I don't know how you did it but you completely vindicated Alex for me in less then ten sentences. You Go Glen CoCo!!! I glad the guys are protecting themselves and Alex needs to tell her parents off! Job well done

I really try to avoid stories like this, love triangles are the worst they always remind me of One Tree Hill. No matter what I always felt bad for Brooke and in this situation Tyler is Brooke, Alex is Lucas and Lucas is Peyton. I don't agree with Alex's family and friends disregarding Tyler, what he did in the beginning wasn't that bad he never said he didn't love her he said the engagement was premature. I feel like throughout this story Tyler has been fighting blood sweat and finally tears and I'm glad he's choosing himself. Now him having her followed was wrong but all the times Alex lashes out at him about him hurting her it has underlining issues with his mother. Stuff like this makes me sad. I have to go to work tomorrow at 530 and I'm still reading this. lol. You are a gifted storyteller I just wish someone else had Tyler's back that it wasn't so one sided. I mean I like Andre but the 8 year old isn't cutting it for me anymore. The Christmas party was the worst I have been in the position of having a boyfriend care about someone else' well-being than mine so my heart ached for Tyler. Oh and that flashback when Lucas returned her cell phone and they practically flirted was too much for me. Mark my words because this thing with Lucas is gonna take it's turn for the worst mainly because that's how it usually happens in fiction stories. lol This chapter really hurt the worst mainly this line “After we broke up the first time, when I met Lucas I wished I didn’t love you. I knew I could have easily fallen in love with him if I hadn’t been in love with you.” she admitted. Now I have to call bullshit every time Tyler hurt her (BTW: even though he never cheated, verbally abused or hit her just gave her great sex) I am officially TEAM TYLER even if he doesn't end up with her he needs to get his mommy issues solved and get closer to his family cause it sucks that everyone love Alex but treats him second class. I love you Tyler! Now, because I have to see how it ends and your writing skills are so awesome I am going to have to track this story I hate love triangles...you suck lol. 

Wow that was everything I never expected to happen in this chapter. I thought you would tease us for a while longer. The ending quote breaks my heart dude Charley deserves better than what I expect to happen. Shit...

Damn.....

I had to crack my fingers for this one. I don’t know where to begin, your story is life changing. As much as I love watching your story snowball into this epic yet “simple” love story you leave me floored at every turn. When I see that you have updated my heart literally flutters and drops all at the same time. I never know what tear drop size turn you have made that will ripple the ocean of characters you have. The people you have built are so real to me, so authentic to the point that I remember her tears in my life. I have cried those same tears and felt that same anguish. Valerie is my Heroine and she will win all the battles I lost. Battles I lost because I didn’t fight hard enough or was too scared of loosing to know when it was okay to let go. You are an amazing story teller and I am in awe of your efforts. I want to be the writer you are, how you take your readers on adventures out of their own lives even if its but for a short amount of time and I always strive to do that.

On to the story, I have been eager to review for the last three chapters first but I wanted to get the full picture first. Valerie is so brave but I wish she would share more of her struggles and be honest OUT LOUD about what really happened between her and George. I feel like we keep getting these bits and pieces of a horrible person but some of his “good” qualities that can be seen in Henry also. I don’t think that Valerie is a sad person, she has been beat down her entire life she doesn’t know how to win. It worries me how Henry can tell her anything can tell her anything but I love you and then leaves her high and dry when he KNOWS she has been hurt before. These two have to grow to be who they need to be for each other or they wont make it at all as a couple. That growth is going to come with pain and tears before we get to the rainbows and smiles. Valerie needs this so she can learn she is all she’s needs to make it.

Trust and believe your work is worth far more than publication and I would buy it. I know on your tumblr you post pictures of the characters, is there a way we can see that Ella, Peter or even that scumbag George looks like. When you update I am inspired to keep writing, thank you. BTW when do you think we will know the full story about Val and George, for some strange reason I feel like he may have died. I don’t know why I would think that, not that you eluded to that or anything lol. If not will he ever appear in the story? You probably had no intentions of doing this but can you tell Henry’s side of things at least for a brief moment in time. I just want to get inside his head to see what he’s thinking. One girl on fanfiction.net wrote a story in pov that was so HAUTE she had to write another in the other character’s pov. I don’t know if you want to do that but it’s just an idea. Happy Hunting!

I have been waiting for this momen for a long time! I had faith in both parties! What happened in the hospital between Sasha and Dmitri needed to happen in order for both of them to love the other the way they deserve. I was holding my breath when she and Carter ended things. I thought  to myself as I read this is how a man should love and treat a woman even if the feelings aren't reciprocated. I never had a problem with the pictures you posted that was set three years later. I don't think you should have explained yourself at all. If you really thought you should have I believe you did that when you explained her toned appearance. With Dmitri being as fine as he is it'll be hard to explain that. Lmao. Once again you were magnificent. May Love and Peace surround you.

PS: Can grandpa come to the wedding???

I almost didn't believe it when I saw the update! That was a fast paced chapter I feel like everything hit boom: Monica confrontation; boom: Aut Neema; boom: almost attempted suicide then finally the Jake/Sierra reunion which I didn't see as a completely positive thing because they aren't confronting the real issues. Both are indulging in physical comfort which I wouldn't have a problem with expect for the fact that Jake is still with Monica. I knew where she was coming from when she went after Sierra but it doesn't excuse the fact that she did it. I just want That butthole to go down! Vic needs to get a switch from a tree and take his whooping like a man. 

Good start...I really enjoy Selena's character. 

Keep going I need a resolution for Bailey...I need some type of extensive background on all the characters because the phrase "I havent been happy in four years isn't working for me" 

This is the Tess I like to see! Go Girl!!! No does mean no that could be considered attempted rape so Honi just needs to bow down.

I just want to say that I think you've grown from Tess and Jay. The sequel was well done and I feel like you're taking your time allowing both characters to have some breathing room. I can't stress enough how excited I am for you to update. I like how you played around with character reaction this time around. What about Jay's dad? When is the baby coming? It's been two years! They need a little Jada or Jason, maybe???? Can you also tell the story from "Ho-ni's" point of view? Is she gonna be like single white female and try to replace Tess? I saw that on lifetime today. Or maybe she could try to turn Jay against Tess I don't know I'm just throwing that out there no pressure lol.

I like the pace you set for this story. Elise and Lukas are moving a painfully slow pace filled with sexual tension. I'm having a praise moment that Elise is embracing work ethic and all that comes along with it. I still want her to get rid of the kitten heels but Rome wasn't built in a day. Update when you can