Penname: Happy2bNappy [Contact]

Real name: Shay

Member Since: December 18 2009

Membership status: Member

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Okay, my stories weren't gone for long. The muse came a knockin' plus, I feel happy again. :-D




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Summary:

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Benjamin Cunningham III decided to finally open the box that his adopted parents had given him which would reveal his past.  Little did he know that its contents would change his life forever.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Rape
Challenges: Through His Eyes
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 82948
Read Count: 53958
Published: May 15 2013
Updated: September 05 2014


Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Reviving Relationships

Bennie really needs some help. He got on Ophelia's case for not going to counseling and now he's doing the same things. He's crazy to push away a good woman like Keisha and Alicia is right, he needs to suffer a bit. Hope she makes him crawl a bit because Keisha didn't deserve that. She stood by him and was understanding. I want their happy ending but Bennie needs to appreciate he can't treat peple that way even if he is going through things. Hopefully he be in Justice's life. She needs her big brother. That being said, I did feel bad for him. Get it together Bennie!!

Alicia and Kevin are a trip. So glad they finally got it on. Hope they can stay together. Will we see Kevin's racist ex? That would be hilarious to see Alicia put that KKklown in her place. 

Great update. 



Author's Response:

LOL Happy.  I forgot about the redhead redneck.  I'll have to write something about that for sure for sure.  You're such an inspiration!  I'll have to write you in as a cousin or something.  Just don't get in any fight with her when she spots Kevin with Alicia, lol.

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Date: July 12 2013

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Out in the Open

uh oh, your response has got me worried. Lord Jesus, these characters aren't even real and I'm praying for Ophelia. I think I'm the only one rooting for her at this point. I'm putting my plea in for her redemption and happy ending. Raymond on the other hand can join Margie in the tenth ring of hell. That is all. Thanks again for a great update. :-D



Author's Response:

I know...The muse wants what it wants.  I am really struggling here.  Don't hate me.

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Date: June 10 2013

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Out in the Open

Haha, that was epic! I'm glad my review inspired you. I giggled when I saw what I read the put the pipe down part. Crackhead Margie got what she deserved. I wouldn't even be surprised if she knew Raymond was going to have rape Ophelia. She probably facilitated it so she could get her hand on Raymond's money. Kind of makes me wonder why she even bothered fighting to regain custody of Ophelia is jail. Well, good riddance to her. 

Alicia is hilarious. Am I bad for laughing when Kevin admitted to not having a big penis? Is it as small as Max's from The Perfect Fit? If it's that small, homegirl may have a bit of a problem. But hey, if Kevin has a talented tongue she may give him a pass. Can we get pictures of those two?

I hope everything is okay with Abigail. I'd hate for something to happen to her. Benny has been through too much already and it would be so tragic if he were to lose his mother. 

Raymond, man oh man. What can I say about him. He has no regrets. And his reputation is ruined but I guess I can't get past him sleeping with an eleven year old. I know if I had a daughter and a grown ass man sleeps with her when she's underage especially that young, I don't even know if he'd make it to prison because like Miss Sophia said, "I'll kill him dead!"  Raymond seems to be getting a happy ending when he clearly doesn't deserve on. Ick.

The only people who need a happy ending is Bennie, Abbie, Keshia, Jacob, Alicia, Kevin, Justice and yes Ophelia. I know some people think she's sick, stupid and just as evil as Raymond but I gotta say, how well off in the head would the people who are saying that be if they were raised by a selfish drug addicted mother, was in foster care for a while which that in itself would scare some children, then given back to the crack addicted mother and then taken advantage of by a man while she's still a baby. Has a baby and loves it because its really the first constant in her life who truly loves her for pure reasons, to have that child taken away after a year and then moving from one section eight project to another. Let's see how well your mental health holds up to that. I think its pretty remarkable that Ophelia isn't in jail or a victim of the system herself. So yes, that's why I'm still rooting or Ophelia. 

This story is so good and I look forward to every update. You never dissappoint. Can't wait for the next chapter!! 



Author's Response:

Who said that Raymond will have a happy ending?  I certainly didn't.  LOL  Hold onto your seat, I may have to go hide after the next chapter.

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Date: June 10 2013

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 A Baby Named Justice

I'm still crying. Poor Ophelia.

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed
Date: June 13 2013

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 A Baby Named Justice

This chapter made me cry. I can't believe how real these charaters have become to me. My heart hurts for Ophelia who was screwed over from the very beginning. I feel like she payed the ultimate price for the actions of two selfish people. The way I feel about Raymond at this point is I don't care if he kills himself. Let him drive off a cliff. But the only downside is Abby will be terribly hurt and she's already got a heart condition. I think Justice will be better off being raised by Bennie and Keisha. Abby has health issues and I think Bennie would take responsiblity for his sister if he has to. What can I say about Bennie. Ophelia's death is going to hit him and hit him hard. He's going to wish he'd made amends with her while she was alive. The woman may have been off balanced but she clearly loved him. Her relationship with Raymond wasn't his place to understand. It was Bennie's job to give Ophelia the support she needed and help and gently prod her to get the help she needed. Now it's too late. I'm sure he did what he thought was best but how he treated her will haunt him for the rest of his life. I know it wasn't his fault and eventually he'll come to realize that Ophelia made her own decision but hopefully he'll use this as a life lesson to always show the people you care for in your life you love them because tomorrow is not promised. 

I don't think you need to go into hiding. This is a good story and you have the right to tell it how you please. I will keep reading as long as you keep writing, looking forward to the next chapter. 

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Date: June 12 2013

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 The Sour Taste of Revenge

Oh, this chapter made my heart hurt. Brenda you are so talented to be able to draw so many emotions from your readers. I kind of knew Ophelia's plan would backfire in her face but I think her mother and Bennie's reactions are kind of extreme. I understand Ophelia lied to them but let's face it, Margie was a freakin' drug addict who was an unfit mother for the first half of Ophelia's life. It's clear she once chose drugs over his child and she more than anyone should know about getting second chances. As far as Bennie, I understand his hurt and he has every right to be angry but Ophelia still clearly needs help. She made a really poor choice in going forth with her plan for revenge but it's been three months, I hope he finds it in his heart to forgive her and becomes her Teddy again. I hope he can look upon her as a mother. Ophelia is an adult in some ways, but she's still quite child like when it comes to men. As for Raymond, not sure what to think of him. Please please please, let Teddy forgive Ophelia, she's been through so much. Plus, I hope she is now more open to therapy. 

 

As for Bobbie, she's a piece of work. Hopefully Kevin isn't as big a tool as she is and dumps that trick like yesterday's garbage.  Nice chapter!!



Author's Response:

Happy I take that as a compliment for sure.  LOL  I am having a good time with both Raymond and Ophelia's warped personalities.  

You are right about Margie and Bennie will be confronting her in the next installment.

Thanks for the review!

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Date: June 03 2013

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Playing With Fire

This story is another winner. I love it so much. I shudder to think what Bennie will say to Ophelia when he sees her again. I hope Ophelia's scheme doesn't end up driving her son away. I  couldn't help but wonder if Raymond was faking the injury to get Ophelia to bend to his will. And will there be a baby? So many question. I'm on pins and needles for the next chapter. Thanks for all the wonderful stories you provide this site. 

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Date: June 02 2013

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Turning the Tables

I love Bennie and Keisha together. that scene was so sweet. When they finally make sweet love it will be explosive. They are just too cute. I'm not sure what to think about Ophelia and Raymond. While I wasn't a big fan of her face raping him, I still can't get past that he slept with an eleven year old. I guess as long as he's telling the truth to Ophelia maybe he has changed although I'm still giving him side eye. I've said it before but Ophelia is mentally unwell so I don't blame her carrying this fantasy in her head, having seen victims of sexual abuse before, they all cope with the trauma in different ways and this is Ophelia's coping mechanism. And by no means is she stupid, dumb or ignorant. She was a child and in many ways, mentally she still is. I think people like her deserve compassion. I really hope Bennie/Teddy and her can have a proper talk and reunite and have a loving relationship again.

As for Margie, she got off far too lightly. Please tell me there's some payback coming her way. If Raymond if telling the truth, she's a piece of dog crap. Margie please get lost in the middle of a cyclone. 

Another fantastic update!! I can't get enough of this story, whenever I see an update I squeal like a kid. LOL



Author's Response:

Raymond knows that Ophelia isn't mentally stable and he's treading lightly.  He's still not 100percent himself and he doesn't want to get on her bad side.  He's a little afraid of her.  LOL   As for Margie, we haven't heard the last of her.  More is coming!

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Date: June 07 2013

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Pain and Healing

Welcome back! I missed this story. This update made me cry.  I knew Bennie would regret how he treated Ophelia before she died now its come full circle. Not sure if he should have to accept Raymond's apology but I guess for the sake of his sister who is an innocent in all this, maybe he can find a way to at least tolerate Raymond. Hopefully Bennie will get his act together before he loses Keisha. I still don't really know what to make of Raymond raising a daughter who looks like Ophelia on his own. Once a child molester....At the very least someone needs to keep a close eye on Raymond with that kid. Can't wait to read up more on Kevin and his potential lady love. Loved it!



Author's Response:

Why do you think Social Services keep showing up?  No one outside his family trusts Raymond with Justice.  However, I'm not crossing that line.  Raymond was wrong for what he did, but Ophelia is the only one.  He does not want to hurt his daughter and he does not look at her that way.  In that sense he is a father through and through.  He has no sexual desires towards his own child.  With that being said, now he wants to raise her with Bennie's help, but he doesn't know for sure if Bennie's on board.  He still wants his sister's influence also because he feels that she's done such a good job with Bennie.

As for Bennie, he has a lot of unresolved pain that needs to be dealt with.  More is coming on Kevin the the next chapter.

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Date: July 08 2013

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Getting It Together

I'm so honored to get a mention. Bobbie is bold ass hell. She's lucky Shay didn't take that book and shove it down her throat. Backwoods Barbie is going to mess with the wrong one someday and find herself with Smokie from Friday standing over her saying, "You got knocked the f out!!" LOL 

Bennie has to realize he hurt Keisha and it will take her a little time to come around but he can show he's understanding by not being so impatient. Forgiveness always come right away just because you say you're sorry. It takes time. I hope Bennie will come to terms with his feelings about Ophelia's death so he can be a better big brother to Justice. 

And glad to see Raymond is a good father for the sake of Justice. He's still icky but at least he's trying. 

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Date: July 18 2013

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Summary:

   

 

A virtual wallflower for most of her life, what will Sasha do when she encounters the first man to ever make her want to be noticed? Dmitri is a man used to being surrounded by the most beautiful things, including women. Will he accept Sasha, a woman who is usually overshadowed by the beauty of her friends? Is he capable of noticing that while her beauty may not be as blatant, it should still be treaured? This is the story of a wallflower and the man she loves.

 

Sasha: the Wallflower has been removed from this site and is available for purchase on Amazon Kindle. Thank you all for your support!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2670
Read Count: 196744
Published: May 31 2013
Updated: November 25 2015


Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

So glad Sasha looked behind her and found her spine. Even though I adore this story it has been painful reading about her constantly getting dumped on. Glad she stood up to Dmitri. He never deserved her. He's a douche bag. Sorry, but he is. The only way I can see them getting back together is if he gets down on his knees in front of a crowd and kisses her feet. But I'd love to see Sasha find a hunk who will worship and love her the way she derserves. I'm still wiating for Faye and her sidekick to get what's coming to them as well. Maybe Sasha and Dominic? He seems like an interesting guy. Or maybe a new guy. I can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks for the update!

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Date: December 18 2013

Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

I'm glad Sasha is getting her life together, but I'm kind of hoping she'll get with Dominic. Carter and Lola should hook up since she seems to be more into him than Sasha. Though you haven't properly introduced Carter, he sounds like a nice guy and I would hate to see him get hurt if Sasha decides to dump him when that douchebage Dmitri comes back into the picture. Still not feeling Dmitri but I hope he does better and finally stands up to his father.   And Nadia can still kick rocks for all I care. 

Still hoping for Sasha to run into those skanks Faye and the other chick to put them in their places. Thanks for the update. Looking forward to more!!

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Date: January 18 2014

Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

Her mother is a piece of crap. It's good for Sasha to see she is better off without that woman. Hopefully she can build a relationship with her grandfather before he passes and it would serve her incubator right if her grandfather leaves everything to Sasha in his will. I think Dmitri needs to stand up to his father and show Sasha that he chooses her over that man before she can give him another chance. But I'm slowly starting to see that maybe Dmitri isn't the big turd I thought he was. 

Great chapter. 

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Date: June 04 2014

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

I like this story, but I'm so tired of Sasha getting dumped on. It's getting painful to even read on her behalf. Yes she should have stayed out of the mess, but Dmitri has proven time and time again that he isn't as in to her as she is in to him. Screw Dmitri. I'm tired of Sasha not standing up for herself, she might as well wear a damn sign on her forehead that says "abuse me" She never speaks up for herself, never fights back, come on. This is ridiculous. Dmitri, go kick rocks. I won't be a bit sad if Nadia dies. As a matter of fact, Dmitri and his father can both go down in a fiery car crash. Take Faye and Jaelynn with you. Because they all suck. Sasha, get a backbone and therpy and find someone who appreciates and love you, or if you choose to be misery, go ahead and join Dmitri and his father in that car crash. SMH.

My rant of course has nothing to do with you as a writer Sha, I think you've created an engaging story and it speaks to your ability that you can elicit these feelings from your readers. But yeah, I'm going to get my blood pressure under control after reading that.  

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed
Date: November 18 2013

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

Yes, yes, yes and some more yes. I sincerly hope Sasha isn't finished telling that trick off because its been a long time coming. To be honest, I think Faye was jealous of Sasha. Faye only has her artificial looks to rely on but Sasha is the real deal with goals and aspirations in her life and she's beautiful on the inside and out. Faye is like a rotten apple with a worm in it. Jaelyn needs to get some of that too.

I'm so glad Sasha gave it to Dmitri. You almost had me feeling bad for him not to bad, he had it coming but that was great. Now he realizes he has to work for it. Now Sasha needs to let Nadia and that asshole father of theirs have it. They suck so bad.

Here's hoping Carter doesn't get to badly hurt. I like him. Maybe he can end up with her friend. 

I really enjoyed this chapter. I'm so glad to see so much growth with Sasha. She is now a full grown woman and I love it! Thanks for the speedy update. Hope to get another one soon. This is way too good to leave us hanging.

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Date: January 31 2014

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Oh Sha, I really like this story. Dmitri is getting on my last nerve though. Just because you're thinking it, doesn't mean you should say it. He really should have kept that bit about her not being his type to himself. He already realized Sasha has low self esteem and he practically decimated her. At this point if he's not willing to get his act together, I'd really like Sasha to move on and find someone else, maybe make Dmitri jealous. And please please please with sugar on top, if you could find in your heart to have Sasha deliver a roundhouse kick to Faye's chest. That bitch needs to eat pavement so bad. 

Can't wait to read more!!

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Date: June 04 2013

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

What? I gotta wait until next week for an update? You can't write something that good and then expect me to wait. How rude, lol. All jokes aside, I loved this chapter and loved Sasha and Dmitri's interaction. Looks like Dmitri still has a bit to learn about being in a relationship and Sasha needs to start believing in her own beauty and sex appeal. When they finally make sweet love it will be explosive. Still pulling for Faye to return to receive that round house to the face. Js. Great job. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! Sorry for the wait. :-)

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Date: June 19 2013

Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28

So glad he put a ring on it. I see Dmitri's father wasn't mentioned so I guess he didn't come to the wedding. Oh well, that's his loss. I'm really sad to see this story come to an end. Great job, can't wait to read Slade and Dina's story! 

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Date: October 01 2014

Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Great update. I hope Carter won't get hurt because its obvious Sasha still has feelings for that asshat Dmitri. I have a feeling Sasha and Dmitri will find their way back to each other but please make him suffer a little while. Don't make it too easy for him. And please please please let Sasha be able to finally stand up to those skanks Faye and Jaelynn. It would be poetic justice that their lives aren't going the way they planned. I don't get Teagan though, how can she not know what those two are like. She's annoying. Looking forward to Dina's story!! As always, great update. Update soon!!

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Date: January 30 2014

Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

Good chapter, although I would have liked to have see more of Sasha telling Faye off a little more and to see what came of that. Maybe Teagan can see Faye for the bitch she really is.

Dmitri still needs to do some more groveling in my opinion but at least he's on the right track. Looking forward to more.

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Date: February 18 2014

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

I don't understand how Sasha would think Faye is her friend. She dismisses her, breaks promises and then talks to her as if she's an annoyance. And I have no doubt Faye would expect Sasha to jump if she asked Sasha to do something for her and Sasha would gladly do it.  It's kind of hard to root for Sasha when she doesn't seem to care about herself. I find this story intriguing and looking forward to the developemnt of Dmitri and Sahsa's relationship, but I really hope somewhere in this story she let's Faye have it. That was just unnacceptable how rude she is to Sasha. And Jaelynn too. Teagan seems like she cares, but I guess we'll see as the story progresses. 



Author's Response:

Faye is truly the worst of them all because she is very self-absorbed. Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed
Date: June 02 2013

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

I'm glad Sasha is sort of standing up for herself but she's still letting that bitch Faye get the last word. I hope this isn't the last we see of Faye of Jaelynn especially Faye for nothing else but to get what's finally coming to her either a strong back hand slap that would knock her to the ground or a round house kick to the chest or a karate chop to the throat. I normally wouldn't advocate that kind of violence but Faye is so vile. Wonder what would happen to her if she lose her looks all of a sudden. It would be no less than she deserves. As for Jaelynn, she's the dumbass of all dumbasses. Clearly Faye is not her friend either is she can so easily use racial slurs to put someone else down while she's standing there. That trick should fall down a flight of stairs. Those two are just so gross.

 

Come on Sasha, start believing in yourself. You're worth so much more than those two harpies. Hold your real friends close. I'm enjoying this story and hope to see another update really soon. 



Author's Response:

lol Love your description of Jaelynn and Faye. I'm happy to see such great dislike for these characters- it lets me know that my readers are invested in the story. Thank you for your review! I should be able to update within the next couple of days. 

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Date: June 14 2013

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Wow, why did Nadia have to be so stank? Do not like her. Seems like she's just as manipulative as the rest of his family and I'm going to need Sasha to put this trick in her place. How are you just going to come up into someone's house and disrespect their significant other like that. I don't are if its jealousy, its a childish behavior and she need a strong backhand across the face. Boo. And how about his father turning on him because he didn't want to keep up appearances. Dmitri needs to man up and proudly proclaim Sasha as his woman, and Sasha stop taking his bull crap. Stand up for yourself and don't accept anymore of his excuses.

Loving this story. Please update soon. 



Author's Response:

haha. Great tirade. right on all accounts. Thank you for reading!

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Date: July 04 2013

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

I enjoyed the long sex scene, but I gotta say, Dmitri keeps letting Sasha down just about every chapter. At this point if he can't be man enough to admit to his sister that Sasha is his woman, there's no way he's going to stand up to his father. Exactly what can his father do to him? I'm confused about that because he says his father can make trouble for Sasha but if that's what he expect then it means he doesn't intend for things to last. She's just a convenient piece of tail for him. I really like this story but at this point, I'm rooting for Sasha to boot Dmitri and find someone else who is not ashamed to proclaim their relationship in public because as far as I see it he has all these convenient excuses for not introducing her in his girlfriend. I was so through with him when he wouldn't admit that they slept in the same bed. He's acting like he's a teenager still living in his parent's house. At this point in the story, Sasha is better off without him because I see he's going to play her yet again. I'm adding Nadia and Dmitri on my list of people who need to be karate chopped in the throat. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your honesty! I understand where you are coming from. I think many of the readers have been so worried about Sasha's growth in terms of confidence and self-esteem that they have completely forgotten that Dmitri is also a character that needs a lot of growth. I've purposely written him this way because I don't particularly like male leads that are always protrayed as being absolutely perfect. Dmitri may come off that way intially but as you see in their relationship he has a lot of family issues he has internalized to the point that it is hindering his ability to create new relationships. he almost has a childlike fear of his father taking away any new people in his life. His father is truly a manipulative person and you will get to see that more as the story progresses so Dmitri's fear is grounded in truth but it has been exaggerated to a certain extent in his own mind. While I don't want to give anything away, Dmitri's motive in terms of where he and Sasha's relationship is headed is still on the fence. Remember, he is not used to anything long-term so he may unconsciously look for excuses to prevent their strengthening relationship from continuing before it gets to the point where it would really hurt him if his father were to somehow take Sasha away. I hope this clarifies a few things and that you keep reading! Thanks, again! :-)

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstar
Date: July 06 2013

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Team Dominic. so done with Dmitri,Sasha deserves better and I'm still waiting for Jaelynn And Faye to get a roundhouse to the face.  teagan better watch out for those two because they will turn on her too. looking forward to the next update. here's hoping Nadia drives off a cliff.

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Date: July 24 2013

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