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His Mercy by Missus James
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 458]
Summary:

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COMPLETELY UPDATED


(Chapter 19,  20, & Epilogue uploaded as of 12/19/2018)


Growing up in a southern town like Glenmount, Alabama was never easy for Mercy Stovall especially if your personal demon eventually grow up to be 6'4'' and over 200 lbs. Then one night at a Halloween party, everything changed. It all started with one spanking and spiraled downward from there.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Kink, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 22
Completed:Yes
Word count: 73730
Read Count: 113708
Published: November 03 2015
Updated: December 19 2018

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Title: Chapter 17: Memory Lane

I did have a wonderful Sunday. Thank you for bringing this story back! I love these characters and your writing.

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Date: July 15 2017
Title: Chapter 18: Three Little Words

Update, please!!!

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Date: December 15 2018
Title: Chapter 22: His

Thank you for finishing this. 👏👏👏

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Date: December 21 2018
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Sass by Dion
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 316]
Summary:

It's gonna be a bumpy road!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 31436
Read Count: 43007
Published: February 08 2016
Updated: March 05 2016

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Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Hilary is a devious, spineless, little girl; because real women don't comport themselves that way. A real woman wouldn't need to sank to such depths to prove her love or have to prove it to a real man. Thank you for the clarification into her character. Here I was giving her the benefit of doubt. I hope what she saw were the black and white drawings and not the colorful 3D drawings. I also hope Rueben or Amelle notice she accessed his computer. Maybe next time they'll be ready with some fake drawings for the fake people. Rueben doesn't seem to quite believe her sincerity.

Thank you so much for the quick updates! You ROCK!

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Date: February 13 2016
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Oh Mr. Carter! So much better than I imagined.

Rueben listen to your elders.

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Date: February 18 2016
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

You are SO wrong for ending there. Thank G-d you post consistently.

I'm loving this story. Who's going to have the last laugh?! It won't be Gerrie.

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Date: February 15 2016
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I appreciate the steady updating. It's AWESOME!

At first, I thought Mrs. Masterson (interesting choice of name; I've been meaning to point that out, but get so caught up in the story and forget to mention it) was using Amelle for exactly what she said - keep the THOTS (including Gerrie) away, but now I'm wondering if her mission has changed. I see two possibilities. Can't wait to see if you will go with those or something else.

Great story!

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Date: February 17 2016
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Happy Valentine's Day! This was a great way to begin mine. Best treat ever!

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Date: February 14 2016
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I realize why she didn't tell Rueben who she believes the flowers are from, but I hope she's told his mother. If she did, will Mrs. Masterson tell her best friend?

Rueben isn't curious like Dylan. He's intrigued by what he subconsciously perceives as a secret treasure from an unexpected source.

I wish he would lay off her about her vernacular. I hate when people do that! I love how quick and succinctly Amelle put him in his place.

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Date: February 14 2016
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

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Date: December 29 2016
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

REALLY! REALLY?! Come on Reuben...don't fall for the okie doke from Hilary. I believe Dylan sent her there. Possibly with the premise of reestablishing their friendship, but really it's so he can pick her brain about Reuben's designs. She went because she's curious about Arelle.

Gerrie's going to be a big problem.

Great chapter. Good length.

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Date: February 11 2016
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Please keep going. The pictures are on point!

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Date: February 09 2016
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Navsegda (A Short Story) by Yuukiyanagi
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 43]
Summary:

"Obviously, you don't give a fuck about me! You just want me to stay at home and pop babies. My dreams mean nothing to you!"

"Is that what you think?" Yes was Ashley's immediate answer.

"I asked you a question."

"Does it matters!?"

"I guess you need to be reminded that you're moye serdtse."



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2647
Read Count: 14517
Published: February 15 2016
Updated: February 18 2016

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Title: Chapter 6: o4

What a way to end it. Nice tie back to your inspiration.

I hate to see them go, but you wrapped it up so nicely I have no complaints.

Thank you for bringing them to us and completing their story.

You are a great writer with an awesome future.



Author's Response:

Wow Presh! Thank you so much for your kind words - that  means a lot! These two will back but first i need to finish my ongoing story and i plan to post another story that I hope you like just as much if not more! 

 

So I will be back! For sure!!

Hh

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Date: February 18 2016
Title: Chapter 5: o3.5

Da! Da! Da! That's what I'm talking about. Persuasion at its best.

Short but oh so sweet.



Author's Response:

hahahaha! thank you so much for the review! So happy that you enjoyed it!

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Date: February 17 2016
Title: Chapter 4: o3

Dang! You've created an interesting dilemma. I can't wait to read how you dissolve making both Ashley and Mak happy.

BTW, it would be hard not to give Mak what he wants. I'm glad he pulled them down and didn't "rip" them off.



Author's Response:

yes. these two need to talk but Maks is currently focused on one time - have his woman. not ashley minds that XD

hahaha, duly noted. will avoid riping underwear off for now on - forgive me if it happens though ;)

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Date: February 16 2016
Title: Chapter 2: o1

To be the woman in that picture...!

Good beginning. Can't wait to see where this goes.



Author's Response:

second that! for a moment i considered skipping a picture of Ashley before Maksim is just YUMMMMY!!! LOL!

so glad that you enjoyed it - more to come asap!

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Date: February 15 2016
Title: Chapter 3: o2

Dang! Come on!?

Liking this so far.



Author's Response:

cliffhangers sucks, lol!

more is coming - thanks for reading & reviewing!

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Date: February 15 2016
What If by carolinaheart
Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 19]
Summary:

Another song-based one-shot to go with Stone Cold and All I Ask. If the three shorts had to go in an order it would be All I Ask, Stone Cold and then this one. They can all be read alone though.



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: Stand Alone but Together
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1267
Read Count: 2927
Published: March 16 2016
Updated: March 16 2016

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Redemption!!!!! This is what every woman wants the guy who left her to feel. I'm glad you gave her a happy ending. I don't think you need another installment to this series. This is an awesome place to end it. If you do and they do run into each other please let her happiness with her life and husband shine through and not what could've been if he hadn't thought the grass was greener. Excellent writing! Thank you. I'm looking forward to your next series.

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Date: March 17 2016
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Dark Paradise by intellectual titmouse
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 61]
Summary:

http://i1194.photobucket.com/albums/aa363/intellectual_titmouse/dark%20paradise_zpsh1oekyul.jpg

 

The past never leaves. It's all in how you deal with it that determines how well you move on . . .

 

Vera Cooke thought she'd moved on, thought she'd buried her past well enough to get married and have a son and enjoy the life she'd been wanting.

 

But the past has a way of creeping back up. For Vera, it erupts disturbingly, violently, forcing truths to be revealed and a demanding need for revenge too hard to ignore.

 

Dope Banner by Elizablu



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Mystery, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Crackfic, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:Yes
Word count: 9367
Read Count: 12180
Published: May 22 2016
Updated: May 24 2016

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Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

SO GOOD!

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Date: May 22 2016
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Deacon's Justice-Warrior Crusader MC Club by Cju
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 61]
Summary:

Friendship and love cross paths.  Deacon is VP of the Warrior Crusaders wondering about what the future holds.  Lonilla is drifting through life.  The two slide into a friendship that is more than the connection they feel toward one another.  Will he fulfill is promise?  Can Lonilla value the meaning of love? ADDED PROLOGUE



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 23546
Read Count: 23507
Published: May 27 2016
Updated: March 13 2018

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Title: Chapter 2: Heading

Good start. Can't wait to see where this goes.



Author's Response:

Presh,

Thank you! We'll see. Got some good things brewing. 

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Date: May 27 2016
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6-Revised

Nia, Nia, Nia?! A man who beats a woman the way he lays hands on her will need more than counseling to help him see the error of his ways.

I hope Isa isn't sleeping with Jaime.

That's going to be an interesting conversation between Deke and Jaime. Can't wait for that.



Author's Response:

Hi Presh,

 

She is a little lost, but hopefully she can find herself.  What did you think of the interaction between Deke and James?

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Date: May 28 2016
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 8-Revised

Ok, you got me wondering if I'm right about Isa; that doesn't happen often. I'm liking that. The pictures are good. I imagined Deacon younger, but it works. It seems things are about to start moving. I can't wait!

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Date: May 30 2016
As Long As We're Both Not 18 by Mercie21
Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 21]
Summary:

Imagine a parallel universe where soulmates existed.

A world where you and your soulmate would grow old together and live happily ever after.

A world where if you hadn't found your soulmate, you'd be 18 years old and cease to age until you found your other half. 

Join 7 couples and their journey to finding their soulmate. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death, Fluff
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 18057
Read Count: 12776
Published: September 15 2016
Updated: February 05 2017

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Title: Chapter 2: Rayna - Pt. 2 of 2

This is interesting with a cool twist.

Because Sheila's scar is healed and she continued to age perhaps she has another soulmate. Although no one seemed to notice Bret was a little salty at the end. Does he have a scar?



Author's Response:

Hi Presh! Sorry, i know that the Sheila situation is confusing thank you and jahchannah for bringing it up. I did fix it. If your soulmate dies before you're 18, you'll still age until you're 18! That was a mistake on my part that I oversaw so thank you guys for that! :)

And no, Bret doesn't have a scar lol! I promise if he did, i'd say!

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Date: October 08 2016
In Blood We Pay by Yuukiyanagi
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 53]
Summary:

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"I’m a reasonable man. I came here, knowing you wouldn’t be able to pay the debt.”

”Then what do you want?”

“You’ve two choices, piccolina. Honour the deal and come with me or I’ll settle the debt. Right here. In blood."



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Smoking Guns & Black Roses - A Mafia Series
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 2118
Read Count: 6991
Published: January 07 2017
Updated: February 05 2017

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Title: Chapter 2: Drip...Drop...

Too short, but great start. More more more, please!



Author's Response:

some chapter are or will probably be short. for me when i try to add more, it messes with the flow of the story so i rather post something short then a story which feel "off" if that makes sense :) but i will keep in my mind what you said and see if there a ways to lengthen a story - thanks for reading and leaving a review!

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Date: January 08 2017
Title: Chapter 4: The Monster Known as Cicero (2)

When is the next installment?

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Date: December 15 2018

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.