Penname: Musicluva [Contact]

Real name: Monica

Member Since: March 09 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 11]
Summary:

When Celine's two best friends take her on a wild ride out to Las Vegas, she comes to the realization that something that happen in Vegas are best left there. However, some situations have a tendacy to follow you home. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 2474
Read Count: 3134
Published: April 06 2016
Updated: August 07 2017


Title: Chapter 2: Get The Money

Hmmm. Sebastian sounds pretty smooth 😏. I would be careful if I was Celine though.  I'm thinking that by taking the money, she made herself appear a bit gold-diggerish (especially after her girl Linda just practically attempted to pimp her out) 🤔. Interesting start. 

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 07 2017

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 85]
Summary:

"You have thought about it, haven't you? How it would feel to be with both of us."

"If we do this...promise me that nothing changes. The thought of losing you both..."

Dante took a moment and then nodded. He shifted his gaze to her shoulder and Hope felt Emil grip her tighter, leaning further into her when his mouth brushed her ear and he said.

"This changes nothing."

 

Caution:

MFM Short Story!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Kink, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:Yes
Word count: 4029
Read Count: 15467
Published: April 25 2016
Updated: December 25 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Cast

Wow!  What a conversation to walk in on! Dante better watch his back!  Greate start!



Author's Response:

or jump out of the window, lool! thank you - more to come!

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 25 2016

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Thomas Bedford is actor, rich and handsome. He's got beautiful women, fast cars, and fans begging for selfies. He's looking for something serious now, no more flings, just a woman for him and only him. He meets Misa, a painter who shies away from the limelight. She hasn't been with anyone in almost a year, and this handsome man comes out of nowhere, making her feel new sensations. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 1220
Read Count: 2578
Published: May 02 2016
Updated: May 02 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting start. I'm eager to see where this goes. 

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 03 2016

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 11]
Summary:

Change is coming will she run or embrace it?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 9520
Read Count: 3542
Published: May 02 2016
Updated: May 04 2016


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 7

Interesting story line. Keep it up! Looking forward to your next update. 

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 04 2016

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 35]
Summary:

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One Night Will Change Their Lives Forever.

 

Sexy Banner by Elizablu



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Crackfic, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:Yes
Word count: 9960
Read Count: 13083
Published: May 26 2016
Updated: June 05 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Harvey is HOOOOTTTT!!!

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 26 2016

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Dag!  WTH?!  Was Gladys in on this mess?!?!  Update soon. 

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 29 2016

Retired
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 61]
Summary:

Friendship and love cross paths.  Deacon is VP of the Warrior Crusaders wondering about what the future holds.  Lonilla is drifting through life.  The two slide into a friendship that is more than the connection they feel toward one another.  Will he fulfill is promise?  Can Lonilla value the meaning of love? ADDED PROLOGUE



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 23546
Read Count: 23507
Published: May 27 2016
Updated: March 13 2018


Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 8-Revised

Hmmm. I wonder what's up. Sounds like some ish is abt to go down! 👀

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 31 2016

Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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[Reviews - 185]
Summary:

Coming home can be harder than staying away sometimes.

Home has now been published on Amazon and there's quite a bit more added from where I had originally ended this story. Hope you all enjoy it.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 21
Completed:No
Word count: 21
Read Count: 18591
Published: June 10 2016
Updated: October 06 2016


Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Wow ... that was pretty intense.  😩  I hope Olly will be ok. As a parent myself, I can't even imagine. One thing that wouldn't sit well with me is Alec turning his phone off to have a private moment with his ex. Why turn the phone off ** giving the side eye** ?!?! 🤔



Author's Response:

Hey Musicluva, 

Thanks for the review and yeah, the switching off mobile thing deserves a serious side eye. I liked how you phrased it 'private moment' nobody wants to hear about a private moment when it concerns an ex! I think Charlie did well there.

 

K.

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 05 2016

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 5]
Summary:

 

What happens when a good girl with a serious bad side meets a bad boy with a serious good side?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 8312
Read Count: 6619
Published: July 31 2016
Updated: August 03 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sounds interesting. Update soon. 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 31 2016

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 74]
Summary:

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Pandora Steele is your everyday geek who has never had a guy look at her twice...until she meets Bradley Phillips. Bradley Phillips is tired of the kind of life he leads and searches for something different. He finds her and magical things happen. Tale of Two follows Bradley and Pandora throughout the years as they fight for love but life fights back.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 16278
Read Count: 10791
Published: August 17 2016
Updated: August 29 2016


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Wow!  Games on ... I wonder what Hope has up her sleeve? 😈 Nothing good, obviously! Can't wait for the update. 

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 31 2016

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 52]
Summary:

Morena is a woman who’s completely satisfied with herself. She just got a new job in a new city and her best friend, George, thinks that all she needs now is a man. Morena, though, tries her best not to get involved with anyone until Travis Keegan bumps (awkwardly) into her.

Travis is a handsome, and complicated fashion photographer, whose lust and inexplicable attraction-at-first-sight to Morena changes the plans they both had for their lives.

But Morena has walls around her, and Travis has way too many  issues he needs to work out. So how is it possible for anything to happen between them?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:Yes
Word count: 85792
Read Count: 8832
Published: August 22 2016
Updated: November 27 2016


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: A crack in the wall

Wow! 👀 She chose that time to ask such a question ?!?! 🤔  I'm quite positive she knew they could hear that ish! 💩

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 25 2016

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The elevator's hall

Like it so far. Can't wait to read more. Travis's pic is hot!!!!

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 22 2016

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: The picture on the wall

Yeah, the both of them are truly gone!  Hot update! 😄😍

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Date: August 23 2016

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: The taste of coffee and the power of gravity.

Great update. I suppose I understand Morena's reservations, but I wonder why she decided to go the, "we're just having sex" route before giving things a chance?



Author's Response:

I promise I'll explain that. Have already written it!

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 27 2016

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 125]
Summary:

For a sociopath who killed his step father Jackson "Jack" Ford has a heart of gold despite his tough and cold exterior. However fellow paitent Aaliyah "Al" Nelson diagonosed as a schizophrenic has a heart of glass that's been shattered too many times to count.




Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Psychological
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Dark Fic
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 19024
Read Count: 48479
Published: September 12 2016
Updated: January 20 2018


Title: Chapter 3: THREE

Hmmm, from the way Jackson describes Wilson, I don't trust him. 

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 22 2016

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 133]
Summary:

As a young woman struggles to provide a better life for her and her brother. She first has to face the many challenges that come in her path. One being a big bad wolf.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 5788
Read Count: 15247
Published: September 22 2016
Updated: October 11 2016


Title: Chapter 2: The Beginning

I'm intrigued. Looking forward to more. 

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 22 2016

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 8]
Summary:

One Night Stand (n): Sexual realtionship only lasting one night.

Yeah right google and urban dictionary, yeah fricking right. Tell that to my life.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 7460
Read Count: 3476
Published: December 14 2016
Updated: December 14 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Cast Pictures

Very promising!  Both Nick and Erik are hot!!!

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 15 2016

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 241]
Summary:

The Universe has a funny/morbid way of completely turning your life around.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 24
Completed:Yes
Word count: 92790
Read Count: 32403
Published: December 29 2016
Updated: June 21 2017


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Wow!  I can't believe she up and left her date!  She doesn't even know what Clark's reasoning for being MIA was. I'm pretty surprised that she isn't being a bit more considerate to the person who brought her there. I guess blame it on her being inexperienced maybe?  I'm trying to give her the benefit of the doubt, but was she and Clark even in an exclusive relationship for her to be that upset?  Maybe I've missed something. 

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 15 2017

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Hmmm ... It's hard to tell who should be admitted to Bellview ... Clark, Gabriel, Dena, or all three? Seems Dena has a bit of working on herself to do. I hope they can work it out. Interesting update!

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 28 2017

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 53]
Summary:

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"I’m a reasonable man. I came here, knowing you wouldn’t be able to pay the debt.”

”Then what do you want?”

“You’ve two choices, piccolina. Honour the deal and come with me or I’ll settle the debt. Right here. In blood."



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Smoking Guns & Black Roses - A Mafia Series
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 2118
Read Count: 6995
Published: January 07 2017
Updated: February 05 2017


Title: Chapter 2: Drip...Drop...

Pretty intense intro. Looking forward to more. 



Author's Response:

thank you! more to come and posted :D

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 08 2017

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 125]
Summary:

Twenty-seven year-old Layla Jones made a promise to Dominic Slater ten years ago that she intended to keep. But the night her Step-Father took her innocence was the night she knew she could never keep that promise. Besides, why would Dominic want her if he knew what had been done. So she did the only thing she could do to protect him from that. She ran away and never looked back.

Dominic Slater never forgotten about Layla. In fact, she haunts his dreams and even more so took a piece of him that he could never reclaim without her. So when she comes back into his life, he won't let whatever hurt in the past pull them apart again. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 48063
Read Count: 20928
Published: January 08 2017
Updated: May 09 2017


Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

It's really hard to swallow it when mother's pretend that they don't see what's right in front of them. 😠 I hope she can get away when she turns 18.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. I know it can hard to swallow, but I wanted to write a story that really had a lot of truths in it. I hope you continue to read and just know that Chapter 1 will be updated in the next couple of days.

-Maya

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 10 2017

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

I sure hope Layla doesn't fall off of the wagon, but she shouldn't pass over a great opportunity. I'm rooting for her!



Author's Response:

Please keep rooting for her! She certainly neeeds all the support! :) 

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 12 2017

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Can't wait to see how things  goes down at dinner. Love it so far!!!

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Date: January 23 2017

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

So happy to see Laylah has a successful showing with her art. I sure hope she's careful with Dom. Also, that incident with Jerry was a bit creepy. I hope there's nothing to that. Just be careful girl! 😳👀

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 01 2017

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 82]
Summary:

The typical bag of sugar experiment in 11th Grade made Aurora "Rory" Campbell realize that she liked her friend Sean Sullivan as more than just a friend. (Working Summary)



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 17139
Read Count: 32653
Published: February 05 2017
Updated: November 19 2017


Title: Chapter 1: DECEMBER 2016: HIS RORY

I hope Rory can get herself together. If she has someone she feels she can trust offer help, it would be a hell of a lot better than stripping and working for a boss with benefits. Take the offer girl!  Interesting start. 

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 07 2017

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.