so we'll gain insight into how she's handling this huge revelation & whether or not she'll be able to handle it. It can't be easy for her but hopefully this revelation will give her a chance to prove just how strong she is & maybe get her to step up and accept her role in this pack & in this world.

As for Angelie, there is definitely more to why she killed Emmy Grace. Just remember that there is absolutely nothing that the pack wouldn't do for Caleb, to protect him, and killing was a huge line that Angelie was willing to cross. But I don't know, do you think she's brave enough to go after Ava-Rain? She's crazy but is she THAT crazy? Lol, only time will tell. . .

Again, thank you so much for reading & for taking the time to leave another amazing review, jahchannah! Your evaluations of this story are always so on point & your understanding of these characters is so ridiculously awesome. I swear you know them better than I do, lol! :)

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 19 2015

Title: Chapter 20: 14 - '. . .and as you showed me your scars, I only held you closer.'

Excellent as always! Loved the conversation between Ava-Rain and Declan as he really seems to understand her. That was a real spiritual lesson he gave Ava-Rain. I just fell more in love with Declan with this chapter! Loving Rickon more, too! I think the twin deltas really value their Luna.. And a little Tommy action for the first time was too cute. He knew how to be the quiet strength she needed. And Caleb stepped up! I have to give him mad love for his acknowledging to Ava-Rain that his love for her his true mate is beyond his feelings for Emmy-Grace. She needed to hear that truth or she would be stuck on the 'what-ifs'.  And Angelie is in love with Caleb? Whoah that was a little bomb dropped. But her killing Emmy-Grace seems beyond jealousy. There has to be more to this story.  Maybe Anglie read Emmy-Grace and detected a threat that she thought was best eliminated. My curiosity is totally picqued to understand the images Ava-Rain saw upon touching the pureblood. Is this the beginning of learning who she really is and why she's Caleb's mate?  You just packed so much emotion as well as tbrowing out more information to keep me speculating on what is really happening with the purebloods and Caleb's pack. And somehow I think Ava-Rain is front and center in it all. I have to say I love you for updating! I just can't really express how your writing touches my spirit. I can so relate to Ava-Rain's internal battles.  Brilliant.



Author's Response:

THANK YOU!

I asbolutely love writing scenes between Declan & Ava-Rain, so I'm so glad that you're enjoying them. They're so alike & it's those similarities & shared experiences & insecurities that, I feel, make they're relationship so special. Glad you're loving Rickon, too! Gotta love our twinsies! And Tommy! Ava-Rain hasn't had much intraction with him, so I was very eager to write this brief yet much needed scene between them. As for Caleb, he so deserves a bit of love for stepping up. Ava-Rain really needed to hear that she is end game for him & that what they have is a lot more powerful than what Caleb & Emmy Grace shared.

And as for Angelie, since we were in Ava-Rain's POV, it was her assumption that Angelie was/is in love with Caleb. I don't want to say that it was a baseless assumption because Angelie did love Caleb—he was her alpha—but knowing Caleb, he probaby doesn't view her love as anything more than familial love. It hasn't been mentioned, but Angelie was the one member of the pack that knew Caleb the best because they spent the most time together as pups. But he's also a guy, and guys are always so oblivious, aren't they? Lol. As for why Angelie killed Emmy Grace, you could be onto something there & it might have been a lot more than just jealousy. Nothing in this story is as it seems, I promise you that!

Those images/memories inside of Ava-Rain's head will play a really big role into revealing more secrets, esepcially since they belong to the pure blood that attacked her. That is IF Angelie is able to help, or if she'll even be willing to help. Right now, it seems like all roads lead back to Ava-Rain, doesn't it? And maybe they do. . .or maybe they don't. . .but they probably do, lol. . .

As always, thank you times a gazillion for reading & for your fabulous review, jahchannah! And it makes me so beyond happy to know that you can relate to Ava-Rain. If readers can identify with my characters in any way & feel something when reading my stories then that really is the best reward I can ask for. So, thank you! :)

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Date: June 27 2015

Title: Chapter 23: 17 - 'cause I'm broken when I'm open, & I don't feel like I am strong enough.'

Excellent as always! Strength made perfect in weakness...Ava-Rain and Caleb balance each other, challenge each other...strengthen each other...the one you love has the best ability to challenge you in the ways you may want to hide...complements...ain't always pretty with roses and butterflies...but often your soul mate is strong in an area where you are weak...I think Ava-Rain and Caleb are that for each other...balance out of chaos...not surprised Kasey and her family are hunters, just another loved one keeping our girl in the dark...maybe the Hellends are the reason the pure-bloods are after Ava-Rain..just wondering...you just keep stirring up the pot with more layers to this story...keeps me coming back...you rock!



Author's Response:

As always, thanks so much for reading & for your review, jahchannah! So glad you enjoyed the chapter! :)

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Date: July 30 2015

Title: Chapter 23: 17 - 'cause I'm broken when I'm open, & I don't feel like I am strong enough.'

Oh and I forgot to mention about the POV for the next chapter that both Caleb's and Ava-Rain's perspectives would be awesome but also more work for you!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for sharing your input, jahchannah! I appreciate it! :)

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Date: July 30 2015

Title: Chapter 24: 18 - '. . .burn everything you love then burn the ashes.'

Gotta love Caleb...protecting his gurl but encouraging her to conquer her fears by reaching out to her best friend and family...he's not thinking about himself but what is best for his mate...Ava-Rain's strength is clearly showing...though she loves Kasey and the Hellands, her heart is with Caleb and she would choose him...though she's hurt with learning that the Helland's are hunters, she has deep down always known she would not return to her former world...she knows Caleb is her world...the hard part is admitting that to herself...seeing Kasey and learning her truth is beginning to force that acceptance but our gurl will always weather the storm...she has an inner strength unknown to herself that her mate can clearly see and from which he too draws strength...it's her inner strength and beauty that brings peace between Declan and Rickon...Ava-Rain fails to realize how much those around her draw from her inner strength and beauty...so glad you are back...love it...



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading & reviewing, jahchannah!  :)

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Date: November 21 2015

Title: Chapter 24: 18 - '. . .burn everything you love then burn the ashes.'

I forgot to ask why did Kasey and Kane not realize they were mates when they spoke at the club the night Caleb and Ava-Rain met...did the Alpha have to first find his mate in order for his pack members to then begin to find their own...such a good story!



Author's Response:

That's a really good question, jahchannah, & I love your theory! And without giving away TOO much, Kasey & Kane did not realize they were mates that night because they weren't mates then. Remember, Luna only grants you a true mate if you're deemed worthy & Kane wasn't 'worthy' just yet. Plus, there's also the fact that hunters & wolves are NEVER mated—that only happened twice in history with Chogan & Huyana, & Chayton & Amitola. So, it makes you wonder WHY are they mated?

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Date: November 21 2015

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Summary:

Lia Mariani and Dominic MacCleod were two up and coming leading actors who'd met on set and immediately struck up a friendship.  As the friendship blossomed, they both realized they'd fallen in love with each other.  They were just two chickenshit to admit it because of the differences in their races and his families outdated ideas about black people.  HER parents were afraid of their daughter getting hurt if Dominic decided to bow to the pressure of his families disdain for Lia.  

And hiding in the shadows is a man obsessed with possessing Lia.  Will these outside forces bond them together or tear them apart?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 24
Completed:No
Word count: 40900
Read Count: 138941
Published: April 01 2015
Updated: May 26 2015


Title: Chapter 23: Mending Fences Part 1

Irene is so stupid!  She should be happy for her own life instead of hatin'!  

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Date: May 23 2015

Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:

 

 

 

 

 

Zaira Jacobs and Eli Jacobs (her son) runs away from their past, from the pain, and from a 6 foot 4 German (Adrian Hitzag).

 

However, Adrian is not too eager to let his beloved mate escape from his grasp.

 

Follow the story of a determine mother, a curious son, and a possessive German.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: BDSM, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 24066
Read Count: 43589
Published: April 01 2015
Updated: January 07 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Opening Credits

In the opening summary Zaira is referenced as Adrian's possession, which seems to objectify Zaira instead of give her the status that being his mate and other half deserves. I'm glad she's running from him...

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed
Date: April 21 2015

Title: Chapter 7: Never let them tame your soul [6]

Poor Zaira...she' got kidnapped by one ugly mofo...let's see what happens next...but what is it about these men wanting to own a woman without her say so...slavery is supposed to be over but apparently that's not true, obviously...

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Date: June 06 2015

Rated: Most Ages
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Summary:

Falling in love; instructions not included.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles , General
Genre: Comedy , Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Fluff, Original Characters, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 2171
Read Count: 7100
Published: April 04 2015
Updated: May 02 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Tony and Cleo; The First Time

So sweet

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstar
Date: April 04 2015

Title: Chapter 2: Mona and D; I love you.

So sweet!

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Date: May 02 2015

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Summary:

You can pick your friends. You can pick your nose. But you can't pick your family.  



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 25
Completed:No
Word count: 87982
Read Count: 45727
Published: April 06 2015
Updated: February 14 2019


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I like this chapter as you wrote about the reality of IR marriage from the perspective of black people with parents from the CR era.  I also like Olivier because he was not a blind to the racist treatment Xam received but stood up for her.  Yet race appears to not define either Xam or Olivier.  I'm glad though their deaths are the catalyst for the story in a sense, you still allow us to know about them and the relationship they shared.  Good start. 

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Date: April 06 2015

Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Poor Matt...dude needs to grow up...but he and Style need to own up to their feelings for each other...

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Date: March 20 2017

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I'm starting to like this book more and more...It's still early but I hope we get to learn more about Matt's history as well as Shyla...they are so different but in some ways they seem to balance each other...I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this "relationship".

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Date: April 09 2015

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

That was a fun chapter!  Had me hollering because Shyla is too much!  Love it!

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Date: June 23 2015

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Definitely funny! I like that Shyla shares a bit of Arican American hair culture (the hair store) with Matt...cute!

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Date: October 01 2015

Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

That Shyla is cray! Does a white Puerto Rican count...I hollered! Too funny...love it!

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Date: February 08 2016

Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I loved this chapter....funny...this book is hysterical...

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Date: July 22 2017

Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

These two are cray...and fun...

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Date: February 27 2019

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Summary:

Despite the absurdity of bargaining with the Almighty while topless and bound in the bedroom of a man whose last name she can’t remember, Diya De la Roy gives God an ultimatum:  Send her a man and a love worth having by next Valentine's Day, or she would give up on both.  Forever.  

Unbeknownst to Diya, she'll get that and more, along with a lesson in how perfectly wicked divine humor can be.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:Yes
Word count: 13212
Read Count: 11185
Published: May 02 2015
Updated: May 02 2015


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - All a Part of His Plan

My previous review failed to do justice to the quality work that is you....your focus on hav8nv an actual plot that requires character development, interaction, drama, comedy and even angst make you a master storyteller imo. .I come back to your stories again and again because you get me hooked, like totally invested...when I first read this one, I totally hoped hard for a sequel...you craft beautiful romance where I can feel the characters falling in love...and sex is hardly the impetus that brings lovers together...it is typically a show of emotion that cements the relationship that you have crafted...with so many authors focusing on sex as the tool to bring.a couple together, it's rare to see the true creative genious that is you, Me Jax...

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Date: August 22 2016

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The End

I love this story...I'm glad someone voted to revive it among the book recommendations for the month...such a stellar effort from Ms Jax...it's fun to read the start of Diya's journey...dinner alone on Valentines Day does seem a drag but I admire her courage...

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Date: October 12 2016

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Summary:

 

Undercover agent and assassin, Nina Thompson knew this was going to be the hardest mission she’s ever had to accept for the international secret agency she was in.  It was going to test her in many ways she knew she wasn’t prepared for.  This was going to break her and change her and she didn’t know if she was ever going to be the same.  She falls into a downward spiral of drugs and resentment towards the mission leader, Maxim Sokoloff, an agent she’s always admired until now.  Can Maxim and another fellow agent pull her out of her hole?

 

*Dark Fic*



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Psychological, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Rape, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 26
Completed:No
Word count: 35257
Read Count: 20560
Published: May 09 2015
Updated: December 06 2019


Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Brandon said he hadn't fallen in love with anyone else in the agency...so is Nina imagining Brandon's love for her...Maxim is f*cked up...but Nina loves him and he loves her...that in itself is f*cked up...still it seems Brandon has been her anchor not Maxim...good story...thanks for the update after a long hiatus...

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Date: September 12 2016

Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Another good update...glad to see you back at this one...definitely original...excellent story overall...

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Date: June 05 2018

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Wow! Brutal for the emotion evoked. But I'm betting Nina's going to get hooked on drugs to block her pain. I hope not. I'm glad Maxim's there for her.  Excellent work.

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Date: May 30 2015

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

She's going to become an addict. Of what use is she then to the agency? They're going to trust her once she becomes an addict who then is only loyal to the highest bidder? I want to see if/how Nina gets out of this. I wonder that  she would have mad hatred for the agency once she was done.  Intensely good story.

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Date: June 04 2015

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