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Summary:

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Thalia knows why she abandoned her hometown of Darming for the Big Apple. Her infamous Shannen blood could never let her forget it. But when news of her cousin's murder brings her rushing back home she finds herself caught up in a whirlwind of familial dilemmas and betrayals, all while going head-to-head with the notorious MC, the Saxon Horde.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Family, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Femslash, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: The Tough and The Gritty
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 31051
Read Count: 19192
Published: February 28 2013
Updated: November 04 2017


Title: Chapter 9: The Price We Pay

Before I even read the update, 👏👏👏 thank you!

Reviewer: AP Signed
Date: November 16 2015

Title: Chapter 10: Sounds From The Ground

You made my night with this update. Thank You!! I can't wait for more!

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Date: August 28 2017

Title: Chapter 11: Sweet Little Lies

Thank you for this update!! This is one of my favorite stories on VC and I can't read enough. 



Author's Response:

Oh my goodness, you’re so welcome! You’ve just made my entire day :] I hope to continue to take you for a ride on Thalia’s journey!

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Date: November 04 2017

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Summary:

When it Hurts so Bad

 

 

When best childhood friends, Cassandra Bishops and Jae-Hoon Whitaker, share a night of passion, they find that making their new, intimate relationship prosper would prove to be more challenging than they realized. When heart breaking secrets come to light and obstacles arise, will they choose to fight for their love or will they go their separate ways?

 

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Taking a short break from this story
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 30419
Read Count: 9388
Published: March 19 2013
Updated: August 11 2013


Title: Chapter 5: Episode 1: Ch 5

This is my first time reading and I enjoyed it so far. I want to know what the secret is though. What happened a month ago and what's with the phone calls? I'm thinking maybe it has to do with his ex and a new arrival on the way? He did quit the band and he keeps talking about settling down. If that's the case though, I'd definitely get a DNA test.



Author's Response:

;)

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Date: April 06 2013

Title: Chapter 6: Episode 1: Ch 6

I don't think Diana should be so quick to tell her sister. She knows only what she's seen and not anything about the circumstances behind it. Give him a chance before going off half-cocked. By the same token, Jae-Hoon should have already told her what the deal was by now. 



Author's Response:

You are so right. It would not do anyone good if they just jumped the gun all willy neally.

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Date: April 15 2013

Title: Chapter 8: Episode 1: Ch 8

I know that Diana has her sister''s best interests at heart and I'm glad she didn't disclose what she saw at the office (definite breach of confidentiality) but she really needs to fall back some. This is between Cassandra and Jay and their baby. Jae needs to quit keeping secrets because he's only hurting their relationship. More please.



Author's Response:

Yeah, there's nothing like having a younger overprotective sibling. Sometimes people do more harm than good when they're this way. Thanks so much :) 

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Date: May 05 2013

Title: Chapter 10: Act 1: Ch 10

Well, at least the truth's out and that's the best thing about this chapter. I don't know where things will go from here but now there are no more secrets. I know that Diana means well but she's becoming overbearing. Screening Jae's calls and visits doesn't help the sitation.

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and commenting.
Yes, Diana is... I don't know where to start. Sometimes I just look at her and shake my head. Sometimes when I see Diana, "Under my breath, All I can say is, Mmm, mmm, Damn, Mmm."~ Ginuwine (None of Ur Friends Business)

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Date: May 31 2013

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Summary:

Laura MaCalister is an aspiring fashion designer. While on her way home from work her world collides with the dark life of Nicholi Gorbachev. Nicholi is the boss of the Mogilevich Family. He has plans for the young and inexperienced Laura. However she wants nothing to do with him. Her mind is telling her he is nothing but trouble but her body goes up in flames just from hearing his name. What will become of this couple? When all their secrets are exposed the only thing that can keep them together is love but love could also tear them apart.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:No
Word count: 30777
Read Count: 41269
Published: March 31 2013
Updated: March 31 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Interesting start.

Reviewer: AP Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 01 2013

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5-Who is she

I like this story so far. Nicholi is not likeable yet but I have a feeling that Laura will change that. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. Not sure what changes to make in Nicholi's persionallity as the story goes along but yeah Laura will straighten him out sooner or later

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Date: April 01 2013

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Summary:

“A mighty pain to love it is,
And 'tis a pain that pain to miss;
But of all pains, the greatest pain
It is to love, but love in vain.”



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 28555
Read Count: 11890
Published: April 01 2013
Updated: August 15 2023


Title: UnRequited

Thumbs up on your cast. Charlie is beautiful. 

Reviewer: AP Signed
Date: April 01 2013

Title: Chapter 1: In the beginning...

I like this so far. Charley {I corrected my spelling, wouldn't want to make her mad lol} and Rider have already clicked and it seems promising.

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Date: April 01 2013

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Summary:

Sebastian and Sage want what they can't have.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Sexual Content
Challenges: Can I Tell You My Fantasy?
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 4846
Read Count: 5678
Published: May 02 2013
Updated: May 04 2013


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Great update! You answered the questions I had. 



Author's Response:

I hoped that this chapter would wrap things up.

Reviewer: AP Signed
Date: May 04 2013

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Summary:

At some point, you'll have to eventually let your guard down.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 192818
Read Count: 288022
Published: May 08 2013
Updated: October 03 2015


Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16 PREVIEW

Without question. There is no doubt in my mind that you need to publish this. 

Reviewer: AP Signed
Date: December 11 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I hope that you update again soon. This is still one of my favorite stories on VC. 

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Date: July 19 2017

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Summary:

   

 

A virtual wallflower for most of her life, what will Sasha do when she encounters the first man to ever make her want to be noticed? Dmitri is a man used to being surrounded by the most beautiful things, including women. Will he accept Sasha, a woman who is usually overshadowed by the beauty of her friends? Is he capable of noticing that while her beauty may not be as blatant, it should still be treaured? This is the story of a wallflower and the man she loves.

 

Sasha: the Wallflower has been removed from this site and is available for purchase on Amazon Kindle. Thank you all for your support!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2670
Read Count: 196744
Published: May 31 2013
Updated: November 25 2015


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

There's something not quite right with Dmitri. I'm not sure what it is but Iook forward to more. 



Author's Response:

He is quite mysterious isn't he? No worries, the rose-colored glasses should fall off soon as their relationship develops. Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: AP Signed
Date: May 31 2013

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Summary:

*Revamped and revised version of former story The Assistant*

 

Marissa Jacobs is the assistant to her tyrannical boss Ron Kincaid who is going through a bitter divorce. As the holiday season approaches, her will and sanity is tested by Ron. When Ron shows up at Marissa's apartment drunk, Marissa makes it her mission to help Ron see there is more to life than just being bitter and mean. Of course, she wasn't expecting to fall in love with him.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language
Series: None
Chapters: 22
Completed:No
Word count: 28046
Read Count: 54399
Published: December 12 2013
Updated: December 24 2015


Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I'm happy to see this update. I hope you'll continue.

Reviewer: AP Signed
Date: December 22 2015

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In the wake of an ugly divorce, Natalia executes a scheme meant to move her beyond the hurt inflicted by her ex-husband, Richard.  The plan is to ease her suffering by increasing his, and her weapon, a younger man unwittingly drawn into the illicit plot. 

In the quest for revenge, will Natalia realize her goal of bringing Richard to his knees?  Or will vengeance and her weapon of choice become her undoing?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: December's Wrap-up!
Series: None
Chapters: 40
Completed:Yes
Word count: 120
Read Count: 91991
Published: December 13 2013
Updated: May 02 2015


Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Happy New Year?

I'm just waiting for the other shoe (aka Sabrina) to drop. 



Author's Response:

You know something's bound to go down.  Thanks for reading and commenting, AP!

Reviewer: AP Signed
Date: February 16 2015

Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - While the Cat's Away...

Well what have we here? 

 



Author's Response:

Good question.  Real good question.  Thanks AP!



Author's Response:

Good question.  Real good question.  Thanks AP!

Reviewer: AP Signed
Date: February 01 2015

Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - The One That Got Away

These two have been through enough. Please let this be a baby and not another disappointment. On another note, Rich does need a girlfriend in the worst way. His story would be a delightful treat 😉.



Author's Response:

If never written a spin-off, but Rich would be perfert fodder for one.  I'll see what comes to me when this story's done.  Thanks AP!

Reviewer: AP Signed
Date: February 23 2015

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[Reviews - 301]
Summary:

She got the guy, the fairytale. But when complications of his new life come to light will she be strong enough to keep him?

 

***Please do not post this story to other sites. I post all my stories here with the intention of publication. I thank you all for your attention :)***



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 129
Read Count: 34241
Published: January 18 2014
Updated: March 31 2015


Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

I'm glad that Roxie's becoming more acclimated to Miami and for the help she's getting from Troy but my spidey senses are tingling with him. He's a little touchy and while he said he has a domestic partner, I'm not sure if I'm convinced. And is there another reason why doesn't go into his office or is he truly just a good guy? Likewise, I can already tell that Rich & Mickey are gonna be a problem. Griffin better listen to what his friend told him. I'm happy to see this story back, thanks and thank you for the quick updates.

Reviewer: AP Signed
Date: December 17 2014

Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

I'm proud of Roxie. She didn't retreat to be all in her feelings. She remained present and was there for her fiance. Rich has already proven himself to be a snake and I can't wait for that head to be chopped off. 



Author's Response:

Yeah! Glad you liked that. Felt natural for her. :D Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: AP Signed
Date: December 18 2014

Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

Thank you for this last treat. Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays! 

Reviewer: AP Signed
Date: December 24 2014

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Summary:

In a world built on blood and violence, where the merciless thrive, falling in love carries with it its own special set of risks.  Never was that truer than for Carter Gerring, an electronics expert with a unique skill-set.  Carter is hired by Larry Hooks, a ruthless underworld kingpin with a number of potential legal problems he wants to disappear.  While eliminating the various forms of incrimination Hooks and his men create, Carter finds himself falling for the boss’s daughter.

 Tamryn Hooks is the much-loved daughter Larry Hooks would gladly kill to protect.  For most of her life, she’s been shielded from many of the harsh realities of her father’s business.  Then, a seemingly innocent favor for her doting father places her in the middle of an impossible situation she sees no way out of.  As Tamryn searches for a solution and an escape, her dilemma is further complicated by an ongoing feud with her sister and her deepening feelings for Carter, the unassuming intellectual with a dark reputation.   

 When Carter and Tamryn find themselves entrenched in the mire of her father’s criminal enterprise, the secrets they and others keep, and their need for one another, will their forbidden love be their saving grace?  Or will it be the Achilles’ heel that ultimately leads to their demise? 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 70686
Read Count: 14883
Published: June 06 2014
Updated: February 01 2015


Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

It's a "d" for me. I love the way your brain works JJ; noone can do it  better justice.



Author's Response:

Aw, thanks AP!!!

Reviewer: AP Signed
Date: February 01 2015

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Summary:

When Annalese Evans agrees to serve as medical staff abroad a corporately owned space station, she finds herself involved in an illicit relationship with the chief researcher and leader of their small team, Dr. Jackson Franco.  With the exception of periodic flares in Dr. Franco’s anger and his ego, all is well with their four-man crew—that is until they rescue a stranded cosmonaut who brings to bear the past Annalese thought she’d left behind.  With his arrival, it soon becomes frighteningly clear that not everyone on board is who they claim to be.  

When Annalese is forced to decide which man to trust, will she choose the man with whom she has shared her bed, or the stranger with the face of the man with whom she once shared her heart?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Psychological, Romance, Science Fiction , Suspense
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 9174
Read Count: 2708
Published: August 04 2014
Updated: September 21 2014


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 - Missing Signals

I know you're currently busy with other updates but I'm missing this and as such, can't wait for more. 



Author's Response:

This story is definitely in the queue.  I'm hoping to back to it in the next few months.  Thanks for your continued interest, AP!

Reviewer: AP Signed
Date: February 01 2015

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Summary:

Sally McDonald is not who anyone thinks. Her life is filled with secrets. Some she doesn't even know about. But when Storm Monsello sees the terrified girl one night, he never expects how much her secrets would reveal the dark actions of the people he trusted the most.  



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Character Death, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 43
Completed:No
Word count: 133222
Read Count: 425793
Published: September 21 2014
Updated: April 26 2020


Title: Chapter 19: Checkers

Good update. Not sure if you realize though but the text is duplicated on this one.

Reviewer: AP Signed
Date: September 02 2015

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.