Penname: jahchannah [Contact]

Real name: Carlotta

Member Since: January 25 2015

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COMPLETED! (CHAPTER 30 & 31 UPDATED ON 4/20)

 

Thirty-seven-year-old Sugar Wallace used her bitter divorce as a sweet inspiration to pursue her lifelong dream of opening a trendy dessert and wine restaurant called Sugar Mama. Her friends and family want her to dive back into the dating game, but Sugar refuses to open her heart to another. Not when the man she gave her heart to for eighteen years of marriage crushed it after cheating on her with a young Instagram model. She's perfectly content with a busy life of running a successful business. Then one night, she witnesses a forty-six-year-old beaten man get pushed from a car and everything changes.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 119166
Read Count: 284378
Published: July 18 2017
Updated: April 20 2019


Title: Chapter 9: Sweet Talk

Loving this book and so.excited for their date...you have a blossoming romance on your hands...



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! It is definitely a blossoming romance even though Sugar doesn't want to admit it. LOL

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 07 2017

Title: Chapter 10: Hot Affair

I'm really enjoying Sugar and Chef's story...Sugar is in denial but Chef is giving her much needed attention...and Mariah is a gold digger looking for a bigger pot...Sugar seeing Mariah only helps her to further move on with her life...excellent story...



Author's Response:

Sugar is very much in denial, but Chef's about to make her come correct! :D

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Date: August 13 2017

Title: Chapter 11: Sugary Sweet

Your music choices are on point...thank you for the tunes...love the deftones and santigold is a new pleasure...you rock...



Author's Response:

Santigold's music is so good! She is one of my favorite artists. I love her alternative style. I am so glad you love that music selection. Starstruck is a very slow dark sexy kind of song that just fit this chapter perfectly. And Change by Deftones is my to-go song when I write steamy scenes. ;)

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Date: October 29 2017

Title: Chapter 11: Sugary Sweet

I loved this scene, btw...Sugar's insecurities are so realistic...she tries so hard to be perfect instead of just being who she is and realizing she is wonderful...Chef really sees Sugar and wants it al...



Author's Response:

Sugar does try very hard to be perfect and everyone thinks she is perfect, but Chef is gonna show her why she's perfect for him

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed
Date: October 29 2017

Title: Chapter 12: Sour & Selfish

Oh Sug calling Sully while she was getting some from Chef...I laughed so hard...I'm so glad you updated...



Author's Response:

I laughed for a good few minutes when I wrote that. I am glad that everyone is having the same reaction. 

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Date: December 04 2017

Title: Chapter 13: Tasty Offering

Snug knew Sully would call her out on the truth that she doesn't do casual...Snug is just in denial right now...I'm really enjoying this story...



Author's Response:

Bingo! She knew Sully would tell the truth she's been avoiding about not being able to have a casual relationship.

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Date: December 10 2017

Title: Chapter 15: Salty Scars

Love it...can't say that enough...Snug is falling but I think Chef is already there...



Author's Response:

Chef been in love with her since Day 1, LOL. 

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Date: December 18 2017

Title: Chapter 17: Sweet Welcome

Glad you're back...this book is solo good...



Author's Response:

I try to write as much as I can when I can. It gets so crazy as the school year goes on, but thank you so much for your patience and your support! <3

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Date: February 09 2018

Title: Chapter 18: Bitter Pretending

Great chapter!  Shug can be a pain with her pretending but she knows she's got it bad for Chef...just like Chef has it bad for her...



Author's Response:

She is growing as a character. She's getting there, but all she needs is one more push. Stay tuned!

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Date: April 07 2018

Title: Chapter 24: Rotten Intentions

Wow...I want to know, too...now you^re adding a bit of mystery...love it!...



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it so far! I gotta spice it up. ;D

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Date: July 03 2018

Title: Chapter 21: Bold Limits

I love this book...families often don’t see or understand the damage done unintentionally by a failure to allow one of their own to just be who they are...Miles does this for Sugar even what her family doesn’t...



Author's Response:

These next few chapters will explore why Sugar is the way that she is and it definitely involves her family. Lance definitely contributed, but there is a lot more to the story. I hope you stay tuned. 

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Date: June 26 2018

Title: Chapter 22: Bittersweet Past

I’m loving this couple...beautiful love story, here!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

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Date: June 28 2018

Title: Chapter 25: Bitter Pill

I love this chapter...their baby will help breaknthis so-called curse because Miles and Sugat will be awesome parents...so happy to see this update...



Author's Response:

More juicy chapters to come!

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Date: September 09 2018

Title: Chapter 26: Salty Tears

I am so happy for the amazing update...



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

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Date: October 21 2018

Title: Chapter 27: Bland Departure

Good on Miles...Sugar was stupid...great chapter...



Author's Response:

There are some lessons to be learned by the both of them next chapter. 

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Date: December 09 2018

Title: Chapter 28: Sweet Escape

I love them...let the healing begin...



Author's Response:

Healing is the fun part!

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Date: December 11 2018

Title: Chapter 28: Sweet Escape

I love them...Miles and Suga both have been hurt in life but they are a healing balm to each other...



Author's Response:

They are like ying and yang.

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Date: March 24 2019

Title: Chapter 29: Sugary Moment

She said yes...Sugar and Miles have come a long way...



Author's Response:

He wasn't going to let her say no, LOL.

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Date: March 24 2019

Title: Chapter 31: Raw Conclusion

Brilliant but you’re right Sugar and Miles can’t be over...can’t wait for more...

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Date: April 23 2019

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 106]
Summary:

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:Yes
Word count: 116940
Read Count: 30660
Published: July 20 2017
Updated: November 21 2017


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 New Look

Get your man, Kit...

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 27 2017

Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Unexpected Surprises

Romantic...

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Date: November 21 2017

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Forever With You

You don't take the "reigns", you take the "reins"....it's reins NOT reigns that are used to control a horse which is the origin of the term...same sound as reign but drop the 'g'...I'm amazed as the number of writers who don't know the correct term...



Author's Response:

Hey Jahchannah, 

 

I appreciate you helping me spot this error. I do indeed know the difference between the two words, but since I am my own editor, I often miss a few errors. I'll have to remember to go and fix it.

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed
Date: November 21 2017

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 118]
Summary:

 

Emmeline Carson always had a crush on Jason Bryant, but feelings would eventually change, when she became involved with his best friend. When her heart is broken, she swore off anyone who had ties to her ex—including Jason. Yet, a chance meeting leads to an embroiled love affair that is kept secret and locked away inside each other’s respective bedrooms. And although Jason and Emmeline have their own secrets, they will soon find out they aren’t the only ones.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 68048
Read Count: 13853
Published: September 08 2017
Updated: April 16 2021


Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings

I like the start...eager to see where you take this...

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed
Date: September 08 2017

Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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[Reviews - 79]
Summary:

Bumping into an old childhood friend might be exactly what Caitlyn needs, and Duncan Everston can still make her smile. Can an unexpected lunch turn into more? Or should the past remain exactly that...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 19677
Read Count: 2980
Published: October 09 2017
Updated: November 13 2017


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I have never disliked a black female protagonist as much as I dislike Caitlyn...shallow, no substance...

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Date: October 30 2017

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Reupload 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Dark Fic
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 7838
Read Count: 6455
Published: October 20 2017
Updated: October 20 2017


Title: Chapter 3: IN EACH OTHER'S ARMS

Really sweet and hot story...loved it...

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstar
Date: November 06 2017

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