Penname: sweetlooking218 [Contact]

Real name: Chanel

Member Since: June 25 2010

Membership status: Member

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Three Simple Rules by LadySade
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[Reviews - 6]
Summary:

3 Simple Rules


Never choose a model on a whim
Never work with the same model more than once
Never get high on your own supply

These are the Three Simple Rules that Hassan has followed for many years as a seasoned photographer. But when he meets her on the subaway, Hassan discovers that some rules are just meant to be broken.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: Can I Tell You My Fantasy?
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 4753
Read Count: 1772
Published: May 31 2013
Updated: May 31 2013

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Title: Chapter 3: Never get high on your own supply

LOL!!! Morgan Freeman? Too cute, LOL! I really liked this short story, grreat from start to finish. I hope there is a part two in the future :-)



Author's Response:

Thanks Sweetlooking! Ha ha! It is true. The Morgan Freeman voice gets me through some of my awkward moments. Thanks for reading and reviewing. I really hope to have a spin off for this some day :)

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Date: May 31 2013
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Sasha: The Wallflower by sha2011
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 1032]
Summary:

   

 

A virtual wallflower for most of her life, what will Sasha do when she encounters the first man to ever make her want to be noticed? Dmitri is a man used to being surrounded by the most beautiful things, including women. Will he accept Sasha, a woman who is usually overshadowed by the beauty of her friends? Is he capable of noticing that while her beauty may not be as blatant, it should still be treaured? This is the story of a wallflower and the man she loves.

 

Sasha: the Wallflower has been removed from this site and is available for purchase on Amazon Kindle. Thank you all for your support!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2670
Read Count: 196756
Published: May 31 2013
Updated: November 25 2015

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Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

 GO SASHA!!! That's how a grown ass woman held themselves. She said it with class and respect. I applaud her for that. I am sad that they are over, but she needed to have a man respect her for who she is, wrong or right. Have your woman's back. Now I can't wait for the next chapter, I hope Sasha gets her happy ending :D

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Date: December 18 2013
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27

Wow... The man has a heart after all. I was so sure this family dinner would be over and done, I am really surprised at how it went. Well, some of it, LOL! I just love Sasha and Dmitri's bond, I can't wait for the next chapter.

 

Great update and please post again soon. Happy Labor Day :D

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Date: September 01 2014
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28

AWWW!!! The best ending to the BEST story. I am so happy Dmitri and Sasha have their happy even after, I just loved the beautiful wedding and family their for support of them both. I have to say this is one of my favorite stories, I was addicted and now I can be happy about my favorite couple getting happiness too. LOL!!

 

Great Job, I hope you continue writing and maybe just a little story for the newlyweds in the future? PLEASE!!! :D

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Date: September 28 2014
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Woah.... Sasha got some explain' to do now that she is dating Carter. SMH, why the lies, Sasha girl? I can't wait for more.

Great JOB :D

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Date: January 31 2014
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

Woah..... Ok, I am Team Dmitri again. Lol! He has regained my faith in him. That was extremely sweet of him to do that for her. I hope that he keeps on this Non-douchebag attitude. And I love that Slade is back, I hope he follows suite and get his woman back!! LOL!

Great job! Please post soon :D

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Date: May 27 2014
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

AWE!! I feel just like Dimitri, they are both so fucking adorable. I love this chapter, I love how Dmitri lets Sasha know that real friends look out for you no matter what. I can't wait  for more. Great Job :-)



Author's Response:

Yeah, despite all his faults, he's really helping her find her way. Thank you for your review!

 Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 18 2013
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

I love it! Sasha is my hero, I know exactly how she feels and changing is not easy nor wanted sometimes. But she focused on herself and what she wants in life, her life.

Though, I will always want her and Dmitri to be together, he has to earn her love and trust. I hated how she gave him so much power but that is over now and changes have been made. So has their lives. I hope Dmitri is half the man he claims to be because this time, Sasha is not a girl, she is a GROWN ASS Woman!!!

 

LOVE IT!! Please make that next chapter. I will be waiting... Great JOB :D

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Date: February 04 2014
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

I was so moved by that chapter, I am glad we all know what happend and that at least her grandfather was a decent man. I hope she holds on to that and that she is a great woman who overcame the harsh upbringing.

As for Dmitri, I hope she gives him another chance. It's rare to be able to say sorry and try again, I hope she can forgive him and make him work for her everyday for the rest of his life. LOL!!!!

 

Great job, please post soon :D

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Date: June 02 2014
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

Hmm.. Well since he apologize so nicely. I am willing to say I would like to see how far is he willing to make it up to Sasha. He better move the stars and the seas with all that romantic lovey-dovey words and keep ALL his promises in showing Sasha just how specaial and wonderful she is. Then MAYBE, I might forgive him... I am not too sure if he even deserves her. I want Sasha to want to be happy with him.. He doesn't deserve her in any shape or form. 

 

But you have to forgive at some point.... I love the chapter. I think Dom is moving in the right direction but I don't know if he REALLY means it... I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope you post again today, since it's my birthday wish and all today. LOL!!

Grea JOB :D



Author's Response:

Happy Birthday!!! I'm sorry I won't be able to post but it will be coming soon! I hope you have/had a wonderful day and thank you for your review! :-)

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Date: February 18 2014
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

I really like it, very different. I can't wait for more :-)



Author's Response:

Very glad to hear you are enjoying my story! Thank you!

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Date: June 02 2013
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

UGH!! I really hate how Sasha's (so called) friends treat her. She is a really sweet and loving person, I would love to have a friend like that AND she is not trying to push up on the HOT man-whore, sexist that is Dmitri. LOL!!!

 

I really like this story, though Sasha taking the abuse and wrongful treat of others is not one of my favorites. I am loving the creative and twists you add. Please post more soon :-)



Author's Response:

So happy to hear that you are a fan of the heroine. In a lot of the books I read, I find myself disliking how the main character is protrayed and I was worried the same would happen to my readers. Thank you for your review! I will be updating soon. 

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Date: June 02 2013
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

WHAT?! Ok, I.. WHat?!  I can't believe the two people that Sasha is somewhat close to right now, both hurt her badly, without a single care. Then sayin she got issues??... WHAT?! I want to kick both there asses, just sayin. LOL! Is there anybody other than Sasha with a decent, friendly quality WORTHY of Sasha? 

Please post another chapter soon, I hope Sasha moves and get much better people and environment.

Good job with the story, though I am really not liking all the other characters right now, LOL! And Great job on Sasha standing up and given back the sassiness, I only pray she will cut up her 'friends' and set them straight too. LOL!!

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Date: June 05 2013
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

Lovin it!!! I am torn about Dmitri, but I can't help but hope they get back together. Despite all his flaws he is a good man with bad trust issues. LOL!! I am loving how much hell Sasha is giving him though, he deserves it.

 

Please post soon and Great Job :D

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Date: May 08 2014
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

Wow.... This is my favorite chapter, hands down. The love between Sasha and Dmitri is something special. I HATED how they ended & how people treated Sasha, expecially Dmitri. But you had Dmitri comeback in a very big way and I love it! LOL!! 

Great job on the sex scenes, one of the best on this site. I like how you don't have it in every chapter, the build up and special ones you make are SOO worth it. Please post another chapter soon :D

 Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 25 2014
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

I love this chapter, it was the one I was waiting for next to the reunion between Dmitri and Sasha. It's great that Sasha and Dmitri's relationship is back to a great start and I hope the evil father will accept their relationship and make nice with everyone.

 

Oh and I LOVEEEE the sex scene, it's great to be happy and in love. Hope you post soon. Happy 4th of July (if you are not back, LOL!)

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Date: July 03 2014
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Body Party by Bryleigh Lisette
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 189]
Summary:

An innocent night of fun ruins the lives of two people who realize they are screwed without each other but especially with each other.

 

"My body is your party"



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:Yes
Word count: 44180
Read Count: 56980
Published: July 07 2013
Updated: October 04 2013

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Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19- Epilogue 1

I just love, LOVE this story. I am sooo damned late in reading this story but I am soooo happy I finally was able to. GREAT Story, from the first chapter to the last this story ROCKED!!! 

 

Please, post one shot, just something on the Tobias & Ari. The baby is a wonderful addition and having a glance at them present/future time would be AWESOME! 

 

BEST STORY EVER!! :D



Author's Response:

awe thank you for reading it! and yes i do have a holiday moment in mind for these two :)

 Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 13 2013
Heart and Wolf by Lindy
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 33]
Summary:

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What happens when a werewolf refuses to follow his nature,does his wolf take full control or will the human side win the battle of wills...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General, Supernatural
Genre: Family, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 10355
Read Count: 3512
Published: July 13 2013
Updated: September 08 2013

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Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Awww... A beautiful moment. I can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks for updating :D



Author's Response:

hank you for reading!!!

 Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 09 2013
Bad Blood by TheDoll
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 46]
Summary:

BOOK 2

 

Mayte is a woman reborn. It's been 8 years since she left the torment of high school and she is truly feeling herself. But when a bully from her past life stumbles into her place of employment, all of sudden she feels like a bullied kid again; she wants revenge.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content
Series: Hollywood Gems
Chapters: 7
Completed:Yes
Word count: 15464
Read Count: 14748
Published: July 24 2013
Updated: August 18 2013

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Title: Chapter 2: Monkey Wrenches

Great job!!! I love your characters and I can't wait to find out what happens. Keep going :-D

 Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: July 26 2013
Title: Chapter 3: Revenge is not so sweet

Oh man, I wanted her to beat the shit out of him... And thank the lucky stars she did. LMAO! Love the update, I hope Mayte finds that she is a better and hotter woman. He was, sorry IS still that same lame ass bastard whom amount to his worth, high school loser. 

 

Please post more soon :-D

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Date: July 27 2013
Title: Chapter 6: Conclusion

Great Ending! I love it :D

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Date: August 17 2013
Title: Chapter 7: Epilogue: Four Years Later

Awww.. A perfect ending with the fighting and cursing to show the love. LOL!! Love it :D 

 

Please make a new story soon, great work!

 Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 18 2013
Blue Moon: Solana's Motherhood by Nsablo
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 31]
Summary:

From the first part of the story, Solana found out that she is pregnant with Matthew's first child at such a young age. Now that this sequel starts off with Solana six months pregnant and preparing for the birth of her first pup. 

With a pup on the way in a matter of 3 months, Matthew has to make sure that Solana is healthy and heavily guarded. More drama and danger awaits for the Alpha pair. 

Sequel to Blue Moon

 

Disclaimer:All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Fantasy, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 22559
Read Count: 4985
Published: August 07 2013
Updated: October 31 2015

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Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I'm thinking... I love this story and I can't wait for more!!! I really like the twist and adding more juice to the thick drama filled pot was awesome! LOL!!

 

Please post again soon, great job :D



Author's Response:

Really? You love it!? I was beginning to think that this story is a DUMP. I am not hearing from my revieiwers like I used to. And I just thought that maybe this was going to be it for this story :/. I am glad that you like it and would like for me to post again. I really appriciate  it. I am just happy that at least you are reading it along with others. I will continue this story to the end! It only has a a bit more to go. 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! You don't understand how much this means to me! I will update this story as fast as a I can. 

Thanks, 

Nsablo 

 Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: June 25 2014
The Darkest Touch by rococo
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 19]
Summary:


 


Brooklyn streets are grimy, grimier than the gunk on the concrete pavement, can't trust anyone or anything. But for Ekene Sosa, high school art teacher, it was the safest place in the world. That safe world soon gets turned upside down as she uncovers the dark secrets of her families past and finds herself being a number one target on every gang banger and crime mob hit list. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 15393
Read Count: 3913
Published: August 14 2013
Updated: October 17 2013

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Inebriated Reunion

I like it!! This is a very good writing, I can't wait for your next post :D



Author's Response:

oh thank youuuuu! Can't wait for you to read the next chapter! 

 Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 15 2013
Follow My Lead by jojo83
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 34]
Summary:

It takes a strong, confident woman to allow a man to take the lead. It takes an even stronger man to be able to take her where she needs to go.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 15313
Read Count: 7273
Published: August 15 2013
Updated: November 28 2013

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Title: Chapter 3: Part 2

Great story, I love the dancing and the two hot male dancers. Please post more soon :D



Author's Response:

thank you for reading! i'll try not to keep you waiting too long :)

 Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 13 2013

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.