Penname: jahchannah [Contact]

Real name: Carlotta

Member Since: January 25 2015

Membership status: Member

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I love to read and support aspiring authors!




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COMPLETELY UPDATED


(Chapter 19,  20, & Epilogue uploaded as of 12/19/2018)


Growing up in a southern town like Glenmount, Alabama was never easy for Mercy Stovall especially if your personal demon eventually grow up to be 6'4'' and over 200 lbs. Then one night at a Halloween party, everything changed. It all started with one spanking and spiraled downward from there.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Kink, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 22
Completed:Yes
Word count: 73730
Read Count: 113708
Published: November 03 2015
Updated: December 19 2018


Title: Chapter 12: Heads, Beds, & Webs

Good update...after the start, I wondered if Gage would really try to woo Mercy...I'm glad he did and that he seems to really care for her...

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Date: August 29 2016

Title: Chapter 15: Priorities

Wow...I guess grandma and ma are not on the same page where Gage Colton is concerned...I'm not liking Violet but her heart is in the right place...I just think she went about it the wrong way...there's what she wants and then there is Mercy's life which belongs to Mercy...she is right that Mercy should not put her life on hold for Gage especially as someone she used to hate...but why can't she have both Gage and career...what does Gage plan on doing with his life or is the oilrig it for him...so many questions but Mercy and Gage are just getting started so there is time for them to decide the path of their relationship...and it should be their decision not Violet's...but she's right if they are thinking long term then it's a conversation that needs to be had...I'm just glad to see Gage thinking about Mercy and her wants/needs...let's see how he handles this latest "problem"...such a good chapter... 

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Date: April 10 2017

Title: Chapter 16: Run & Hide

Go Gage...he's not letting anyone keep him for Mercy...love it...

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Date: April 14 2017

Title: Chapter 17: Memory Lane

Loving Gage and Mercy...

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Date: July 12 2017

Title: Chapter 18: Three Little Words

Great chapter...Mercy needs to leave the nest to learn who she is...Gage is all about helping her.  

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Date: August 07 2017

Title: Chapter 19: The Golden Hour

Poor Mercy...cruel attack...I wonder it was instigated by Riley...and why did a beautiful black woman have to look like a non-African Goddess (grecian)...what's wrong with Mercy looking like an African Goddess?...

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Date: December 16 2018

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 28]
Summary:

“Will you walk into my parlor?” said the spider to the fly;
“’Tis the prettiest little parlor that ever you did spy.
The way into my parlor is up a winding stair,
And I have many pretty things to show when you are there.”
“O no, no,” said the little fly, “to ask me is in vain,
For who goes up your winding stair can ne’er come down again.”

Mary Howitt

In a town with not much going on besides sex, alcohol, and farms, Elouise finds herself caught into the mysterious, enticing web, that is Bud. He is the talk of the town. Always had been. But once he lays eyes on Elouise, it is hard for him to distinguish, exactly, who is the spider, and who is the fly. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 7132
Read Count: 6036
Published: November 10 2015
Updated: November 10 2015


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I agree with RedHobo that I'm not a fan of the very alpha male with the uber submissive WOC...we WOC should want to be valued no matter the ethnicity of the male in the relationship...Bud tolerates racism by hanging with Tyler so protecting Ellie does not make his behavior acceptable...racism continues because people like Bud tolerate people like Tyler...what about Ellie's feelings...does she not count or as the important person in our society as a wm, Bud is the only one who really matters...IR relationships work best because both parties understand society but see beyond the artificiall imposed boundaries...it's important that Ellie matter to Bud for who she really is for the relationship to really work...so let's see where you really take this story...

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Date: November 10 2015

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[Reviews - 63]
Summary:

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When Roger Moore kills his cheating girlfriend, he flees the state in search of the one person he know would take him in, his foster brother, Jeremy Wells. With Roger's past unbeknownst to Jeremy, he decides to take him into his home that he shares with his fiancée, Alyssa. At first, everything is great. Jeremy and Roger becomes close just as they were when they were kids. But as time pass, Jeremy's life slowly crumbles before his eyes. In the mist of all the chaos there is always a certain person within the mix... his brother, Roger which brings Jeremy to question: Is Roger still the same person he grew up with? Or is he just a wolf in sheep's clothing?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Psychological, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Kink, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 9577
Read Count: 4612
Published: November 12 2015
Updated: May 18 2017


Title: Chapter 2: Prologue

Roger is psychotic so already Jeremy has to be either naive or stupid to be manipulated by a man with no moral conscience...sure one can say that Roger has to be extremely masterful and I mean extremely masterful at manipulation...yet for anyone to be so manipulated by a person like Roger would suggest they rely little on their own powers of observation and desire for truth and right...not holding out a lot of hope for Jeremy's character...maybe not letting us know up front that Roger is so vile would have been better but that's just me...

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Date: November 13 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 27]
Summary:

 

 

The truth has always haunted the lives of Kim Min Jae and Nam Nari. The baggage that was passed down to them from their parents clings to them like a shadow that can't be out ran. When they're placed on two different paths in life, they may face struggles alone, yet together they dream of the day they can be reunited.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 51981
Read Count: 11155
Published: December 30 2015
Updated: March 10 2017


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wow, this story is good...cultural differences don't matter...men of all cultures still can behave like pr*cks to women...

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Date: March 04 2016

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Summary:

It's gonna be a bumpy road!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 31436
Read Count: 43008
Published: February 08 2016
Updated: March 05 2016


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I love Amelle...this story will be filled with humor, it seems...good work...

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Date: February 09 2016

Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Wow, that was unexpected but so good...

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Date: February 21 2016

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I like Mr. Carter...he really bent Reuben's ear and gave him much food for thought...

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Date: February 18 2016

Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Reuben's wealth and charm are not enough to make Amelle cave...she will resist him because she's not trusting that he could have any real interest in her...fair enough with his previous attitude...but the game is changing and Reuben is starting to see Amelle's worth...he is beginning to understand his mother's reasons for hiring Amelle...I am really enjoying this story...thanks for updating frequently!  

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Date: February 26 2016

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Can't wait for Reuben to eat crow...good story...

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Date: February 16 2016

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I really like Mrs. Masterson...she is an honest character who has her sons best interests genuinely at heart and she really likes Amelle because Amelle displays that same honesty...I am really enjoying this story...

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Date: February 17 2016

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Way to get your point across Amelle...

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Date: February 10 2016

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Reuben as a shrewd businessman would watch closely any person who has double-crossed him, which Gerrie has, so it makes no sense he would not be at least quite wary of her actions and motives...she sabotaged his business as a partner...would he honestly take that so lightly...but ok...

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Date: March 05 2016

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Summary:

"Obviously, you don't give a fuck about me! You just want me to stay at home and pop babies. My dreams mean nothing to you!"

"Is that what you think?" Yes was Ashley's immediate answer.

"I asked you a question."

"Does it matters!?"

"I guess you need to be reminded that you're moye serdtse."



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2647
Read Count: 14517
Published: February 15 2016
Updated: February 18 2016


Title: Chapter 6: o4

Such a cute little story...loved it!



Author's Response:

Yay,  thank you!

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Date: February 28 2016

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Summary:

A knight in shining armor is not always the righteous and kind-hearted man. Sometimes, he's the one that speaks his mind and uses his fists. He is not perfect but if he loves you....he loves you



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Family, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: The only thing that matters
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 17229
Read Count: 11384
Published: March 01 2016
Updated: December 29 2017


Title: Chapter 3: ~Chapter Three...~

Wow...these stories are crazy but fun...I like how they are all related...got to be hard to keep it straight...good work!

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Date: March 28 2016

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 58]
Summary: Siriphana Howard, was alone in this world until she met Nicholas Clayton. Who becomes her best friend, and anchor. With a trip back to his home for the holidays, she discovers that the man she secretly pins for has an unexpected surprise.

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Kink, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 31246
Read Count: 12554
Published: March 10 2016
Updated: June 05 2016


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Aren't women considered the opposite sex...so it's redundant to say "she was unlike any other woman he'd know from the opposite sex"...just sayin'...



Author's Response: I get what your saying but at the time it flowed with the sentence so i left it. as i said before i don't have a beta, and it was written awhile ago, that's a sentence that i hadn't change. thanks for bringing it to my attention

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Date: March 12 2016

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 28]
Summary:

They were a "missed connection" in High School. What happens when Jayden and Dean reconnect as adults?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 16228
Read Count: 12624
Published: March 19 2016
Updated: June 24 2016


Title: Chapter 2: Lumiere

I'm thinking Dean and Jayden are about to learn who they are as individuals and together...I'm here for the ride...

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Date: March 29 2016

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 28]
Summary:

Two ex-lovers meet in an airport terminal years after ending their relationship. The fourth and final installment of my series of one shots based on a song. And to be fair, this one was inspired by three songs--Hello, Send My Love and These Days.



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: Stand Alone but Together
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1554
Read Count: 3916
Published: March 24 2016
Updated: March 24 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I liked this little short...well done...

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Date: March 24 2016

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[Reviews - 55]
Summary:

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Emery and Nicholas have been friends forever. But when Nicholas finds out he's sick he asks for something that could change their friendship forever



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 4365
Read Count: 5809
Published: April 13 2016
Updated: August 21 2019


Title: Chapter 2: Requests

That's a pretty disgusting request to commit adultery with the husband's brother...dying or not, it's still adultery and shows deep seated lust of the brother for his brother's wife...it's definitely just as disgusting to consider the request...definitely lacking a moral compass here, especially to use death as an excuse, but some say to each it's own...

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Date: April 18 2016

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Summary:

Change is coming will she run or embrace it?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 9520
Read Count: 3540
Published: May 02 2016
Updated: May 04 2016


Title: Coming Alive

Something is wrong here with your formatting...this chapter is not new but a conglomeration of all the chapters.  Take your time and get help from the administration to fix your issues...you might get more readers if you make your work more reader friendly...

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed
Date: May 04 2016

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Summary:

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One Night Will Change Their Lives Forever.

 

Sexy Banner by Elizablu



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Crackfic, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:Yes
Word count: 9960
Read Count: 13077
Published: May 26 2016
Updated: June 05 2016


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

That was an adrenaline filled chapter...good work...

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 26 2016

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.